Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL12: MG Fantasy. MC's goal is clear, but summary is quite short and could be longer to explain plot better. What is their motivation? What internal conflict do they struggle with and why? Is their past unknown to them, and if so, why? 130
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P12: Writing is good, especially in describing setting and world. I want to know more about MC in opening pages. What do they want in life? What are they struggling with? 130
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL13: Adult Romance. QL does good job of hooking me. Have MC's powers ever proven true? If not, MC may seem unreliable. And why doesn't MC want to confide truth in love interest at the start? What are the stakes of doing so? 120
