K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 5hASHMARKED #DVPit #A #F #H 📺Midnight Mass x 🎶Seven Devils Tethered to the immortal Darkness and hunted by her faith to reimprison him, devotee Eloweth must work with heretics & rebels to break their bond. If she fails, she'll become the next monster the Faith needs to justify its violence and lies. 200
K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 8hASHMARKED #DVPit #A #F #H Tethered to the immortal Darkness and hunted by her faith to reimprison him, devotee Eloweth must cross an unknown wilderness & work with heretics and rebels to break their bond. If she fails, she'll become the next monster the Faith needs to justify its violence and lies. 1110
K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 10hThe Faith calls him Darkness. Evil. But when she's tethered to the being they taught her to fear, Eloweth discovers the real horror isn't what the Faith hunted; it's what they created. Now she must sever the bond before she becomes the monster the Faith both fears and needs. #A #F #H #DVPIT 310
K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 13hThis... is... such... a.... vibe. I can't wait to have this one in my hands IRL! 010
K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 13hASHMARKED: ⛪ "Fear the immortal Darkness." Her: 👍 ⛓️➡️🖤 Her: 😰 🖤: "The Faith lied." Her: 🙄 📜🔍 Her: 😳 📜🔍🔍 Her: 😱 📜🔍🔍🔍 Her: "uh oh..." 🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩 The only thing worse than being magically chained to an immortal Darkness... Is finding out your religion made him that way. #A #F #H #dvpit 800
K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 14hI have been SO lucky to read this manuscript. I can't wait to get my hands on it in its final form! 010
K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 14h🎵Cirice by Ghost x 🖼️The Nightmare by Fuseli Eloweth: Raised to fear the Darkness 😱 Also Eloweth: Now magically tethered to it🥲 The Faith: Created it, and she's the next ingredient 👨🍳 Eloweth (holding a torch): So, anyway, I started burning 🔥 #dvpit #A #F #H 900
K.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 15h🎵The Sound of Silence by Disturbed x 🖼️ Judith Beheading Holofernes by Gentileschi Her faith calls him Darkness. Evil. Now tethered to the monster they taught her to fear, Eloweth finds the real horror wasn't what the Faith hunted. It was what they created. And she’s next. #A #F #H #dvpit 1600
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonBlythe Gilpin @blythewrytes.bsky.social · 29/09/2026Project 1! A sci-fi sapphic Cupid & Psyche/East of the Sun, West of the Moon retelling where an advanced alien species imposes themselves as gods on a planet, and Psyche gets Cupid to help her take down the god’s regime. #DVparty 3154
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonBlythe Gilpin @blythewrytes.bsky.social · 29/09/2026Project 2! A science fantasy where the lines between universes become blurred by those grasping for power. A yearning monk, a tortured wizard, and a determined waitress are thrown together to figure it out. ❤️🔥 Reylo Vibes 🌌 Black Hole Magic 🧑🧑🧒🧒 Found Family 🌀 Portals 🍻 Craft Beer #DVparty 1204
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonCeline Kos - amQuerying 🩷💜💙 @cl-kos.bsky.social · 29/09/2026#dvparty last day! #SFF #NA When a disgraced military cadet learns that the authoritarian government she's devoted her life to is conducting experiments on vulnerable members of the city, she flees into the sewers, falling into the very grass-roots extremist organization she was trained to uproot. 6219
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonFrankie | Querying & Drafting @byfrankiejoy.bsky.social · 28/09/2026Bea is a librarian whose secret camgirl persona is about to be exposed to everyone around her—family, friends, coworkers, boss she does not have a crush on. #DVParty 2215
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonPJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 27/09/2026Local man goes to the river after a terrible storm and almost drowns in mud. "He's totally fine," says the voice of god in his head. "Don't give into his dramatics." Opening lines for THE EVERWINTER KING! #DVParty 9425
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonGalen Bunting is querying 👽📚 @galenbunting.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVParty Three years before... God, Christophe prays. Please let me disappear. Please don’t make me go up to the stage, in front of everyone today. Just this once, I don’t want to heal. Opening lines for WITNESSERS OF THE UNKNOWN 2171
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonSandy draws comics @skimlines.bsky.social · 27/09/2026Opening line for The Herder Witch, a magical fantasy comic about magical marginalized girls. #dvparty #fantasy #gn #asianamerican #asian #korean 0155
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonLauren is Forever Writing 🌟 @thefoxandrose.bsky.social · 27/09/2026For #DVpit opening lines 💕 Why not start a story with the theft of an empire's last dragon egg? #DVparty #A #F #LGBTQ 4363
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonDavid Shaft | YA Fantasy @davidshaftofficial.bsky.social · 27/09/2026Opening line of A CHANCE AT LIFE, my #YA #Fantasy book: “Shields Up!” is all he can hear as thousands of bodies collide on the bleeding sand-covered sea of battle. #DVparty 1141
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonEshe N @eshesprologue.bsky.social · 27/09/2026IN LOVE & SKYN Only madness could lead a person to the home of a man rumoured to be faceless, or a jinn, or a demon of the night—well, madness, and the desperate need to progress in a world that seemed bent on making me suffer with every ounce of betterment it gave. #DVParty #RF #F #NA #A 1242
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonMichael @michaelprocopio.bsky.social · 27/09/2026The opening line for my new MM romantic comedy, "It's a Bad Idea, Right?" for #DVParty! "A happy ending in THIS economy? Not for me, that was for sure. But the ornate box I received in the mail, which looked suspiciously like a wedding invitation, suggested my ex, Jabari, was about to get his." 1152
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonV. S. Vasan @vsvasan.substack.com · 27/09/2026HERALD OF ASHES | Adult epic fantasy BLOOD OVER BRIGHT HAVEN x THE RAVEN SCHOLAR with the anti-imperialism of BABEL #DVParty #A #F 1101
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonCeline Kos - amQuerying 🩷💜💙 @cl-kos.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVParty Day 3! "Letyf drew back his arrow, sighting down the shaft at a kingbird on a low branch." Spoiler, in the next line... he misses. 7225
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonFrankie | Querying & Drafting @byfrankiejoy.bsky.social · 27/09/2026First line for SHAMELESSLY WANTING! Is it just Bea that starts her week off naked in front of a window? If anyone did look up at her--lucky them. 💋☀️ #DVParty 6335
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonK.M. Carlson @wanderingbutton.bsky.social · 25/09/2026#DVParty Yes, I know this isn't for WIPs, but I'M A REBEL, BABY, so I'm doing it. The Haunting of Hill House x UP x Salem Witch Trials Meet George and his cat, also named George. 4172
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonAnna Wood @annakwood.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVParty Day 3. Opening Line: It happened on a clear bright day in early March. The sort of day where you feel the potential of spring just around the corner after a long winter, but there is still a chill in the air, still a need to wrap up against the wind. A bird was pecking rhythmically in the 0133
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonAnastasia Mosharova @ana-mosharova.bsky.social · 27/09/2026"Miles from glittering theatre fronts and coffee bars that spun records until the early morning hours, London’s southernmost borough was retiring for the night." Opening line, THE DAWN OF AQUARIUS, an Upmarket Queer Coming-of-Age Romance set in '69 #LGBT #A #HR #DVparty #preDV 1171
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonSophia ✨ @soph-l.bsky.social · 27/09/2026Here’s the opening line to 💎 THE FALL OF RESURRECTION MANOR 🥀, my adult fantasy about a manor where the wealthy go for a week of consequence-free death, and the two people dead set on escaping its shadow: Hale dreaded the coming week, the one he’d been working towards for a decade. #DVparty 0181
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonClaire Every @cripademia.bsky.social · 27/09/2026✒️ Opening line #DVParty day 3. Need a book with the incendiary spirit of BABEL & a taste of the unhinged obsession of SALTBURN...? #A #CI #DIS 3261
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonRaymond Currier @teaandcharcoal.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#dvparty opening line (er paragraph) day! "Hunkered alone at his corner table, Taerin tapped a disjointed rhythm on his thigh. He pulled the letter from his pocket for the dozenth time to check the details within: Kissing Donkey Inn. Blackwood. Sifsday evening. Check, check, and check." 1202
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonChristine Szczesniak @szczesniakchristin.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVparty WE WERE ALL DEFECTS - YA Dystopian Thriller The opening- The road to happiness was paved with bubblegum pink plastic tiles. 2291
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonChristine Szczesniak @szczesniakchristin.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVparty WE DON'T DIE HERE - YA Speculative Thriller Opening line: If I didn’t move soon, I’d spend the rest of my night smelling like a dumpster. 1231
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonRoja Rhys (she/her) @rojarhys.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVParty Opening line for HER LADY SHIP: The Godiva was going to sink, at the mouth of Portsmouth Harbour, on a calm day in June. 2201
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonEmily Byrd @emilybyrdwrites.bsky.social · 27/09/2026WILDEST DREAMS OPENING LINE: There were forty-seven minutes until I was supposed to arrive at Serendipity Books, and I had already checked my messenger bag four times. #DVparty 0161
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonI.P.Kollias | Querying @isagoblin.bsky.social · 27/09/2026"Glowing in the night, one infamous district of Florfontain beckoned prospective customers with the promise of delight and depravity." ... So guess where the protagonist works🕯️ #DVparty #A #Fstatic.klipy.comALT: 0121
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonAlexSJames @authoralexsjames.bsky.social · 27/09/2026When Mom sees Gluddles with his back turned against the mirror, she says, “Woogaboo, you need to look in the mirror so you can make sure you get all your chompers brushed.” #DVParty!! 091
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonGia @writingwithgia.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVparty #DVpit Opening lines to THE DEAD GENE #NA #RF 1111
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonGia @writingwithgia.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVpit #DVparty Opening lines to Vampires on Greek Row #NA #RF 1122
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonLeslie Nightingale @leslienightingale.bsky.social · 27/09/2026The overhead bin is much higher than I remember. Resting my bag on the seat, I catch my breath and allow a few people to squeeze past me. My heart always chooses the wrong time to beat too quickly. “Want help?” I’m so flustered that I almost don’t recognize that voice. #openinglines #DVParty 0141
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonJo @jodmello.bsky.social · 27/09/2026Day 3 : #DVParty Yeah. That's about right and Charmi (a Software Warrior) has had enough of it! 😆🤫 1171
Reposted by K.M. Carlsonkatelyn Materiale 🔮🗡️🌊 @katelynmateriale.bsky.social · 27/09/2026For When Death Finds Life's first line I wanted something sweet The ice cream was melting. #DVparty #F #R #NA #LGBT #ND 1241
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonCourtney Adaire @courtneyadaire.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#dvparty THE SPACE SHE LEFT, opening line 5262
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonRosa Suzanne @rosasuzanne.bsky.social · 27/09/2026The opening line of the novel I'll be pitching during DVpit next week! It was easy to believe fairytales were real in a place like this, that was what Jude used to think, at least. #DVparty 0181
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonMelissa Rousu Author @melissarauthor.bsky.social · 27/09/2026The opening line from A LOVE LIKE THE MOVIES: BAM BAM BAM. Her fist quaked as it pounded the wood door, nails biting into Alex’s palm. I can’t believe he was f*#% her. The image of them naked replayed in her mind like a bad movie. #DVparty #romcom #A #nd 061
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonSasha Kielman (she/her/hers) 🦋 is Querying 🙏🕯️📿 @sashakielman.bsky.social · 27/09/2026Darkness reigned in the Realm of Selenara. #AmQuerying #DVParty bsky.app/profile/dvpi... 2102
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonChloe Majeske-Neal @aurawolf-mn.bsky.social · 27/09/2026#DVparty Day 3, opening lines. Insert alarm clock noises here lol. The Neverbird is a #DF #R #NA #YA #ND #MH #F twist on the classic story of Peter Pan with a sweet but no-nonsense health care worker FMC and a #DIS ML whose story you think you know. How much do you know about Neverland really? 071
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonMursal @mursal23.bsky.social · 20/09/2026An #agentsguide to The Weeping Willows Came Crawling, a YA Fantasy set in an Afghan inspired land I’m hoping to query soon and pitch for dvpit 👀 🐉 Mythical creatures drawn from afghan folklore 🔥 Female rage 💔 Enemies to lovers ⚡️ And subverting destiny’s expectations #ya #fantasy #writerscommunity 4155
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonHephzibah O. Praise fka LaDonna @authorhephzibah.bsky.social · 25/09/2026secrets, sisterhood, and a crime scene they walked right into 🩸 presenting the moodboard for ALL THE GOOD GIRLS GO TO HELL (YA Mystery-Thriller) ACE OF SPADES x ONE OF US IS LYING x PLL #dvparty #YA #mystery #thriller 293
Reposted by K.M. Carlson✨Fay🪽 @fayntasy.bsky.social · 25/09/2026#dvparty #DVpit #YA #F #DIS #CI #LGBT Since I’m not much of a visual artist here is a picture of me that relates to a mood board for my pitch this week! 0131
Reposted by K.M. CarlsonChristine Szczesniak @szczesniakchristin.bsky.social · 25/09/2026Presenting my mood board for WE WERE ALL DEFECTS - A YA Dystopian Thriller with lots of delicious slow burn romance. #DVParty 2182
Reposted by K.M. Carlsonmalou | is querying! @priamides.bsky.social · 25/09/2026happy #DVParty!! here’s the moodboard for SHEEPDOG, wheee!! 0212