Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P12: Writing is good, especially in describing setting and world. I want to know more about MC in opening pages. What do they want in life? What are they struggling with? 130
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL13: Adult Romance. QL does good job of hooking me. Have MC's powers ever proven true? If not, MC may seem unreliable. And why doesn't MC want to confide truth in love interest at the start? What are the stakes of doing so? 120
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P13: Tone and writing style are perfect for the genre. Funny, quick, draws readers in. Good intro to MC and their specualtive dilemma. 130
