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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 25/09/2026

You don't need to spoil the ending in a query letter. Only a synopsis requires all of the plot twists and final ending.

Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 25/09/2026

Interesting premise, but there's so much happening that it's hard to follow. Perhaps there's a way to incorporate a title for the leads that will define their relationships. This should add clarity to what the focal point should be.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

I'm drawn to resurrecting a war god for fun 🤣 & El Dictator is the cherry on top! What I want to know is why Merche is the one to stop him? Especially when she's unqualified. Hint at the link between the MC & the villain to raise the stakes and this pitch will soar. Good luck 🤞

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Let's highlight the stakes and push that freaky fungus to the top. Hint at the link between the missing mathematician & fungus problem- if it is. Then tell us why it has to be Ben! The intrigue is there, we just need to tease the bigger plot points here.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Pulled in by the villainous mycelium! Now let's simplify the plot. I'm not familiar with the comps, but that's a me problem, not you 😅 I suggest embracing some creative spacing cuz you're scaring us with STEM. Leading with math might send most readers running. But your thriller vibes are there.

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#DVpit - Diverse Voices Pitch @dvpit.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Today we're hosting #AskDV (Q&A with lit agents) @ 1-2PM ET to prep for #DVpit! Using #AskDV ask lit agents about pitching, querying, & publishing! Join us & @jimmccarthydgb.bsky.social @laurenabramo.bsky.social @stutitelidevara.bsky.social @rebeccaw04.bsky.social @sandraproudman.bsky.social

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Join us on Bluesky for a Q&A with agents before #DVpit!

To participate, post your questions on Bluesky with the #AskDV hashtag between
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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

I'm torn on this pitch. It has the makings of something exciting, especially for the MG space, but the stakes are missing. What happens if the evil lord escapes? Do the secrets make her part of the hunters or hunted? Bring the conflict to the forefront of this pitch to make the plot unique.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Sun Wukong doesn't automatically bring up Monkey King references in most audiences. His name isn't as popular unless you're into that lore 😅 Still enjoy this pitch. Best of luck to you!

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Love the Cinder comp! This pitch is solid! Best of luck on this one.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Your second pitch with the comps and list is cleaner. But, I enjoy the plot details of this one. In reading both pitches, I'm curious as to whether this is a multi-POV story. Also want to know why Letyf would join the quest as an elf. Excellent rep and interesting premise. Best of luck.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

I like this one a lot. It frames the action well and combines the emotional struggle the MC faces! Best of luck to you with this one!

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

This one is better since we're getting a clearer vision of the plot. Still a bit wordy for the second half. My lingering question is what are the stakes if she fails?

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

The love triangle and restaurant rivalry setup is fun! While I get the desire to push your qualifications with the mentorship and grant wins, you're selling the story, not you at this moment. Keep that in your bio and anyone interested will know.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Also love the humor here! There's so much you've packed into this pitch.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Of all the pitches, this one is my favorite. But it's a personal preference since I'm a fan of fake to real dating tropes! All of the pitches are relatively strong, so best of luck!

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

This one is stronger than the last one I commented on. Still want more recent comps. This shows you're serious about publishing and are up to date on recent works. Comping a story that's over 20 years old is tough.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Finally, pair the offer with the decision. My curiosity is whether he remembers if his old life was so amazing that he'd want to return to it.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

This one's a looker! You've got a list of hard hitting themes. When rereading, the question is why wouldn't a suicidal teen give up everything to live your old life? Perhaps reordering the action might make the choice more difficult. Lead with fight, then reveal of reincarnated fae.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Essentially, you want to determine what makes your story stand out from others. What's unique about the world or the lead? Highlight your uniqueness and leave the reader with some lingering questions.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

These are some heavy hitting comps! But a bit dated. Consider finding at least 2 -3 newer ones to use as well. "Processing grief" sounds so clinical but I don't have a better suggestion for rewording it. Premise is solid, but I need higher stakes. Why does the monster feed on stories?

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

This sounds like a barrel of laughs with a side of Monkey King hijinks! Also feels like a "what's the worst that can happen?" scenario. I almost want a checklist missive version of this in Monkey King's voice! Good luck with this one.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Throws me off. I'm a fan of questions since they force me to think about an answer. So rather than optimizing her ability to love, perhaps you can pose a question that equates being a perfect mother with losing the ability to love? Not sure if that helps 😅

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

I'm intrigued, but still need clarity. 1st - comps & hashtags help me ground this pitch. I was slow on the uptake to recognize the satire - which should drive the pitch. I want to laugh out loud but also cringe from it. The pitch leaves me befuddled and wanting more. I think the word "optimize"

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

New beasts. This is good. Now I need a 1 -2 sentence plot summary. That's it. Ex. 14yo Ravi unlocks the secret to wish-making in the midst of a string of outcast murders. Can he save the lost on the back of his slow ride before being targeted himself? (Granted, no clue how far off I am on plot!)

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 24/09/2026

Your comps establish marketability w/ popular MG works. The rest of the pitches need tightening. Simplify your pitch by focusing on the MC, the stakes & the inciting incident. Pitches can be very formulaic to start & then you add your flare. You give us comps & highlights - Hindu lore, new magic &

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 23/09/2026

What you have feels more like a back blurb versus a pitch. Give us the thought provoking sales pitch instead of a summary. Good luck with this one 🥰

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 23/09/2026

Following up on the first pitch, make sure to use the kidlit hashtags for this one. That changes the way the pitch reads. Titles & character names aren't as important (hate to say that), so use the additional characters to pull us in. What's the heart of the story? What are you challenging?

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 23/09/2026

I'm new to memoir pitches, but this gives me cozy, self-discovery vibes. The 1st line pulls me in & I'm curious about what drives the story. I'll defer to others' expertise regarding inclusion of the title, but for me it isn't as important as hammering home your messaging. Or inciting action?

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 23/09/2026

Great messaging, especially for kidlit. Is this a planned graphic novel? Is that what you meant by "comics"? At first I thought of actual comedians working on environmental advocacy, but now I'm not sure. Let's make it clearer about what the stakes are & why THESE kids need to be the hero.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 23/09/2026

This is interesting, and I ♥️ rep! But the use of "road trip" reduces the urgency of the story. What are the stakes? Is there a time limit? What happens to mom if they don't make it? Without stakes, this sounds like a cozy family tale which is great, but doesn't pull me as much.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 23/09/2026

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 22/09/2026

Was he exiled? In hiding? Give us a stronger pic of the world and its stakes here. There are really cool ideas like reincarnation vs immortal hunters. How do these play out and why are they important. Broad concepts can be appealing, but let us know why this world stands out.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 22/09/2026

I'm drawn by the comps and the fantasy images. The art style is eye-catching & gives us a good idea of the world. However, the pitch needs to match the intensity of the GN panel to keep our attention. First, let's highlight the reason the son needs to clear his name? What happened?

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 22/09/2026

Second, the potential romance subplot is intriguing with the hint of needed warmth. Images are AMAZING and I'm a sucker for chibis! I'd pick this up for the art style alone 😉

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 22/09/2026

This pitch has an interesting plot, but the road there is a bit too wordy. Let's simplify the "reasons" of being locked away since it competes with the eternal winter, which feels like the bigger draw. Give us a clear vision of the stakes with this winter and why the 2 characters need to escape.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 22/09/2026

The big secret is a draw, but you want to establish Lola's personality as the FMC and give more significance to the essay piece, especially if this act foreshadows the secret!

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 22/09/2026

As a RomCom fanatic, I'd love a clean descriptor for Lola that sets up the intended trope with the grumpy neighbor boy. In terms of the trip and family essay, this seems rather vague and not as pivotal to the romance storyline.

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 22/09/2026

Been on the road all day, but have finally found a moment to log on and review #PreDV pitches. Hopefully I'll provide some helpful suggestions to help you craft those winning pitches 🤗

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#DVpit - Diverse Voices Pitch @dvpit.bsky.social · 17/08/2026

Join us for #AskDV on SEPT 17, 2026 @ 4-5PM ET on Bluesky for a Q&A before #DVpit with agents @ericsmithrocks.bsky.social @allielevick.bsky.social @mwhatnall.bsky.social @tinyfairyhunter.bsky.social ! Post your questions on bsky with #AskDV on 9/17 @ 4-5PM ET For rules: dvpit.carrd.co/#askdv

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#DVpit - Diverse Voices Pitch @dvpit.bsky.social · 17/08/2026

Join us for #AskDV on SEPT 24, 2026 @ 1-2PM ET on Bluesky for a Q&A before #DVpit with agents @jimmccarthydgb.bsky.social @laurenabramo.bsky.social @stutitelidevara.bsky.social @rebeccaw04.bsky.social @sandraproudman.bsky.social For rules: dvpit.carrd.co/#askdv

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 17/08/2026

So excited to be moderating again! Looking forward to seeing all the amazing pitches 🥰🥰🥰

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#DVpit - Diverse Voices Pitch @dvpit.bsky.social · 30/03/2026

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 23/06/2026

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 09/06/2026

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 30/05/2026

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 30/05/2026

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 18/04/2026

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Patchree Jones is officially published 🎉 @patchreejones.bsky.social · 17/04/2026

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