Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P14: I like the prologue. It doesn't reveal too much and provides a solid hook. Slow-burn pacing and eerie tone is set. Initial pages provide enough character insight to propel me into more of the story. 150
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL15: Adult Horror. P1 and P2 are straightforward and compelling. Unsure of the stakes, though. Why complete the initial goal if money is of no consequence, but purpose and love are? Or is the love interest dangerous, perhaps? 120
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P15: Pacing works well for the genre. Good writing. I feel like I know the MC intimately already and am invested in their upcoming mission. Would absolutely keep reading. 120
