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Jax Devora (is writing)

@jaxdevora.bsky.social
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Any pronoun + ace/bi. Fantasy writer toying with worlds. Nerds out about FFXIV, media history, lost media, and bees. Owner of @beenjaminatlarge.bsky.social, writing partner and bee at large. Free stories and monthly updates: jaxdevora.beehiiv.com

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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 55m
- Edits on both WIPs' chapter 3; send those to readers and catch up on comments. - Little bit of cleaning today. :')
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 55m
I was out all day yesterday with friends, so today's a lazy day/catch-up day. On tabs: - Catch up with FaveLineFriday posts. - At least look at the tags for the games I'm participating in. - Decide if I want to work on TNS chapter 4 rewrites, TNS chapter 21, or Beeslingers chapter 4, and do it.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
Mick would try to find somebody who knows the spirit, learn from them, and basically do something similar. It's just instead of cakes, he'd probably make a shareable dish, as that's *dragon* culture, and he'd be playing ambassador and all. Arthur would just. Bring tea. Because it's a tea party.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
#Octember Honeysuckle is the easiest here, because offerings to a nature being are already part of zizzun culture. She'd just adjust traditions to accommodate her guest of honor: honey cakes that work in special to the spirit, such as apples for an orchard spirit, acorns for forests, and so on.
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Dominique (Philosophika) @philosophika.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
Oh, don't worry! It is! :'D :'D :'D
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
Thank you! :D
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
Thank you! It's currently a placeholder, but the more I struggle with coming up with a better title, the more I'm tempted to stick an exclamation point at the end of Beeslingers and call it a day. :'D
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
Heck yeah. 8) THIS is what I'm talking about. People just writing thinly veiled tour guides for their areas. (That said, definitely approve of this, and if one is ever in that area, what would that pizza chain be? Asking for a friend. 👀)
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
Mick has Opinions about the monarchy, military, and their aesthetics (among other things), yes. :V
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 1h
#LGBTQWriteAThon Vibes today! Featuring a bit from the first draft of Beeslingers that will most certainly make it to the second, in which the antagonist reveals he actually *does* know who tried to flee his mines. #amwriting
“You know the punishment for defiance, and for hiding someone else’s crimes from my all-seeing eyes,” Doc told them, his voice sweet and smooth as buttercream. 

He nodded down to Alistair, who lifted his eyes to the swarm. He did not elaborate further. He didn’t need to.

“So if you know anything about what that little bee of yours was doing, flying off to the east, it would be best if you tell me,” he said. “If it was just one little deserter who has nothing to do with you, then that’s fine! Nobody will be punished. But if any of you helped that little one escape . . .”

His eyes moved over the crowd and settled on the back. Honeysuckle did not move. She did not straighten or even twitch her antennae. She remained perfectly, resolutely still.

Yet she couldn’t deny the weight of Doc McQueen’s eyes bearing down on her.

And in return, Doc McQueen’s smile grew, enough to reveal a crescent of perfect white teeth.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 23h
#Octember Mick has access to godly magic and a dragon form, so naturally he'd . . . use the power of friendship and folk rock to convince Godzilla to stand down. Honeysuckle and the zizzun would murder Godzilla via bee balling, meanwhile. And Jo would try to shoot at Godzilla. Jo just has a rifle.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Thank you! One step closer, at least!
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Yessss to all of this but especially that first one!
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Love the air of mystery to this! 👀👀
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Headless🎃Horsewoman🪉💎🏹🐴⚔️ @acturek.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
From a new scene I may use: Teryl was speaking with the tree, speaking not in normal words, but in the chanting susurration consisting of Sheltri and another tongue, a tongue not even Rushak with all his talent could decipher. A tongue that could not be taught. BQ🧵 #FavelineFriday #writingcommunity
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
This is so gentle! 😭😭
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MidnightRose Artist @midnightrose838.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#FaveLineFriday I've been doing tons of editing, but chose from the one scene I actually wrote. I couldn't pick, so hear's my favorite part. WARNING: may contain vague spoilers. His hair wiped back from his face with a touch as gentle as the wind, those cool fingers, that scarred hand, - 1/2
“I’ll always love you.” Those words proven in a thousand ways.
He saw Rider’s outline against that bright purple light, the last way he’d proven those words.
Rider dressed in servant’s whites, kneeling on the floor of a room in this very palace.
Rider watching him eat what Rider had hunted and cooked, refusing to east himself.
Feeling Rider’s bones even through his jacked, his face pressed into that jacket, the smell of wet leather enveloping his senses.
His hair wiped back from his face with a touch as gentle as the wind, those cool fingers, that scarred hand, those deep brown eyes searching him, gentle, sad, infinitely caring.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Excellent progress all around! May the readers adore it. :D
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
#LGBTQWriteAThon This week was more of a win personally rather than with writing. As in, made tons of progress in grad school research, and I might be ready to apply. As for writing, my last progress was legit Sep 30, when I finished edits on ch 3 of TNS and transcriptions of ch 21. Then nada. 🫠
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Ah, the duality of woman. 😂
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Scarlet Mitchell is a 👻g..g..ghost!👻 @scarletvmitchell.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#FaveLineFriday Since Im in editing mode, I haven't added a whole bunch of cool lines. Here are two I liked: "She moved like an animal." "She had her hair cutely divided into two buns, one behind each ear." (Yes, its about the same woman🥰🤣) Bonus: Jack has been to Paris. Possibly... 🧵 1/3
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Bianca Michelle Parker 🏳️‍⚧️📚 @bumblebigirl.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
It looked suburban. Not a brilliant spot to be a monster. At least in the city there was the slight chance of being taken for some weirdo in a costume. Here there would be kids. People didn’t really like big green creatures around their kids. #FaveLineFriday
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Understandable! And mostly same hat. I started wearing looser, more linen pants fairly recently and realized they are the Superior Pant to jeans. :'D So much lighter!
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
So in other words, wearing jeans is basically like wearing cargo work pants you might see construction workers wear nowadays.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Ah, I hear you. But funnily enough, I know the answer to this! They were originally work pants during the Californian gold rush days! And then we just kinda. Started wearing them all the time. :'D (Tbf, they're durable af compared to most other kinds of pants.)
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Oh, it isn't, but luckily, her older brother is here to jump in, stop said golem, and clean things up. Or, well, unluckily for Mick, but y'know. 😂
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Right?? 😂 Dude would wear a T-shirt and jeans on the day he goes to fight the queen if either of those existed.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
EXCELLENT. 8) I'm trying to include more clothing descriptions in this book, as I *know* you're not the only one, but maaaan, shaking those minimalist habits. 😭😭
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Yesssss so sweet! 😭😭
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
👀👀 Oh, this is a *fantastic* image, legit. And also, would love to know the context! 👀👀👀👀👀
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Nicole R. @sainiku.northsky.social · 02/10/2026
#FaveLineFriday CW: Blood 'Freshly dried blood painted the walls like an abundant creeping mold.' Bonus Q: Throughout the journey, Jane travels (almost) to every major location in the world. The farthest is likely the snowy area north of Promethia. #writingcommunity #writingprompt #writesky
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
Tysm! :D I might've borrowed from FFXIV, including the idea that crystals/gems have magical properties. In this world, they can store magical energy, run "prerecorded" spells, or serve as conduits for magic. The last one's in play here—or would be, if Mick's sister didn't let her golem slip. :')
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
👀👀 at that question.
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September James @september-james.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#FaveLineFriday ‘You have nothing to worry about. She is my past.’ ‘Does she know that?’ #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts #WriteSky
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Bramble ~ Sci-fi and Fantasy Author @thebrambler13.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
I'm editing The Wolf Knight for Raven & Bear. I love this part especially. It calls back to page one of my first story. It also references three werewolves from Arthurian Legend. Sir Corbyn: 3500 miles Ata c.100 miles #FaveLineFriday #Raven+Bear #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WIP
An excerpt from The Wolf Knight (Raven & Bear: 8) by Bramble. The fourth and final paragraph are highlighted in blue.

Transcript:
“Melion?”

“Ata, sorry, Princess Ata.” This young man bowed forward, a fist held over his heart, “I’m afraid my name is Marrok now.”

Neither spoke further as shields were raised in front of the princess and a firm hand dragged her back. Marrok was leaner, hair no longer rusted spikes but coils of polished copper. Ata felt a wooden block pressed tight around each wrist, heavy on a neck far frailer then. Drenched by rain, she shivered. Not yet dry despite years of warmth. His eyes lowered, heavy with regret.

Princess Ceindrych had finally stood, “he came to us, a wolf with no name and was given another to make him a man again.”

“You knighted him?” A bear-like rumble echoed in Ata’s chest.

“He’s an ordained paladin.” This diminutive girl held onto Marrok’s elbow and elaborated, “he saved me from the dog-head bandits and after months of study passed the Chivalric Measure.”

“If I may speak-”

“I’m not sure you may,” She cut him off with an ursine scowl, then sighed as the man flinched, “but I suppose if you need to.”

“I do.” That lake-blue stare wrinkled in careful consideration of each word before he spoke them, “I’m sorry. You have every right to hate me, but through God I am trying to be better.”

[End]
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
TRUE. 8)
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
*bows* Thank you so much! Really had to highlight how pretentious this dude is (and how pretentious Eleanor *thinks* this dude is). :D
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 03/10/2026
*Amazing* exchange here. 😂
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Paisley Rose @paisley-rose.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#FaveLineFriday From the only actual writing I did this week, which was just dialogue from a new scene in my upcoming rewrite of ULB. I think this encapsulates Lucian's and Orla's personalities well.
L: Has it occurred to you that you might have an easier time if you didn’t continuously make bad choices?
O: Has it occurred to you that you don’t know what the fuck you’re talking about?
L: Not often.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Thanks so much! :D Super excited to get started on it, especially given that there will be a heavy dollop of bee society and politics woven into drama and mystery. 8) 8)
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Thank you~ :D
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Ah man, that last line hits like a baseball bat to the stomach. (So good!) 😭😭😭
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David T./D.T. Brandt - Settler on Stolen Land @queerpointyears.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Bonus: The furthest both Krainos and Xenon have been from home is Cryzmis!!! Cryzmis is deep in the northeast mountains, and their homeland, Eluria, is off the southwestern coast. #FaveLineFriday
"Goodbye, my love," the Bovien said.

Krainos smiled. "Until next year, my dear," he replied.

And Xenon was gone.

Krainos took a deep breath, waiting for the emptiness to settle in.

It never did.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
😂😂😂😂 But also, love the idea of a thirteen-foot-tall trench coat-wearing figure, ambling in for . . . reasons.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Love this moodboard, by the by! And 👀 at the demi flag in the top right.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Loving *everything* about this. 8)
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Platonic or not, this is so sweet! 😭😭
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Ry Hamon @hamonry1029.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#FaveLineFriday anyone wanna guess whose line this is? 😅 it’s 100% platonic no romantic intentions whatsoever.
Ihate to tell you this, Princess, but I'd rather be hunted by all the kingdoms in the universe than leave you here to fight
these assholes alone.
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Jax Devora (is writing) @jaxdevora.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
👀👀👀👀👀👀 YOOOOO. Congrats!! 8D
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