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Eileen Pizzi

@eileen-pizzi.bsky.social
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Proofreader and copyeditor ✍🏻| Helping mystery authors 🕵🏻‍♀️| Jigsaw and word puzzle enthusiast 🧩| Guinea pigs rule! 🐹| Subscribe to my newsletter! preview.mailerlite.io/forms/2002998…

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Koren/K. M. Enright @kmenright.bsky.social · 21/09/2026
I haven't had the chance, personally, to work with Vert, but everything I've heard of him has been exemplary. So, friends, need a freelance editor and formatter with excellent skills? 👇
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Meaghan Steeves @choicewordsedit.bsky.social · 22/09/2026
1,000 words (for full manuscripts), as well as 15-minute discovery calls to discuss your needs.👩🏻‍💻📖 • #Freelance #FreelanceEditor #Work #Workspace #Pink
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 22/09/2026
One reason to put a comma before "because": You have an independent clause involving a negative. "Jen didn’t cook fish because Al was visiting." Jen cooked fish but not because of Al. "Jen didn’t cook fish, because Al was visiting." Jen didn’t cook fish, as Al was allergic. #copyeditor
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
When do you use a comma before "so," "because," and "as"? A comma clarifies the intended meaning of certain words in a sentence. I talk about this in my latest blog. Let me know what you think. #GrammarTips #WritingCommunity #Proofreader #CopyEditor eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/when-...
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When to Use a Comma: So, Because, and As
As we all know, commas can be tricky, mysterious little things. I know I’m not the only one who’s stared at a sentence for several minutes, trying to decide if a comma would make it clearer.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 16/09/2026
Hi, I'm attending the ACES VCON26. I remember there being a room where our avatars could walk around and speak with each other last year. But I'm not finding it anywhere on Whova. Did they get rid of it?
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 08/09/2026
Quick reminder If you can replace "so" with "so that," omit the comma. Reggie leaned in closer so she could hear the gossip. If you can replace "so" with "therefore," add a comma. Reggie needed to learn more, so she leaned in closer to hear the gossip. Any questions? #proofreading #copyediting
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 01/09/2026
Copyediting comes before proofreading. As your copyeditor, I correct grammatical and punctuation errors, catch inconsistencies, improve clarity and conciseness, and check basic facts. As your proofreader, I correct any remaining errors and typos. Read below to learn more. ⚡📚💙
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 26/08/2026
Sunday, I turned 60. We celebrated by eating out (lasagna), walking in Atlantic Highlands, and having tiramisu at home. Jim gave me a squishmallow. I’m extending that celebration to you. Discount-offer details are in the comments. Message me if you are interested or have any questions. 💙📚⚡
Me with a squishmallow pressed to my left cheek. It looks like a cinnamon roll with two black eyes. I have reddish glasses, brown hair, and a yellow shirt.
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Sarah Sharp @sarahsharp.bsky.social · 19/08/2026
I just dropped a new article on Substack. I'm trying to play the game a bit differently and crowdfund creativity. Have a look and spread the word! #writers #books #fiction #rpgs #boardgames #editing creatorscompanionediting.substack.com/p/what-is-cr...
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What is Creator’s Companion?
(This is an article that replicates our About Page, incase you missed it.)
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 21/08/2026
Do you ever feel stuck on your writing? I wasn't happy with my newsletter, so I gave myself time to clear my mind before revising. If the creative gears aren't turning, give yourself some grace and step away for a while. mail.eileensproofreading.com/preview/2002... #copyediting #proofreading
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My guinea pigs and I needed a break this month
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 23/07/2026
If you're seeking a copyeditor or proofreader, I'm available. Message me if you want to know more. I'm offering a 20 percent discount until July 31st.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 14/07/2026
One vital thing to keep in mind when writing your novel? Your readers. As your copyeditor, my goal is to help you reach your goals, whatever they may be. But for that to happen, your readers need to come first. 🌟Check out my sale in my previous post. It ends on July 31.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 10/07/2026
What does donating beloved, well-worn Agatha Christie novels have in common with publishing as a first-time mystery author over 50? I talk about this in my latest newsletter. Link to subscribe in the comments. #copyediting #proofreading #mysteries mail.eileensproofreading.com/preview/2002...
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Your new-author dreams
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 30/06/2026
Seeking a copyeditor or proofreader who will make your writing clear, consistent, and as error-free as humanly possible? I respect your style and voice, and I never use AI on your work. Learn more about me here: eileensproofreading.com www.linkedin.com/in/eileenpiz...
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K.S. Nightingale (Kai) @ksnightingale.bsky.social · 29/06/2026
Hi! I'm K.S. Nightingale. I am a freelance editor with open bookings! Get to know me in the images below! I'm ready to be your new book bestie and favourite editor! Want to know more? DM me or email me at KaijuKiriyama@gmail.com ko-fi.com/Nightingale_... #booksky #writingcommunity #editor
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Hi! I'm Kai!
I am an author and freelance editor. I've been editing books since 2013. I really, truly, genuinely love books of all genres, which is why I started writing and editing. 

I read a LOT, across genres, and like manga and anime.

This is my introduction to be your new book bestie and your next favourite editor.A mystical background of celestial bodies with a cream-coloured center square with the following text:

Why Choose Me?
I have been editing since 2013 and writing since 2002.
I use the Chicago Manual of Style to inform my editing choices.
I work WITH you to maintain the integrity of your book, you vision, you style, and your voice.
I am affordable for indie authors, with a flat rate, no markup, and am willing to work in your budget.
I offer a sample edit to make sure we gel.
Absolutely no AI use, and I won't edit AI-generated work.
Bookings are always open!A mystical background of golden celestial bodies, clouds, stars, and constellations with an arched window and the following text: 
Get to know me
I am a book-loving, witchy vibes, cozy gaming, anime-watching, hockey-loving Canadian girl.
My favourite author is Terry Pratchett.
My favourite manga is Way of the Househusband.
My favourite Big-3 anime is Bleach.
I collect crystals and norebooks.
I'm working on writing in my notebooks for real.
I mostly read eBooks because of space constraints.
I like autumn the best.
I really enjoy Hallmark Christmas movies.A 5-panel grid with the book covers for The Pumpkin Spice Cafe, A Magic Steeped in Poison, Temple of Swoon, Water Moon, and the center panel has a photo of my manga collection, including Spy x Family, Sakamoto Days, The Way of the Househusband, A Yakuza's Guide to Babysitting, I'm the Villainess so I'm Taming the Final Boss and Witch Hat Atelier. 

Text reads: Some of my faves!
Bottom Text reads: Have you read them?
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 12/06/2026
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 09/06/2026
I offer a free discovery call so we can talk about your needs. I also provide a free 1,000-word sample for manuscripts and other large projects. I never use AI on client work. I'm a member of the Editorial Freelancers Association and ACES. I have a certificate from Proofread Anywhere.
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Claire Bentley @cbentleywriter.bsky.social · 08/06/2026
Are you looking for a freelance fiction editor? 🙂 I’m trained, CIEP-registered, and an ALLi partner member. I do free sample edits. I don’t use gen-AI. And I’m a writer too, so I know many of the challenges 😅 I have availability from October. Please get in touch if you’re interested 🙂
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 09/06/2026
Novel writing can feel like a juggling act: You're keeping track of characters, settings, timelines, personalities, actions, and more. In my latest newsletter, I share a few tips on how to maintain consistency in your manuscript. mail.eileensproofreading.com/preview/2002...
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Does maintaining consistency in your novel feel like a juggling act?
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 28/05/2026
Does it really matter if you use the Oxford comma or avoid it? Even the style guides can’t agree on this comma. Just remember to be consistent with your choice. Unless it will muddle a sentence's meaning. Then do the opposite. eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/the-o...
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The Oxford Comma: With Examples that don't Involve Famous People
The Oxford comma, also known as the serial comma, is a controversial little mark. There have been disagreements on its necessity ever since its introduction in 1905 by Horace Hart, a printer at the Ox...
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 14/05/2026
Myth: Your copyeditor will rip your manuscript apart and call you a terrible author. Truth: Your copyeditor will cheer you on and strive to help you succeed. In today's blog, I talk about a few misconceptions about professional copyeditors and proofreaders. eileensproofreading.com/f/six-miscon...
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Six Misconceptions about Copyeditors and Proofreaders
What mistaken beliefs do authors, new ones in particular, have about copyeditors and proofreaders?
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 08/05/2026
One of many reasons Copilot should not be used for research—its answers make no sense.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 07/05/2026
Don't be afraid to bend the guidelines and let your voice shine through. Comma splices for action scenes. Run-ons for rambling thoughts. Slang for a teen character. Properly perfect English is boring. mail.eileensproofreading.com/preview/2002...
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Your Author Voice—No One Should Erase It
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 29/04/2026
Why readers quit reading your mystery. A boatload of grammar and consistency errors. Characters who are unrealistic and unrelatable. Actions that defy logic. Slow pacing. A puzzle that's unfair. #CopyEditor #CopyEditing #Mystery #Fiction eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/why-r...
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Why Readers Turn Away from Your Mystery Novel and How to Fix it
What is it about a compelling mystery that pulls me in?
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Taylor 💙🌙🌈 | Fiction Editor @tdashedits.bsky.social · 29/04/2026
I'm a black female editor who would like to work with black and brown writers. I want to help you bring your whimsical and fantastical stories to the wider world. I offer a free 45-minute consult/get-to-know-you call, so let's chat! tdashedits.com/services #bvm #writersky #editor #indieauthor
A photo of my business card, which reads: Taylor Dashiell, Freelance Fiction Editor. Services include: developmental editing, copy editing & proofreading, and beta reading. The website is tee dash edits dot com. Email is tee Dashiell dot edits at gee mail dot com.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 23/04/2026
Inconsistencies can pull readers out of your novel. Detective Crooks notes one large window in the room where the murder took place. But later, that large window turns into two small windows. The room didn't magically shift. #copyeditor #fiction eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/consi...
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Consistency in Mysteries: Why It Matters to Your Readers
You’re sitting in your easy chair, a fluffy blanket over your legs, a cup of coffee (or tea) beside you, and that novel you’ve been looking forward to reading all week on your lap. You’re on chapter f...
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 21/04/2026
Inconsistencies can pull readers out of your novel. Detective Bell drives to a restaurant fifty miles away. He leaves home at 9:45 a.m. and arrives at 10:00 a.m. He did not speed over a hundred miles an hour, teleport, or use magic. #copyeditor #fiction eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/consi...
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Consistency in Mysteries: Why It Matters to Your Readers
You’re sitting in your easy chair, a fluffy blanket over your legs, a cup of coffee (or tea) beside you, and that novel you’ve been looking forward to reading all week on your lap. You’re on chapter f...
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Claire Bentley @cbentleywriter.bsky.social · 21/04/2026
Happy Tuesday! (If such an event is possible 🙃) Are you looking for a freelance fiction editor? I’m trained, CIEP-registered, and an ALLi partner member. I offer free sample edits. I DO NOT use gen-AI. Prices are listed on my website. Please get in touch if you’re interested 🙂
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 13/04/2026
How is searching for the copyeditor ✍🏻 who is right for you and your manuscript like couch 🛋️ shopping? I was inspired to write this after sofa shopping with my sister last week. 🌟 Guess what? I will complete a 1,000-word sample copyedit of your manuscript—and it's free! 🌟
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It's best to test each sofa before deciding which one fits your booty best. That's why just picking any old couch online isn't the best idea. It may look comfortable. But when it gets delivered, you may find it to be so hard that you can't get cozy or so soft that you sink into it and can't get up. 

It's best to test out the person you're considering by asking them to complete a sample copyedit. That's why just hiring someone online without seeing how they work isn't the best idea. They may be cheap. But when you get your manuscript back, you may find added errors or a complete erasure of your writing style because they ran it through AI.

Guess what? I will complete a 1,000-word sample copyedit of your manuscript, so you can see how I can get your writing clear and as error-free as humanly possible so you can publish with confidence—and it's free!

I work with both fiction and nonfiction.

Interested? Want to learn more?

Message me here. Or email me at eileen@eileensproofreading.com.

I look forward to hearing from you.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 06/04/2026
I had to give up on this puzzle. Not enough variety in color. 😕 It bored me. Readers also get bored without variety. Make sure your characters don't all speak the same way. Make sure your sentences vary in length. 📝 Then hire a copyeditor to catch anything else that could bore your readers.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 05/04/2026
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N. N. Light's Book Heaven #NNLBH @nnlightsbookheaven.bsky.social · 02/04/2026
Muskets, Mutts, and Murder ) by S.A. Kazlo Who used a real musket ball and why? Samantha can’t believe the kind and patient man who helped her all those years ago to pass math would do such a thing. substack.com/@nnlightsboo... #booksky #cozymystery
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 02/04/2026
What do readers expect from a mystery novel? What can you do to meet those expectations? Why did I stop believing in the Easter Bunny? 🐰 Read my latest newsletter to find out. And please subscribe. The link is in the comments. —————————————————————————— preview.mailerlite.io/preview/2002...
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What do readers expect from a mystery novel?
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 31/03/2026
Have you ever been yanked out of a story because something doesn't make sense? I certainly have. What do I mean by consistency in novels. Why does it even matter? Read my latest blog to find out. eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/consi...
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Consistency in Mysteries: Why It Matters to Your Readers
You’re sitting in your easy chair, a fluffy blanket over your legs, a cup of coffee (or tea) beside you, and that novel you’ve been looking forward to reading all week on your lap. You’re on chapter f...
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Erin Brenner (she/her) @ebrenner.bsky.social · 28/03/2026
Freelancers have to wear all the hats in their business. Software can help us complete repetitive tasks. Join me for my next webinar with @editorscanada.bsky.social to learn to use AI safely and confidently for business tasks: webinars.editors.ca/upcoming_web... #FreelanceEditing #BizTips
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Meaghan Steeves @choicewordsedit.bsky.social · 30/03/2026
Looking to prepare your writing for publishing? I’m a trained freelance nonfiction copy editor and writer. If you have a project you’d like some help with, get in touch! I offer free sample edits up to 1,000 words (for full manuscripts), as well as 15-minute discovery calls to discuss your needs.👩🏻‍💻📖
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Adrian Van Young @bopgoth.bsky.social · 30/03/2026
I'm currently accepting clients & the manuscripts they love in my new-ish capacity as a professional freelance editor of fiction and creative non-fiction. So, you know, if you or anyone you know is in need of such a thing, please send yourself or them my way--DM or email.
As I believe I've mentioned on here once or even several times before, I am currently accepting clients & the manuscripts they love in my new-ish capacity as a professional freelance editor of fiction (short stories, novels), and creative non-fiction (essays, memoirs.) So, you know, if you or anyone you know is in need of such a thing, please send yourself or them my way. 

Speaking of which: with the help of my older son, Sebastian, I also made an INFOGRAPHIC (impressed?!!!) of myself looking all piercing and beardy, which is posted below. Share widely, please! Or just hit me up directly, because my queue is wide-open. DM or email.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 25/03/2026
I loved this book and will refer to it when I get around to writing my own novel. I highly recommend it to any author who wants to get their manuscript in the best shape possible before hiring a professional editor. She also has a nonfiction version.
Book with yellow cover with an illustration of a quill pen. The purple writing says, Self-editing Essentials for Fiction: Polishing plot scene characters and prose (by) Katie Chambers.
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Judy L Mohr @judylmohr.com · 19/03/2026
I'll be the first to admit that editing is expensive. But you are paying for an editor's time, and their time has value. They aren't reading your writing for the pure joy of it (though it is a bonus if we are enjoying what we're reading). #AmEditing #WritingCommunity
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The Real Costs of Editing. Here we go again!
We editors seem to be in this "damned if we do, damned if we don't" position. Many writers believe ripping them off, meanwhile, we need to pay our bills.
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Jaci Menard (she/her) | Deep Spark Editing @jacimenard.bsky.social · 19/03/2026
Are you an author getting ready to publish? I’m a copyeditor and proofreader who would love to help polish your manuscript so it’s ready to share with the world! I edit a variety of genres and my editing is encouraging and easy to follow. Feel free to contact me for more info! deepsparkediting.com
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 20/03/2026
Talking with others helps me become a better copyeditor and proofreader. It can help you become a better author. Thanks to an incident in first grade, I feared talking in groups. Now I enjoy conversing with others. Read my blog to learn more. eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/dont-...
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Don't Go It Alone: How Conversations Can Improve Your Novel
One afternoon in first grade, I was resting my head and listening to “Who Built the Ark,” a favorite song of mine. Hey, I was only six. The other children wouldn’t stop talking. I was getting grouchy....
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 16/03/2026
Show, vs tell: part 2. I shared four reasons to show in my previous post. Now I'm sharing four reasons to tell. Let me know if you have any questions.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 16/03/2026
Show, don't tell. When should you use each in your novel? Here I share four reasons to show. In my next post, I share four reasons to tell.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 09/03/2026
Following my husband as we take our first walk in a park this year. After the snow and freezing weather of February, it's lovely to get a day like this.
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Moriah Richard @moriahrichard.bsky.social · 09/03/2026
Looking for editorial help? My calendar is now open! Reach out to get a free 1k-word edit and see if we'd be a great fit. #writingcommunity #amwriting #amediting #writinglife www.moriahrichard.com/services-store
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Store 2 — Moriah Richard, Writer & Editor
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 09/03/2026
Happy Monday! Did you know that while my niche is mystery, I also copyedit and proofread Articles Website content Blog posts Newsletters Ads Interested? Let me know. eileensproofreading.com eileen@eileensproofreading.com
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Eileen's Proofreading & Copyediting Services
Preparing Your Writing for Your Audience with Quality Editing and Proofreading
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 06/03/2026
As an author, do you struggle with all the "rules" and advice on grammar and punctuation? Do you freeze when trying to determine when it's okay to go against convention to make your writing even better? I talk about this in my latest newsletter. preview.mailerlite.io/forms/200299...
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 03/03/2026
Do you know the intention of "Show, don't tell"? Hint: It doesn't mean you should never tell. When is it better to show? When is it better to tell? I answer these questions in my blog. eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/when-...
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When to Show and When to Tell in Your Novel
“Show, don’t tell.” You hear it in writing courses. You read it in articles. But does it mean you need to change or eliminate every paragraph that names actions or emotions?
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 24/02/2026
Why don't I both copyedit and proofread your manuscript? Because whatever I miss while I copyedit isn't going to magically jump out at me while I proofread the exact same material. Having a second professional proofreader go through your manuscript ensures more errors will be caught.
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Eileen Pizzi @eileen-pizzi.bsky.social · 17/02/2026
Where do you stand with adverbs in your novel? Are you chopping every single one out? Or are you being strategic and cutting only those adverbs that clutter your sentences? I explain more about this in today's blog. eileensproofreading.com/blog/f/adver...
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Adverbs: When to Cut and When to Keep
We’ve all heard the rule, or a rule similar to it. You know, the one that says not to use adverbs in your novel.
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