Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL15: Adult Horror. P1 and P2 are straightforward and compelling. Unsure of the stakes, though. Why complete the initial goal if money is of no consequence, but purpose and love are? Or is the love interest dangerous, perhaps? 120
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P15: Pacing works well for the genre. Good writing. I feel like I know the MC intimately already and am invested in their upcoming mission. Would absolutely keep reading. 120
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL16: YA Fantasy. Unique premise and worldbuilding. But needs more info about main plot. Does MC flee home or not? Do creatures pose a threat? If not, what is the threat? Why is MC's story goal a secret at first? 120
