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Academic, educator, silversmith. Researching arts ed, school change, leaders work. Patter academic writing blog - Patthomson.net. Semi-retired. Working part-time @ U Nottingham & U South Australia. #FAcSS

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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 03/09/2026
This week on patter. Three playful ways to deal with a fierce inner critic. patthomson.net/2026/09/02/w...
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write with the criticism you’re afraid of
What do you do if you have a bit of a writing block?  Sometimes not being able to generate a sentence is the problem. But just as often it’s not –  you have the ideas but something else is st…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 23/08/2026
This week on patter I’ve written about rereading the things you jot down in your researcher journal patthomson.net/2026/08/23/d...
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developing your research journal jottings
Walter Benjamin works on/with his notebooks Most researchers are told early on to keep a research journal. The journal is a place to record stuff – ideas, possible lines of inquiry, potential…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 11/08/2026
This week a little game about writerly fear of being read patthomson.net/2026/08/11/a...
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A writing-without-fear game
Doctoral researchers sometimes suffer from  lack of confidence about their writing. They can construct a sentence, a paragraph and a whole chapter. But they have difficulty when they imagine a supe…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 02/08/2026
This week patter has a writing strategy to integrate reflection and reflexivity. patthomson.net/2026/07/30/r...
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reflection and reflexivity: a strategy for academic writing
I wrote recently about the difference between reflection and reflexivity. Reflection looks back at what you have done and asks what you can learn from it. Reflexivity turns the lens on you, the per…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 14/07/2026
This week another take on using quotations patthomson.net/2026/07/13/h...
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How to use quotations – ask who is carrying the luggage…
“If you’re going to quote other scholars, not as primary sources whose work you mean to analyse, but because they’ve got insights you want to support yours, make sure they’re carr…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 07/07/2026
I’ve got a bit tired of hearing that nobody at all will read your thesis. patthomson.net/2026/07/07/p...
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people do read your thesis
That tweet is back. You know the one. A PhD thesis, it says, is the only book in the world read cover to cover by exactly three people: the author, the proofreader, and the examiner. The screenshot…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 30/06/2026
This week I’m looking at the difference between reflection and reflexivity. patthomson.net/2026/06/30/w...
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what’s the difference between reflection and reflexivity?
When you first started postgraduate study, someone probably told you that you had to be reflexive. You may even have been told to include a section on reflexivity in your thesis. No, you don’t have…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 21/06/2026
This week I’ve worked on a ROAM strategy for first drafts. It’s a strategy about readers, objectives action and impressions and draws on Bernhoff s Writing without Bullshit. patthomson.net/2026/06/21/r...
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ROAM: four questions before you draft
Josh Bernoff, who wrote Writing Without Bullshit, had a suggestion for anyone about to start drafting. Work out your ROAM first. What’s ROAM I hear you ask? Well, it’s a set of ques…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 16/06/2026
A playful strategy for reflecting on data analysis decisions patthomson.net/2026/06/15/h...
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have a word or two with your data
When we work with our data we have to decide who and what gets to be in the story. A number goes in the table or it doesn’t. A quote earns half a page, a passing mention, or nothing at all. T…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 07/06/2026
On the importance of revision and learning with George Saunders patthomson.net/2026/06/07/l...
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Love your revisions
George Saunders won the Man Booker prize in 2017 with his novel Lincoln in the Bardo. Earlier that year he wrote about his revising process. My method is: I imagine a meter mounted in my forehead, …
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 01/06/2026
A bit of serious fun patthomson.net/2026/06/01/h...
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How to be Reviewer 2
Everyone in academia knows Reviewer 2. You ‘ve probably received their comments. You may even in a dark moment, have been them. This post is a practical guide to achieving full Reviewer 2 status. I…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 25/05/2026
Thinking about your post thesis plan? These three words can help patthomson.net/2026/05/25/k...
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Key words – dissemination communication, sharing
Doctoral researchers are sometimes asked in their viva what their plans for dissemination are. Gulp. But this is a question worth thinking about. It’s not a trick question. Examiners are genu…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 18/05/2026
This is a question that’s been bothering me lately patthomson.net/2026/05/18/w...
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who should be checking for AI generated references?
Graham Kendall studies academic publishing. He recently ran the numbers on what peer review costs the UK higher education sector. His calculations are worth quoting: “In the UK…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 10/05/2026
This week Dr Rachel Lehner-Mehr talks about turning her doctoral thesis into a scholarly book patthomson.net/2026/05/10/f...
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From thesis to monograph
This is a guest post written by Dr Rachel Lehner-Mear. She has recently published a book reporting her doctoral research on mothers and primary school homework. There’s nothing quite like holding y…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 03/05/2026
This week I’m revisiting coherence But in research design patthomson.net/2026/05/03/k...
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key word – coherence in research design
Coherence in research design is not the same as coherence in academic writing, although the two are related. Research design coherence is sometimes described through the metaphor of a red thread, o…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 27/04/2026
This week I look at what it means for scholars to write concisely patthomson.net/2026/04/26/k...
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key word – coherence in academic writing
Gratuitous pic of my dog Ted. A coherent piece of writing is one where the parts connect to the whole. That sounds obvious, but it can be difficult to achieve. That’s partly because the whole is su…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 20/04/2026
This week patter has been reading about knowledge production as place making patthomson.net/2026/04/20/p...
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placemaking and the academic writer
I’ve just read a paper about epistemic placemaking. Epistemic placemaking is equipping and arranging places for knowledge work. The paper suggests that students might actively co-design t…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 12/04/2026
What does ‘concise’ mean in academic writing? patthomson.net/2026/04/12/k...
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key word – concision
Concision is not the same as brevity. A short piece of writing can be wasteful with its words, and a long piece can be meaning-full right to the last sentence. Getting concise is about getting clea…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 06/04/2026
Academic writing and procrastination revisited patthomson.net/2026/04/06/i...
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in defence of procrastination
Procrastination often gets a bad rap in academic writing advice circles. It’s generally seen as a problem to be managed, a symptom of anxiety or perfectionism. In other words, it’s a pr…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 30/03/2026
This week I’m looking at forwarding, a key aspect of working with literatures patthomson.net/2026/03/30/f...
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forwarding – writing with other people’s texts
We’ve probably all read papers where the writer has treated the literature as something to be surveyed and reported. the result often takes the shape of the dreaded laundry list, where the writer p…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 22/03/2026
Where does the idea of writing as thinking come from and what’s it actually mean … patthomson.net/2026/03/22/t...
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the process of writing
People often refer to writing as thinking without necessarily knowing where and how this idea developed. It is in part from Linda Flower and John Hayes who published a paper in 1981 offering a…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 16/03/2026
Vale Habermas and academic writing patthomson.net/2026/03/15/w...
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what’s Habermas got to do with academic writing?
Jürgen Habermas died on Saturday 14 March, 2026 in Starnberg, near Munich. He was 96. The news has been moving through academic social media in the way these things do, with people sharing half-rem…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 16/03/2026
Vale Habermas and academic writing patthomson.net/2026/03/15/w...
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what’s Habermas got to do with academic writing?
Jürgen Habermas died on Saturday 14 March, 2026 in Starnberg, near Munich. He was 96. The news has been moving through academic social media in the way these things do, with people sharing half-rem…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 08/03/2026
Academic writers often feel uncomfortable but that’s often OK Here’s why patthomson.net/2026/03/08/g...
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getting comfortable with being uncomfortable
Good academic writing means sitting with a discomfort that never entirely goes away. It’s not a discomfort that comes from having nothing to say. Most of us have more than enough ideas crowding the…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 02/03/2026
Avoid reader déjà vu The difference between abstract and introduction. patthomson.net/2026/03/02/n...
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not an echo chamber: abstract v. introduction
Imagine a doctoral researcher finishing their introduction. They’ve carefully crafted the opening pages that situate their research question in the existing literature. Then they turn to write the …
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Toby Greany @tobygreany.bsky.social · 27/02/2026
New blogpost announcing launch of our Sustainable School Leadership report: "Without greater attention to sustainable leadership the White Paper vision might never be fully realised." @patthomson.bsky.social @twperry1.bsky.social @uonsoe.bsky.social sustainableschoolleadership.uk/2026/02/27/s...
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Sustainable School Leadership Final Report Published
This week we have launched the final report from the Sustainable School Leadership research project at the end of our 3 year mixed methods study across England, Northern Ireland and Scotland, funde…
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Toby Greany @tobygreany.bsky.social · 25/02/2026
The final report from the Sustainable School Leadership project is out! A 3-year study across England, Northern Ireland & Scotland, funded by #esrc #educationresearchprogramme Available here: www.nottingham.ac.uk/research/gro... @patthomson.bsky.social @twperry1.bsky.social @samfr.bsky.social
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UoN Education @uonsoe.bsky.social · 25/02/2026
The final report is now available for the Sustainable School Leadership project led by @tobygreany.bsky.social with @patthomson.bsky.social @twperry1.bsky.social and Mike Collins. sustainableschoolleadership.uk
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 21/02/2026
Riffing as a strategy for academic writing, good for clarifying ideas patthomson.net/2026/02/21/r...
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riffing your way to meaning
In blues, jazz, and music that traces its roots to those genres, the riff is a repeated chord progression or set of notes that ties a song together. A guitar riff returns again and again in a song …
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 16/02/2026
This week patter talks about peer review as cruel optimism patthomson.net/2026/02/16/t...
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the cruel optimism of peer review
A relation of cruel optimism exists when something you desire is actually an obstacle to your flourishing. It might involve food, or a kind of love; it might be a fantasy of the good life, or a pol…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 08/02/2026
Include a writing retreat in your 2026 plans patthomson.net/2026/02/07/w...
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why go on a writing retreat
I’ve been thinking about all the writing that I need to get done this year. There’s three book contracts, yes three, and a host of papers which are undoubtedly going to need revising. Looking…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 30/01/2026
I’m often asked if it’s OK to put citations in abstracts. Here’s an answer patthomson.net/2026/01/30/s...
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should abstracts have citations?
When you’re deep into writing a journal article, it’s easy to feel that every claim needs immediate validation, every statement must be backed up by a citation. This impulse becomes par…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 22/01/2026
It’s important to recognise and celebrate small academic writing successes patthomson.net/2026/01/22/s...
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small successes count
There’s a particular kind of exhaustion that comes from staring at a word count that’s meant to reach 80,000 or 100,000, knowing you’re only at 12,000. Or from looking at a journa…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 14/01/2026
Endings can be tricky for academic writers. Take a lead from flash fiction patthomson.net/2026/01/13/e...
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ending well
Don’t be tricksy. As with all stories, don’t play tricks on the reader. Don’t bring a rabbit out of the hat at the last moment. If there is a big reveal, make sure it’s planted well in advance. Don…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 08/01/2026
So it begins … on the usefulness of starting at the beginning patthomson.net/2026/01/08/b...
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Beginning well
One of the most paralysing questions for academic writers is often the simplest: where do I start? For early career researchers staring at months of data, dozens of theoretical sources, and a loomi…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 08/12/2025
Following on from last week I have a few pointers for writing about your researcher positionality patthomson.net/2025/12/07/w...
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Writing About Your Researcher Positioning
So you know what researcher positioning is and why it matters. Now comes the practical question: how do you actually write about it in your thesis? This is where many doctoral researchers get a bit…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 01/12/2025
A short guide to researcher positioning patthomson.net/2025/11/30/w...
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what is “researcher positioning”?
You’ve probably come across the term “researcher positioning” in methods texts or heard it thrown around in doctoral seminars, and perhaps wondered what al the fuss is about. Posi…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 24/11/2025
This week on patter The difference between methods and methodology. A short explanation patthomson.net/2025/11/23/m...
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methodology v. methods
Miss Marple, the quintessential ethnographer If you’re a doctoral researcher, you’re often expected to understand the relationship between methodology and methods from the get go. These two t…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 18/11/2025
This week a very short guide to writing a thesis or research problem statement patthomson.net/2025/11/18/t...
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the problem statement
Most research proposals, dissertations and funding bids start off with some kind of problem statement. A research/thesis problem statement needs to do several interconnected things to work well. At…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 09/11/2025
Three strategies to link paragraphs and improve the flow of your academic writing. patthomson.net/2025/11/08/t...
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three ways to link paragraphs
One of the things that separates just OK academic writing from really good academic writing is how smoothly it flows. You’ve probably read papers where every paragraph feels like a fresh star…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 02/11/2025
Research aims and objectives aren’t the same thing but are related It helps to understand the differences and connections patthomson.net/2025/11/01/r...
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research aims vs. objectives – what’s the difference?
You’re finally sitting down to write your research proposal and you’ve hit that section where you need to outline your aims and objectives. You stare at the page. Aren’t these bas…
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Ros Edwards @rosedwards.bsky.social · 30/10/2025
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 26/10/2025
Doing a PhD can feel like wandering through a forest with no map. You’re constantly questioning whether you’re smart enough, working hard enough or heading in the right direction. If you’re feeling this way, you’re not alone. More importantly, you’re not broken. patthomson.net/2025/10/25/b...
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Building confidence during your PhD
Doing a PhD can feel like wandering through a forest with no map. You’re constantly questioning whether you’re smart enough, working hard enough or heading in the right direction. If yo…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 19/10/2025
Two research terms to get clear on, contributions and significance patthomson.net/2025/10/19/r...
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research contribution vs significance
If you’re a PhDer, you’ve probably heard these terms thrown around in seminars, thesis committees, and paper reviews: “What’s your contribution?” and “Why is thi…
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 15/10/2025
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 11/10/2025
If you’re writing a discussion and conclusion it helps to know their relationship difference between claims and conclusion patthomson.net/2025/10/11/c...
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claims vs contributions
If you’re deep in the throes of doctoral work, you’ve probably had that moment where someone asks you about your “contribution to knowledge” and you freeze up like a deer in…
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Thesiswhisperer @thesiswhisperer.bsky.social · 07/10/2025
Can you help us boost this signal? UTS colleagues are doing a governance project to talk back to the consultant led 'reform' of their university. Please repost!! UTS people please have your say! docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1F...
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UTS Governance Project Survey: A Staff-Led Collaborative Project
The UTS Governance Project is an independent, staff-led initiative to strengthen transparency, accountability and participation in how our university is run. Inspired by the ANU Governance Project, ...
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 04/10/2025
It helps to understand the difference and relationship between research results and claims patthomson.net/2025/10/04/r...
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results vs claims
Research results are not the same as research claims. This is one of those distinctions that sounds simple but can trip researchers up. But understanding the difference can be really helpful. …
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Pat Thomson @patthomson.bsky.social · 27/09/2025
Dealing with a toxic review? Write a Dear Reviewer letter… patthomson.net/2025/09/27/d...
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Dear Reviewer
Every academic writer knows the sting of a harsh review. Every one. Including me. We’ve all had them. The review that is scathing, brutal and toxic. The immediate impulse is often to fire bac…
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Brigitte Nerlich @bnerlich.bsky.social · 26/09/2025
Today's post delves a bit into the history of #sociology, memories of Erving #Goffman, and his use of #metaphor as method makingsciencepublic.com/2025/09/26/e...
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Erving Goffman: Memories, method and metaphors
If you do sociology or, indeed, any social science whatsoever, you’ll come across the work of Erving Goffman. I have done too but never engaged with it as much as I should have done. This was…
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