Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL14: Adult Thriller. Strong comps. Eager for this twisty plot. Stakes feel clear and build off set-up nicely. How does the reawakening of this strange character affect the MC's life? Not sure yet what role this entity plays in the MC's past or present yet, but think they pose some kind of threat. 140
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P14: I like the prologue. It doesn't reveal too much and provides a solid hook. Slow-burn pacing and eerie tone is set. Initial pages provide enough character insight to propel me into more of the story. 150
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL15: Adult Horror. P1 and P2 are straightforward and compelling. Unsure of the stakes, though. Why complete the initial goal if money is of no consequence, but purpose and love are? Or is the love interest dangerous, perhaps? 120