Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P15: Pacing works well for the genre. Good writing. I feel like I know the MC intimately already and am invested in their upcoming mission. Would absolutely keep reading. 120 0
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL16: YA Fantasy. Unique premise and worldbuilding. But needs more info about main plot. Does MC flee home or not? Do creatures pose a threat? If not, what is the threat? Why is MC's story goal a secret at first? 120 0
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P16: Story starts in good place. Nice descriptions of setting and magic system. Feeling connected to MC. Overall, strong start and I think readers will crave more. 120 0
