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Jordan Turbeville

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English Teacher. Author (ALL IS FAIR - Champagne Book Group). Editor. Reader.

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Allison Alexander @aealexander.bsky.social · 15/03/2026
While we're all waiting for results of the contest, let's play! Fill out this form for your novel's title to potentially throw down! The form will be open till end of day Tuesday. (This is just for fun. Winner gets bragging rights.) forms.gle/QcoBAePTgXLJ... #RevPit #RevPitWaiting
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#RevPitWaiting Title Bracket
While we wait for RevPit editors to choose their winners, we're sending your novel titles into the ring! If you would like your novel's title (the one you submitted to this year's RevPit) to be…
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 12/03/2026
First line of #pirateWIP: “Ambriel!” The disgustingly handsome captain called across the deck of the Sea Witch. Last line I’ve written: “So you’re saying ___ wants us to find his mate for him?” Ambriel asked. “The mate he treated so poorly she was hidden inside a ___?”
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 12/03/2026
@reviseresub.bsky.social just submitted! Good luck to everyone!
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2025
Want a cool villain origin story? It’s easy! Take two self-absorbed parents, add an enhancement provided by the government, throw in a dash of memory alterations, and marry the man your parents sold you to for breeding. You too can be pushed to the brink of madness! #YA #SF #D #E
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2025
Ambriel🌊 wants Kasen, who wants her ☠️ Rayne doesn’t want to hear Ambriel talk about Kasen’s 🍆 again. Jessamin wants everyone to leave her TF alone, but also maybe she wants Channing? Channing wants Lennox⚫️ to stay away from Ambriel, who wants Kasen. #UnhingedPit #A #F #WIP
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2025
Your dad got ☠️ and everyone blames him. You’re trying to solve it, but are out of your depth. Your childhood best friend shows up after being MIA for 10 years and invites you to dinner in his haunted house. The house starts to eat people. #H #A #WIP #UnhingedPit
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2025
If Taylor Swift’s “Look What You Made Me Do” “Vigilante Shit” and “Who’s Afraid of Little Old Me” got together for brunch, but their friend “This Love” showed up to add a side quest, you’d get this book. #UnhingedPit #F #A #Q
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 10/03/2025
Another happy client! Hearing my edits and suggestions helped someone always makes me smile. Reach out if you’re looking for an editor!
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 24/02/2025
Two amazing emails in my inbox!
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Remarkable Young Women Project @megorra.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
Rediscover history’s young, forgotten female heroes in this educational and empowering standalone with series potential. 📜 Diverse histories 📜 Forgotten figures 📜 Inspiring women #NF #Q #YA #QuestPit
Illustrated cover with designs of various women in historic cultural dress 
A gold cover reads: An Agents Guide to: Remarkable Young WomenIllustrated full figures of young women from various cultures accompanied by text briefly describing their significance
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Brandon Love @blovewrites.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
17 is hard, but when you're set to take over presidency from your father, survive a ☠️ attempt, are betrayed by the two you love & learn your role is to maintain peace by keeping 200yo lies & manipulating the public or start the biggest war in centuries, 17 is REALLY hard. #QuestPit #Q #YA #SF #LGBT
Dystopian, manipulation, hidden knowledge, The Alpha Project
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Emilia Young | Author @emiliayoung.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
Agent’s Guide to “Mark of a Magpie”! 📖🐦‍⬛ When a small-town thief crosses paths with the kingdom’s big-shot assassin, an unlikely partnership is born; but can their goals align before their egos and secrets land them both a spot on the gallows? #QuestPit #Q #YA #F #R #RF #agentsguide #amquerying
An agent’s guide to: “Mark of a Magpie”
YA Romantic Fantasy
119k Words

Behind the text is a piece of parchment paper surrounded by ocean water and gold flower outlines.Blurb:

One for Sorrow, Two for Joy, Three for a Girl, Four for a Boy…
Ryn is a small-town thief with a knack for being overconfident in her abilities, but by day she’s a beloved tavern girl with the liver of steel that carries her reputation. On her most daring break-in yet, she runs face first into the kingdom’s last living assassin, Seven, and he’s just offered her the opportunity of a century: a ticket of attendance to the King’s upcoming courtship gathering. It’s a partnership she’d definitely be a fool to take up, but desperation fuels ever decision she makes.
Five for Silver, Six for Gold…
Seven is set in his own plans, however much they interfere with hers, and they won’t be the only ones in attendance with hidden agendas. When the castle goes into lockdown, it’s survival of the cunning and silver-tongued. The rich are dropped like flies, and all suspicions are on them.
Seven for a Secret, Never to be Told.

The text is on a piece of parchment paper, with ocean water and gold flower outlines behind it. Tropes:
Thief x Assassin
Mental Health Rep
Identity vs Duty
Class Difference
Forced Proximity 
Secret Code
Morally Gray
Women’s Wrongs
Unlikely Allies to Lovers

Text is on a piece of parchment paper. Besides the text are two headshot drawings: one of a girl with brown hair pulled back by braids, and the other of a black-haired boy with a worried expression. Behind the parchment paper are ocean waters with gold flower outlines. The Atmosphere:
There is a collage of pictures on a parchment paper. Picture one is of a boy crouched down with his head covered as a fire burns in the background. Picture two is of two hands tied to a pole on the beach. Picture three shows a person wrapping up the wounded hand of another. Picture four shows an old piece of parchment with unreadable script. Picture five is of an island with a castle and small village surrounding it. Picture six is of a girl on the run with a dagger in hand.

Behind the collage of pictures are ocean waters, with gold flower outlines surrounding it.
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Gwend💫lyn Vines @gwenvines.academics.blue · 12/02/2025
ARCANE x DON'T LET THE FOREST IN 🧑‍🎓cut-throat postgrad academia w/ ⚛️engineering magic 🤌obsessive yearning 🚨unreliable narrator 📻corrupted magic tech 🩺ethical dilemmas 🩻body horror 🏆dangerous magic duels 🛠️blacksmith biceps 🌿strange plants 👤...& the strange man who ❤️s them #questpit #Q #A #F #SF #H
A moodboard in dark tones, featuring a painting of a blond man with chin length hair in a green shirt at the center, with an X drawn across his face through which an xray of his skull can be seen. The images around him are of a university campus with gothic architecture, dark flowers and ferns, chemistry glassware, a ring of sparks, a river delta, machinery, anatomical images, and a smithy.

Text on it reads "THE BODY ABHORS A STRAIGHT LINE. FATE DOES NOT STRIKE IN A STRAIGHT LINE."
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𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐫 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐠 🍃 @charscrawls.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
🎸 daisy jones x knives out 🗡️ the songstress, the high-flyer, the gambler, the sweetheart, the watcher, the matriarch and the rogue. seven suspects. one the killer of renowned rockstar sam corvi. but who? only they can tell you #questpit #Q #A #LF #MY
a moodboard detailing nine images related to my book ALL THE DEVILS aka devilswip. in order from right to left they are: london notably the landmark big ben, a band performing on stage, a sheet of music, a record store, the silhouette of a rockstar, some musical instruments scattered on a bed, two men running, a pile of evidence and finally a hand holding a cigarette
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B. van Bodegom 📃is AGENTED @bvbodegom.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
CABIN IN THE WOODS X JOHN DIES AT THE END X KNIVES OUT When their detective friend is murdered during their annual gaming retreat, 5 dads must use their years of TTRPG experience—and puns—to solve the crime before they're all killed off like NPCs in a badly-written campaign. #QuestPit #A #H #MY #W
moodboard layout with 9 squares 3 x 3, 6 have over the top terrified men (the dads), along the top and bottom 3 squares. Blood decal drips from top squares through the middle to the bottom ones. A Victorian mansion silhouette sits in the middle most left square, the title DAD BODIES in the middle, and right of that is the silhouette of a d20 with a skull icon showing.
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
Ambriel finds out she’s the daughter of Delmar, Ancient of the Sea and Sky. Her dad wants absolute power. There’s one item she can find to stop him. The biggest problem? Her crew. #questpit #W #A #F
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
PEAKY BLINDERS X A FATE INKED IN BLOOD A notorious criminal is chosen to compete to become the tyrant king’s new bride, but ☠️ him would be a lot more fun. 🖤 #questpit #A #Q
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 11/02/2025
Received the sweetest testimonial tonight! If you’re on the fence about reaching out for edits, maybe this will change your mind!
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 08/02/2025
Do you love SUPERNATURAL? Do you wish it had more romance? Buy my book! www.amazon.com/All-Fair-Vam...
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All is Fair: Vampires, Werewolves, Hot Guys, Oh My!
All is Fair: Vampires, Werewolves, Hot Guys, Oh My! - Kindle edition by Turbeville, Jordan. Paranormal Romance Kindle eBooks @ Amazon.com.
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 29/12/2024
An edit and edit letter of your first three chapters returned to you in less than one week! All I ask in return is a testimonial. Send me a request and let’s get started! docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1F...
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 02/01/2025
Yesterday, I received two 3 chapter partials and a full manuscript. Today, I returned edits and an edit letter for one of the partials. Publishing is a waiting game; receiving edits doesn’t have to be! docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1F...
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 30/01/2025
It’s Wednesday! AKA, WIP WEDNESDAY. #WritingCommunity #WednesdaySnippet #PirateWIP
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Deanna Winters is Querying @deannaunwritten.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
After her brutal murder at the hands of a death cult, Ginevra awakens in a body not her own-a doll like vessel designed as a weapon. But when the truth of her identity unravels, she discovers her greatest challenge may be defining exactly who-or what-she is. #2025pit #A #F
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John Zeleznik @johnzeleznikauthor.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
IT X The Riverman: Max wrestles with a eldritch horror while trying to ID this girl and why she’s in 2 photos taken years apart while trying to connect her to the local legend: a serial killer cult leader and the 7 girls he murdered. #YA #H #2025Pit
Clockwise from top left: the girl in the picture, creepy house, fire monster, creepy woods, black bird and an abandoned factory.
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Elaine Buckner @elainebuckner.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
Luna's rearview mirror reflects a shattered life, but Thornfield Hotel's opulent facade promises a fresh start. As concierge, she's swept into a world of secrets, seduction, & murder, with the enigmatic E. Rochester at its center & her heart & survival in the crosshairs. #2025PIT #A #LF #R #H #T
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Jon 𝔦𝔫𝔠𝔢𝔫𝔰𝔢𝔭𝔲𝔫𝔎 James @spaceyjdjames.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
Wayward Children X Wings of Fire Trapped in a world once frequented by her late father, far from her grieving family–and sixth grade–Eeda and her new insectile faerie friend must enlist the help of the land’s dragon gods to stop a war and return home…if she even wants to. #2025Pit #MG #F
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H. L. Docherty (Updates Only) @hldocherty.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
#2025pit Romeo & Juliet meets The Hunger Games in this dual-POV romantic fantasy. A fiery, slum-dwelling rebel & a guilt-ridden aristocrat find forbidden love amid a brutal uprising, hidden magic, & deadly monsters that could destroy them both. #NA #F #R 🥀LGBTQ+ & Mental Health Rep
"On the surface, I smiled. I kept shoving thoughts down in to the hollowness that had opened inside me, but the harder I pushed, the more something else cracked. Pretending that everything was fine was choking something vital, something buried deep. But I kept smiling, hoping whatever I was strangling wouldn't suffocate completely."
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
GIDEON THE NINTHxFFXIV When magicless Mick agrees to be an adventuring partner for Eleanor, his mage best friend (and crush), a mishap turns him into a dragon and binds him to the gods' dead adversary. Now they're rushing to break his curse before his existence triggers a war. #2025pit #F #R #A
Top left: A figure plays a violin in a dark room. The image is shot in such a way that only the violin and one of the player's hands is visible.
Center left: A man stands in darkness; his head is on fire.
Bottom left: A wireframe of a dragon against a bright orange background
Top/mid center: Alphonse Mucha's Emerald, featuring a woman staring intensely at the viewer as she leans against the head of a snarling serpent. A white line is drawn straight through the image to neatly divide the woman's head from the serpent's.
Bottom center: The Lovers, from the Art Nouveau Tarot deck, featuring a couple just about to kiss. The card is lying on a white space, surrounded by red/white roses.
Top right: A figure in white robes wanders through a very green forest.
Center right: A bolt of lightning arcs above a mountain range in a very violet sky.
Bottom right: A black hole swirls in a sea of violet stars and nebulae.
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B. van Bodegom 📃is AGENTED @bvbodegom.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
TREASURE PLANET X STARFIELD When Jak finds an ancient wrist computer with his new friend Eris—a tech prodigy—he couldn't have guessed it would tear him from his home on a pirate space station to an interstellar quest for answers about his dad's legacy, old mysteries & himself. #2025Pit #YA #SF #M
An industrial space station hallway, with the title of the book and the undertitle. JAK STERZAND: ESCAPE FROM FREEPORT
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Vee Haacke 🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍⚧️ is querying! @goddessvicky.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
💫 CROWNED IN LIGHT 💫 NICK AND NORAH'S INFINITE PLAYLIST X RAVEN CYCLE SERIES 🌹Romance/Romantasy 👨‍👨‍👧Polyamory ❤️‍🔥Slow Burn 👨‍👨‍👦‍👦Found Family ⚖️Gods & Goddesses 🎵Music! ♿Diversity 🏳️‍🌈LGBTQIA+ 💖Soul Mates ✨Magical Realism Agent's guide included 📖 #2025Pit #Q #A #YA #R #NA #F #RF #SPEC #SPF #LGBT #OV
A photo collage that features a woman wearing a crown, a college campus, a hand playing the guitar, piano keys, and a pair of bloody knucklesA photo that reads:
Crowned In Light
A literary agent's guide to the first book in the Crowned Series
As 85k word Urban Speculative Romance/Romantasy
First three books are finished, edited, and ready to query!
This one has it all!
- Magical Realism
- Slow Burn
- Found Family
- Gods and Goddesses
- Music Heavy
- Soul Mates / Past Lives
- Strong Female Friendships
- Disability/BIPOC representation
- DAVID BOWIE?!?!A photo that reads:
The Pitch!
It’s the end of a hot Iowan summer, and twenty-four-year-old Matilda West is gearing up for her sophomore year of college at Oak Ridge University. A scholarship student, she is swayed by the suggestion of her favorite professor to join a study group he’s created for his Classical Mythology course. The students in the group adopt her quickly, but Matilda’s past has made her wary and anxious of new people and their intentions.
When she finds herself drawn toward two of the people in the group, including an unexplainable feeling like she’s met one of them before, Matilda is thrown in the middle of a situation she couldn’t have seen coming. Weird dreams and the fact that her life might not be what she thought it was force Matilda to question whether her fate was already decided, or if someone else is pulling the strings…  How does one juggle school work, healing trauma, finding love, and supporting a diverse community, while also fighting for their fate and the rest of the world? A photo that reads:
For Fans of: 
Nick and Norah's Infinite Playlist
Maggie Stiefvater
Richelle Mead
Laurell K Hamilton

Adults over the age of 18 whp enjoy a world sprinkled with mythology and More, and fantasy rooted in reality.
Reader who enjoy diverse, complex characters, especially LGBTQIA+ characters, those with disabilities, and those deailing with PTSD and trauma in an honest and real way.
Romance Readers who enjoy things like friends to loves, enemies to friends, slow burn, found family, angst with a happy ending, and polyamory.

Playlist:
Have I Found My Home by Paden
What A Good Woman Does by Joy Williams
Dear Happy by Gabrielle Aplin
Breathe Me by Sia
Stuck In My Head by Blue Eyes
Silence by Marshmello & Khalid
The World We Made by Ruelle
Like That by JP Saxe
Safe Place by RuthAnne
Hurts Like Hell by Fleurie & Tommee Profitt
Somebody Loved by The Weepies
For You by Angus & Julia Stone
Past Life by Morgan St Jean
Atlas: Heart by Sleeping At Last
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Jessica DeLand - Author (is getting published! 😱) @delandjessica.bsky.social · 24/01/2025
Fantasy fugitives kidnap a ballerina w/ a panic disorder for their leader’s magic in her, but though they threaten her family so she'll live w/ them until it can be returned & forbid ballet school, she risks everything after she bonds w/ them & falls for 1 #YouDeservepIt #Q #YA #RF #FR #F #R #M #ND
Mood board with glowing magic in cupped hands, a teenage girl looking at her phone while chewing her nails, hands bound in rope, a ballerina balanced on one leg, someone spying through a window, teenage boys glaring at each other, five headshots with a teenage girl in the center of two teenage boys and two men, magic swirling around a puckered mouth, bared vampire fangs, and a silhouette of an embracing couple looking at each other. A badge reading "Killer Nashville Claymore Finalist" is in front of the pictures in the upper left quadrant.
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Rawiya Beirut | راوية بيروت @rawiyabeirut.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
WHTF X THE STARDUST THIEF Almas must outwit an ancient evil & unite a war-torn land—but her secrets may kill her first. ✨ Middle Eastern-inspired w/ Arab mythology ✨ Unique magic system ✨ Found family ✨ Quest for lost secrets ✨ Slowburn romance w/ fake marriage trope #2025Pit #F #YA #A #crossover
Photo collage for my pitch in #2025Pit. From Left to right: Frederick Goodall's Passionate encounter painting, Pierre Bellet’s Arab Girl Playing Music painting, Miguel Vico Hernández’s "Women in Arab bath" painting, Adolf Seel’s Bathhouse painting, Stanisław von Chlebowski’s Study of a Khanjar painting, Ferdinand Max Bredt’s Girl Playing Lute painting, Antonio Fabres’s Arab Sentinel painting, and finally, in the background, Auguste Veillon’s Women carrying water by the Nile painting.
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Brandon Love @blovewrites.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
17 is hard, but when you're set to take over presidency from your father, survive a ☠️ attempt, are betrayed by the two you love & learn your role is to maintain peace by keeping 200yo lies & manipulating the public or start the biggest war in centuries, 17 is REALLY hard. #2025Pit #Q #YA #SF #LGBTQ
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Abigail is Agented @abigailwadlington.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
An agent’s guide to my YA Tangled x Anastasia cozy fantasy, THE FORGOTTEN REALM, feat: 🪻Disability and LGBTQ rep 🧚Swiss folklore ✨Found family 🎊Whimsical festivities 🐶A really cute dog Querying in March! #litagents #YA #F #2025Pit #agentsguide
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John W Treviño @johnwtrevino.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
🔥 FIX YOU 🔥 🔥 Latina Representation 🔥 Catholic High School 🔥 Enemies to Lovers 🔥 Sapphic Love Triangle 🔥 Slow Burn 🔥 Mental Health Rep 🔥 Passionate Sports Girl 🔥 Serial Killers 🔥 Love Conquers All 🔥 Cooper the Corgi #2025Pit #YA #agentsguide #litagents
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Jill Robinson @firstdraftdotblog.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
VOX x CLOUD CUCKOO LAND A pure, breedable female, Cybele is kidnapped and offered as a prize in a gladiatorial contest. When she convinces her assigned companion to search for her family, it leads to a deadly confrontation with her former captor and a dark, hidden truth. FRAGILE #2025Pit #A #D
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mar is querying ☁️🏜️ @margreyfield.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
#Agents if you like the martial competition and political intrigue of AN EMBER IN THE ASHES, the forbidden romance and family loyalty themes of THESE VIOLENT DELIGHTS, and the E2L banter of FOURTH WING, I have a book for you! ❤️‍🔥 Slow burn 🎭 Secret identity 🔪 Morally grey FMC #F #R #RM #2025pit
you're a weapon and weapons don't weep
smoke drifting from a hand
a colosseum
misty mountaintops
someone touching a woman's chin
a huge cavern
a woman wielding a sword
a cloaked figure in a foggy forest
a woman's arm being grabbed
light pouring through a cave
nobody is coming to save you. get up
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Eliwood S(pooky) Ghost @eliwoodsgheist.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
DRESDEN FILES X GRAVITY FALLS Girl meets boy. Girl meets monsters. Girl has to save the town. Sometimes what you don't know can kill you in Bludeye Beach. 👧Character driven 🫂Found family 💕Slow burn romance 👻Monster menagerie #2025pit #A #Q #H #F
A tourism style poster showing several bright and cheerful images of sandy beaches and people playing in the water. The bottom image is a smiling girl with big red X's over her eyes. Over the collage are the words "Welcome to Bludeye Beach", and over that text a graffiti style phrase "something is wrong in bludeye beach"
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Sally Bromley @sallybromley.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
In WWI Sussex, when a petty criminal is gutted like a fish & his cousin accused of the murder, tales of forbidden love, the infamous Fowler Gang & the suffragettes, bleed together, staining the River Arun red. #2025Pit #Q #A #HF
Images of Peaky Blinders, a dead fish, man&woman kissing, two women kissing and a WWI soldier.
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Jordan Turbeville @sweettwrites.bsky.social · 27/01/2025
#2025Pit #A #F PEAKY BLINDERS x QUEEN ESTHER x A FATE INKED IN BLOOD Blessed by darkness & practiced in deception, Mina has the skills to ☠️the king. Chosen for the Lottery, she’s got the opportunity. When she learns of a plot to ruin her homeland, she must choose between her vengeance or her people.
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Sol Zerrudo, chaotically queer 💜 @solzerrudo.bsky.social · 24/01/2025
Putting my #agentsguide to my dark sapphic romcom with thriller elements here 🖤 KILLING EVE x MY SISTER, THE SERIAL KILLER x RED, WHITE & ROYAL BLUE! An asthmatic klutz and an unhinged mafiosa break up and accidentally start a mob war. Hilarities ensue 😈 ( #amquerying thread) #P2Ppit #Q #A #R #C
Jackie, Don’t Leave Me! by Sol Zerrudo: An Agent’s GuideGenre, Dark Sapphic Romcom with thriller elements. Pitch: An asthmatic klutz breaks up with her mafiosa girlfriend and ends up having the Italian mafia coming after her, determined to get the two of them back together, dead or alive. Comparative titles: My Sister the Serial Killer by Oyinkan Braithwaite, Red White & Royal Blue by Casey McQuiston, Dial A for Aunties by Jesse Sutanto, and Killing Eve.Tropes for Jackie, Don’t Leave Me!: toxic exes, but funny; campy comedy; delicious cat-and-mouse; lovers-to-enemies-to-lovers (sort of); sapphic; dark humor (no, really); unhinged FMC; unbridled chaos; support women’s wrongs™. This book is for fans of: sapphic romance; darkly funny thrillers; cinematic, binge-worthy books; campy humor; stories with queer joy; genre-bendy fun!Snippet: Chapter One, “Veronica, I want to break up.” My girlfriend dropped the dead body we were dragging and it fell to the ground. I followed suit, dropping my hold on the torso. It rolled on damp soil with a muted, wet thud.
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Taylor Renee @taylorrenee.bsky.social · 24/01/2025
Would you choose immortality? #youdeservepit I present to you House of Valentine. My adult dark gothic fantasy with comparables to the Hunger Games, Interview with a Vampire and a twinge of Romeo and Juliet. Blurb, Moodboard, and journal excerpt included: #A #Q #F #amquerying #querying
A moodboard with a cozy, vintage aesthetic labeled ‘House of Valentine Moodboard’ at the center in elegant cursive text. Surrounding it are nine sections:
	1.	Open books with text in a serif font, layered on each other.
	2.	A picturesque village nestled in a lush green valley surrounded by mountains.
	3.	A minimalistic green wall with a framed painting, books, and candles arranged neatly on a table.
	4.	A wooden bookshelf filled with old, worn books in dim lighting.
	5.	Close-up of antique books with leather-bound covers in shades of green and brown, with visible gold detailing on the spines.
	6.	A café setting with small wooden tables, coffee, pastries, and an open book resting on one of the tables.
	7.	Handwritten text on sepia-toned paper, evoking a sense of nostalgia.
	8.	A person wearing red knit fingerless gloves and a cream sweater, touching a tree trunk with an attached piece of text. 

The centersquare says house of valentine mood boardA dark, moody moodboard labeled ‘House of Valentine Moodboard’ at the center in elegant cursive text. Surrounding it are nine sections:
	1.	A hand with clawed nails dragging across wooden floorboards, leaving deep scratches.
	2.	Text on a textured background that reads, ‘When Night Comes’ in a serif font.
	3.	A close-up of a golden, cat-like eye with a vertical slit pupil, surrounded by shadowed skin.
	4.	A wide-open mouth with sharp, pointed fangs
	5.	A grand ballroom scene filled with people in elegant historical attire, dancing beneath ornate chandeliers.
	6.	A hand with long, deep red nails holding a glass of dark red wine
	7.	The word ‘Run’ written in bold serif font on a completely black background
	8.	A dagger with intricate designs on the hilt resting next to a single stemmed rose and a torn piece of paper with faded text.Writing in a old journal looking page:

"If you could live for hundreds of centuries—through famine and plague, through wars that razed cities and left ash in their wake, that not even a bomb crashing through your home could destroy you—would you choose immortality? 
Wouldn’t you dream of such a gift? To remain as you were as the world crumbles around you, and rebuilds itself, endlessly? 
Of course you would.
That’s the allure, isn’t it? The whispered fantasy of endless time, of infinite existence.
But let me tell you: 
it’s a lie. A cruel, promise.
Because after enough centuries, you begin to wish for the plague to ravage your body, to tear through your flesh and wring you dry of life. You begin to long for the bomb to shatter you, burn away your skin until you’re nothing but bone and ash. You’d pray for the famine to hollow you out, for hunger to gnaw at your insides so violently that you might finally collapse under the weight of mortality.
Because the hunger you live with—
No, the hunger that you are—is worse."
-- Excerpt From Soren Valentine's JournalWhen anthropology student Hazel Adler travels to a remote Swiss village for her thesis, she expects folklore and forgotten traditions—not a hidden world of vampires, deadly politics, and a centennial festival that’s more nightmare than celebration. She was never meant to survive it.

Her only lifeline? Soren Valentine—a vampire with a past as blood-soaked as his fangs.

As the lines between myth and reality blur, Hazel must fight to survive in more ways than one. Trusting Soren may be her only chance—but the monster who saved her life hides dangerous secrets of his own. Survival means risking everything.

House of Valentine is a romantic gothic fantasy filled with sharp fangs, fragile alliances, and a slow-burn romance that will leave you breathless.
When anthropology student Hazel Adler travels to a remote Swiss village for her thesis, she expects folklore and forgotten traditions—not a hidden world of vampires, deadly politics, and a centennial festival that’s more nightmare than celebration. She was never meant to survive it.

Her only lifeline? Soren Valentine—a vampire with a past as blood-soaked as his fangs.

As the lines between myth and reality blur, Hazel must fight to survive in more ways than one. Trusting Soren may be her only chance—but the monster who saved her life hides dangerous secrets of his own. Survival means risking everything.

House of Valentine is a romantic gothic fantasy filled with sharp fangs, fragile alliances, and a slow-burn romance that will leave you breathless.
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fabs is editing/drafting + brainstorming 🫣✨ @simplyfabs.bsky.social · 24/01/2025
#youdeservepit #DRAFTING #EDITING #WIP #R #DR #SOUTHASIANFMC #LATINOMMC VICIOUS PRINCE X RECKLESS X GOD OF FURY X KING OF SLOTH Every villain needed his muse.
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Katie Collan @kancollan.bsky.social · 24/01/2025
LEGENDBORN x AVATAR: THE LAST AIRBENDER Either she fulfills her family's legacy, or she dies with it. 🤸‍♀️ Badass female protagonist 💧🪨🔥🌪️ Elemental magic system 🌆 Urban fantasy in NYC 🫂 Found Family 🗡️ Magic competition 🌈 Diverse ensemble cast #Q #YA #F #YouDeservepIt
Alt text: A title card with the text "An Agent's Guide to THE WINDWALKER - Katie Collan - young adult urban fantasy 105,000 words" over a person with a red cloak standing in the middle of a grassy field.Comparative titles with arrows pointing to relevant descriptions. Titles include: LEGENDBORN by Tracy Deonn, A DEADLY EDUCATION by Naomi Novik, Nickelodeon's animated series AVATAR: THE LAST AIRBENDER.

Captions:

Legendborn: "mysterious death of a parent", "strong themes of prejudice"

ATLA: "elemental hard magic system"

ATLA, A Deadly Education: "diverse ensemble (would rather die than get along)"

All three: "magic rooted in culture"Pitch: "When fighters start disappearing from an underground tournament, a sixteen-year-old participant with wind powers must uncover the tournament's secrets before she loses a match and shares their fate."A mood board featuring six panels with a corresponding color palette in the center. from left to right, top to bottom: a panel divided into four to represent each of the main elements (water, earth, fire, air); a skyline view of nighttime Manhattan; a red-haired girl in front of a gritty backdrop with the caption "Jewish air user"; a dimly-lit underground tunnel with the caption "underground entrance", accentuated by an arrow pointed to the final panel; a NYC subway track with the caption "hidden in plain sight", the arrow cutting through the image; a boxing ring that depicts two people practicing punches beyond the ropes.
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Lavender Leonidas is querying & writing @authorlavleo.bsky.social · 24/01/2025
#youdeservepit #Q #A #F #R #FR When everything Belan learned about vampires turns out to be a lie, deciding whether or not to trust a handsome vampire lord is more than just a life or death decision- her research, the mysteries of her childhood, and her heart are all on the line.
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Dawn Berkoski @dawnberkoski.bsky.social · 24/01/2025
PITCH: In a world controlled by corporate vampires, two men struggle for autonomy. Will a chance meeting lead them to freedom~or a web of subterfuge, where every thread brings a monster offering death or permanent confinement? #YouDeservepIt 📖 💙📚 #Q #R Power Hungry CEO x Abandoned Puppy Bartender

Comp Board 

I Am Chosen by Dawn Berkoski

PITCH: In a world controlled by corporate vampires, two men struggle for autonomy. Will a chance meeting lead them to freedom, or a web of subterfuge, where every thread brings a monster offering death or permanent confinement?

Power Hungry CEO x Abandoned Puppy, Bartender

COMP TITLES
Interview With The Vampire 
A Blue Bloods Novel
YakuzaI Am Chosen
By Dawn Berkoski
77,000 M/M Paranormal Romance
Dark and a little spicy meets silly-sweet

Think: 
Blue Bloods (minus the angels and school) x Interview With The Vampire (add more humor) x Japanese Yakuza (cracking skulls in London)

Tropes
*  Forbidden Love
*  Fish Out of Water
*  Forced Proximity
*  Dark Secrets
*  Unequal Power Structure
*  High Action Chase Scenes
*  Emotional Growth Arcs + Satisfying End

Quotes

"He was leaving. He was leaving New York for good. But instead of freedom, he wondered if he was headed toward greater danger."
~Jason Allard (Protagonist)

"Now that he has chosen you, Alexander has all but forsaken our protection!"
~Tristan De La Salle (Thwarted Lover)

"Alexander and I have unfinished business."
-Shigekazu (Japanese Business Rival)

MAIN CHARACTERS
Alexander Grant	Jason Allard
CEO of M-Corp	       Bartender
Control Issues	       Anxiety/Clingy
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Power + Money.       Video Games +PizzaSeveral photos are shown in this Moodboard for I Am Chosen, a paranormal romance written by Dawn Berkoski. From the top left, a glass of aged scotch surrounded by butterscotch candies, a CEO standing in a high rise office, staring out a window, a giant hotel clock surrounded by Christmas decor, a photo of art depicting demons rising from hell, a sunset with black, billowy clouds hovering over an orange stripe, a dirty cement staircase near a darkened entrance, and the city of London as viewed from the river. Photography, except the man, by Dawn BerkoskiPhoto by Dawn Berkoski of a car speeding past a cemetery.View is from the driver’s perspective, looking out the side window.
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