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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing

@rainbowpenediting.bsky.social
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Jesse (he/him) Freelance developmental and line editor of fiction specialised in romance, fantasy, horror, and queer fiction. Member of the EFA and LGBTQ+ Editors Association. No AI. www.rainbowpenediting.com

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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
It's mostly the epic fantasy aspect at play 😂 The romance is crucial, but it's secondary to the fantasy.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
Most of my spoons have melted.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
Hi Rachel! I hope you enjoyed the #StetSprint Yeah, the length is epic, for sure. It's about 275k words long 🤣 I'm close to the halfway point.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
Hi #edibuddies and #StetChat I'm still doing the line edit of an epic fantasy romance. This #StetSprint I'm hoping to get through the second pass for two scenes, at the very least. They're not too long, so hopefully I can squeeze in a little extra work.
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Steph 🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍⚧️ | Editor 🦦✍️ @ottersediting.com · 08/09/2026
🍂 Fall editing spots almost full!🍁 Are you a queer, neurodivergent, or disabled author who needs an editor that understands you? Have a novella, novelette, or short story ready for editing? Website: ottersediting.com Intake Form: cryptpad.fr/form/#/2/for...
Otters Editing Booking slots! I have 1 available spot in Sept and Oct for a short story, poem, or novelette. And 2 spots in Nov. I edit fantasy, LGBTQ+ fiction, and Sci-Fi. I offer line edits, copyedits, proofreading, and MS Evals.  You can email me: stephmcollinedits@proton.me or DM me. The graphic is a light yellow/tan with a yellow fall leaf and a pumpkin in the corner. There's also an LGBTQ+ flag in the middle and a blue open book with a pen at the top.
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Steve Hugh Westenra 🕷️🧛‍♂️🏳️‍⚧️📚✒️ @stevewestenra.bsky.social · 01/10/2026
The Erstwhile Tyler Kyle is ON SALE for Hallowe'en! A failed actor turned cryptid-hunting YouTuber follows a video of his vanished mom to an isolated island in the Canadian wilderness steve-westenra.itch.io/the-erstwhil... #transauthor #indiehorror #horrorbooks #sale #booksale #queerhorror
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Alex Larkspur 💛📚🌻 @applesncinnamon.bsky.social · 01/10/2026
#QueerPrompts Oct 1 I'm Alex Larkspur and I write queer fantasy! I'm the author of Sweet & Wild, The Need for Dandelions, and The Witch of the Wood. I'm finishing up a novelette called A Harvest of the Heart, editing a novella, Guardian of the Sky, and drafting a novel, The Bird and the Blade!
Over a forest with flowers:
Alex Larkspur - Queer Fantasy Author 

Novels: Sweet & Wild, The Need for Dandelions 

Novellas: The Witch of the Wood

Short Stories: A Taste of Wild Honey, Wild & Sweet
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
If you want to learn about coherence in fantasy (or speculative fiction in general) and why it’s important even when there’s magic involved, check out my new blog post: rainbowpenediting.com/what-do-we-m... #writesky #queerwriters #sffwriters #writingcommunity #queereditors
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What do we mean by “realism” when it comes to fantasy? – Rainbow Pen Editing
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
Yeah, it's sad that a lot of people don't realise how much media shapes our unconscious biases.
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Dianna Gunn Does (Fictional) Murders 🇨🇦 @diannalgunn.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
Today is the LAST DAY to apply for this! If you've got a Big Gay Vampire book, this is the bundle for you!
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Kaya Skovdatter 🏳️‍⚧️ (She/They) @gothgreenwitch.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
I should be clear: I'll take whatever size gigs people have right now. Anything that helps me hit that total is welcome.
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Weeknight Writers @weeknightwriters.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
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Project Prioritizer - Weeknight Writers
Endless author interviews ask the same question: how do you find your ideas? For most of us, however, that’s not the interesting part—or at least not the challenging part. We’ve got folders full of id...
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
Yeah, I'm sure he's most people's first thought! I really don't get why so many people love The Big Bang Theory. It has so many problematic tropes. And don't get me started on the misogyny and compulsory motherhood! Absolutely vile.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
When autistic characters are depicted as both unfeeling and aroace. Nothing wrong with an autistic character being aro and/or ace, but when it's the default and it's associated with lack of empathy, it's damaging to both autistic and aroace communities, because neither lack empathy. #SpoonieAuthChat
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
Same! Especially those I wrote before I even understood I was neurodivergent. I feel like this should be part of the diagnosis for writers 🤣 Diagnose me by diagnosing my characters.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
In my queer horror WIP, two out of the five MCs are intentionally written as neurodivergent (AuDHD), and it's really fun to explore where their experience overlaps and diverges. I want their POVs to reflect that. #SpoonieAuthChat
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
Yes, I write many neurodivergent characters, some intentionally and some accidentally. Oftentimes I don't particularly intend for a character to be neurodivergent or neurotypical, but I come to realise that they're clearly neurodivergent the more I flesh them out. 1/2 #SpoonieAuthChat
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
I usually do it one scene at a time so it's not too tiring, but I like reading aloud to begin with, so that helps too. When I was a kid, my mum and I used to take turns reading a book aloud to each other, and it was really fun. But if your throat gets dry, it's definitely not pleasant.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
Hi Rachel! Good to see you. I hope your #StetSprint went well too. I prefer to read myself. I get a better feel of the flow and pacing this way, and I can see where I stumble. I haven't tried text-to-speech in forever, so maybe it's different now, but I used to find the delivery distracting.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
Hello #edibuddies and #StetChat team! I'm still on the line edit of an epic fantasy romance. I just need to do the read-aloud pass for one scene to finish my quota for the day, but it would be great to start working on one of the scenes for tomorrow during this #StetSprint
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#StetChat @stetchat.com · 28/09/2026
Happy #HispanicHeritageMonth! ¡Feliz Mes de la Herencia Hispana! If you're a #Hispanic or #Latino editor, share what type of editing you do in the comments! #amediting #freelanceeditor #edibuddies
Graphic that says "Happy Hispanic Heritage Month!"
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 28/09/2026
Hello #SpoonieAuthChat I'm neurodivergent (AuDHD), although sometimes I feel more neurodisastrous than neurofabulous. But hey, why not both?🕺I could be a fabulous disaster.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 28/09/2026
Hello #queerwriters I'm pretty busy working on a line edit for a client (epic fantasy romance 🎉), but I want to squeeze in time for my own writing. The goal is to do 2 writing sprints and do some outlining. October also starts this week, which means spooky season is upon us 🎃 Horror readathon time!
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Alex Larkspur 💛📚🌻 @applesncinnamon.bsky.social · 27/09/2026
What's cozy horror? It could be The Witch of the Wood! If you want to try out horror that fills you with dread only to wrap in a warm hug on the next page, try out this little novella coming out October 6th! Uni: books2read.com/u/bw6gwP Itch: applesncinnamon.itch.io/the-witch-of...
Over a picture of dark forest, the cover of The Witch of the Wood by Alex Larkspur. Below it reads: Creeping horror, warm heart. A cozy horror fantasy novella to kick off your spooky season. Available October 6th
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Charlie Knight [they/them] | Editor / Author 📚 @cknightwrites.bsky.social · 27/09/2026
I put my book on sale to give you a gift for a my birthday! If you're looking for a treasure hunting romantasy with lots of heat, found family, and polyamory done right, come join the crew of Tempest! Buttpirates.carrd.co
Background is calm, dark water

Centered image is paperback and Kindle version of TEMPEST, TAKE ME HOME

Text: 
Butt Pirates Birthday Sale
$0.99 ebook now 'til 9/30
Buttpirates.carrd.co 
@cknightwrites
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Editorial Freelancers Association @efafreelancers.bsky.social · 27/09/2026
Beta readers can make or break your next draft. Make sure to hire one who knows your genre, send clear questions with your manuscript, and look for patterns in the feedback. Luckily for you, we've already done the hard part! Find a beta reader in the EFA Member Directory: bit.ly/4rBhVhR 🌐
Cream graphic titled "Using beta readers effectively." The first tip reads "Consider hiring a beta reader. Editorial professionals can deliver feedback more reliably than a volunteer, describe their experience, and provide testimonials." The second tip reads "Look for genre specialists. Hire a beta reader who reads extensively in your genre for the most applicable feedback." A line drawing of a man reading a book sits in the bottom left, with the EFA logo in the bottom right.Cream graphic titled "Using beta readers effectively." The first tip reads "Send more than just your manuscript. Provide a list of questions, goals, and specific areas you want them to address," next to a drawing of an open notebook and pencil. The second tip reads "Take the next steps post-beta read. Get your beta readers' honest thoughts with a call or meeting. The real work begins with your revision cycle! Be attuned to common themes indicated by multiple readers. Incorporate feedback with care." A callout at the bottom reads "Find a beta reader in the EFA directory," with the EFA logo in the bottom right.
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Claris Lam @clarislamauthor.bsky.social · 27/09/2026
ENDING TODAY: Get my book "Winner Takes All" and many other great indie reads for FREE on Itchio and $0.99 on Amazon during BookStacked on Amazon and Itchio! 📚 Book links are in my bio! Check out other participating authors at www.indiebookstack.com/get-stacked #BookStacked
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kae @krholton.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
Please pre-order this dystopian fantasy! I'm really proud of it. It's got loveable (and hateable!!) characters, a blind MC, cool time magic, and I think you'll like it! Pre-order links here: krholton.start.page #ShamelessSelfPromo #SpoonieAuthChat
Cover of The Last Firstborn by KR Holton. A young priest wearing a blindfold stands with his arms outstretched. Gold accents form a halo and a silhouette of a city. Cover art by Bookfly Design.
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Cait Gordon ♿️ @caitgauthor.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
As part of my celebrating ten years as an author, my new romance innn spaaace, Hot Wings and Sauciness, is only 1.99USD on Smashwords from today through September 30! Get it while it’s hot and saucy! #Disability #Romance for the win! #SpoonieAuthChat #BookSky www.smashwords.com/books/view/2...
Book cover description: Brown background with coloured smoke. A white man with silver hair who is wearing a flight suit with wings on the shoulders is trying not to laugh at a woman with short grey hair who is sitting, looking bored, and wearing a chicken costume. On the table is a sign that reads: All you can eat at Coq of the walk! Behind her are three beautiful women who are dressed like models, standing at another table that has a large wings basket on it. 

Additional text says: On sale for 1.99 USD on Smashwords now through Sep 30!
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Addy Bross 🌈 they/xe @aebrossbooks.com · 25/09/2026
#SpoonieAuthChat Sept. 25th Happy Shameless Promo Friday, y'all! I want to get the word out about this -punk itchio bundle I am in. We have everything from cyberpunk to aetherpunk to hopepunk and solarpunk. It's 24 works for $24. Definitely worth a look! itch.io/b/3913/punk-...
Punk Spec Fic Book Bundle Graphic, bordered by 24 covers, with background of dark blue fading across to a lighter yellow.

Text: Punk Spec Fic, 24 books for $24, Sept 20th-30th.

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Books & Authors;
Walking the Knife's Edge (Sythe Series #1), Elise Carlson.

CyberSnow, A.E. Bross.

Memento Moreau. Conrad Altmann.

Sting of the Shore: Stories & Poems. Devan Barlow.

Visual Snow. L. B. Shimaira.

Snowstorm & Overgrowth, Claudie Arseneault.

Run With the Hunted, Jennifer R. Donohue.

The Thirteenth Hour, Trudie Skies.

Erosion, Mcburnell.

Broken Sky, Morgan K. Bell.

Aether Beyond the Binary, Duck Prints Press.

Woodspell, Kapeo Press.

The Daily To-Do List, Rob MacWolf.

The Neon Garden, Alina Lee.

The Red Hourglass - Slaves of the New World #1, Ashley Capes.

A Study on Magic and Crystals, May Barros.

The Diamond Device, Mhthaung.

A Place of Refuge Omnibus, Victoria Janssen.

Grave Cold, Shannon Knight.

Punk Means Cuddle, A. Lee Welles Fiction.

War of the Space Dragons (An Empire of Dragons Collection), L’Poni.

Black Sails to Sunward, Sheila Jenné.

Locker's Rebellion, Jesse Pohlman.

Netwalk, Joyce Reynolds Ward.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
I line edited one scene as planned, and since it was much shorter than I'd anticipated, I ended up doing the first pass for the next scene.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
Hi #edibuddies and #StetChat team! I'm still working on the line edit of an epic fantasy romance, and I'm hoping to get through one scene during this #StetSprint.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
There's also no stigma around disability, so there's no societal desire to cure. #SpoonieAuthChat
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
Yes. Magic can help manage symptoms, enhance healing and abilities, but it doesn't cure disabilities. And magic takes energy, so it's not unlimited (and also, not everyone has access to magic, or the kind of magic they need or want). (1/2) #SpoonieAuthChat
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
Depends where. The area that's community-based has accommodations and aids with no access restrictions because the community provides and cares for its members. Most other areas have accommodations for gods, but humans get the crappy stuff and are an afterthought. #SpoonieAuthChat
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
That sounds really cool! Are the mechas having sword fights? 🤩
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
I'm late! I'm late! 🐰⌚ Hello #SpoonieAuthChat I write queer fantasy romance, and I also edit anything fantasy. I love the genre, and worldbuilding is one of my favourite elements. My current WIP is mythology inspired and the romance is poly. Well, romances, because it's a series and a family saga.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 22/09/2026
🎉
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Weeknight Writers @weeknightwriters.bsky.social · 22/09/2026
FOUR DAYS LEFT to sign up for Staying Power: Finishing Books With ADHD! Grab your ticket & join us to learn how to work with YOUR brain to get books done from @premeemohamed.com, @elizmanderson.com, @authoreanoble.bsky.social & Savannah Stephens!
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Staying Power: Finishing Books With ADHD - Weeknight Writers
Writing a book is hard. And it’s a lot harder when you have ADHD—which is why we’re bringing together four incredible ADHD authors to share their strategies for finishing books in Staying Power: Finis...
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 22/09/2026
Absolutely recommend! I got an ARC and loved it. The characters' journeys to find themselves and each other were so beautiful and emotional! I really enjoyed the creepy cryptids and how the supernatural elements worked. Now that I've read it, I have a new appreciation of the chickens on the cover =)
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Anna Holmes @annabookwriter.bsky.social · 17/09/2026
Newly disabled people, I say this with love: Two things are true. 1. Your expectations for your life have been disrupted. Maybe permanently. You have the right to take space and grieve that. 2. There is life beyond that disruption. Millions of us are living it.
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Carolina VonKampen 📚 Freelance Editor @carolinavonkampen.com · 17/09/2026
Next session at #ACESVCON26: Tropes in Developmental Editing: The Good, the Bad, the Twisted by @tanyagold.bsky.social, @cloviseditorial.bsky.social, and @elixireditorial.bsky.social! #amediting #edibuddies #editorsky #developmentalediting #vcon26
Tanya Gold, Mary Brydon-Kehoe, and Genevieve Clovis smiling and waving at the camera.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
It's possible to do written coaching rather than video calls, if you're ever interested but the call format is what's stopping you.
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#StetChat @stetchat.com · 16/09/2026
Got a hypothetical red flag client or #editing situation that you want to see discussed in a future Red Flag Roulette #StetChat? Submit it here: (Oh yeah, we’re gonna do this format again!) stetchat.com/red-flag-sub...
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Submit Your Red Flag Situation to #StetChat Red Flag Roulette
Got a hypothetical red flag client or editing situation that you want to see discussed in a future #StetChat Red Flag Roulette? Submit it!
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#StetChat @stetchat.com · 16/09/2026
#StetChat! We're speaking @ #ACESVCON26 at 3:15 p.m. ET on Friday, Sept. 18. Join @carolinavonkampen.com, @editrix-rachel.bsky.social, @raqueledits.bsky.social for our #VCON26 panel “Red Flag Roulette Live! Navigating Difficult Conversations With Authors and Clients.” stetchat.com/aces-vcon26/
Graphic that says ACES VCON26. We're presenting. With photos of Carolina, Raquel, and Rachel below.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
#StetChat A7 I'd say I don't offer that service. I might refer them if they seem clueless rather than unwilling to put in the work. Otherwise, I'd contact whoever I might refer before mentioning them to see if they're willing to take on a client who doesn't look at their potential editor's website.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
#StetChat A6 😭 Not a ChatGPT + paint combo! That sounds awful! I don't work with authors who use gen AI, so hopefully my clients wouldn't. If they did, I'd remind them that books are indeed judged by their covers, and it's their best marketing tool. Honesty is kindness in this case.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
And if they still want to continue, I probably wouldn't take the project on. Beyond the uselessness of it all, it might tempt me into scope creep to try to salvage the manuscript. If it's not ready, but not terribly not ready, I might consider taking it and add a clause to keep my name out of it.
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Jesse – Rainbow Pen Editing @rainbowpenediting.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
#StetChat A5 I don't do copyedits yet, but at whichever stage, if the book isn't ready for it, I'd inform the client. I'd gently tell them about the impact on the reader, their reputation, and sales if needed. I'd try to point out a few concerns and tell them which stage of editing would be best.
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