Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL13: Adult Romance. QL does good job of hooking me. Have MC's powers ever proven true? If not, MC may seem unreliable. And why doesn't MC want to confide truth in love interest at the start? What are the stakes of doing so? 120
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P13: Tone and writing style are perfect for the genre. Funny, quick, draws readers in. Good intro to MC and their specualtive dilemma. 130
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL14: Adult Thriller. Strong comps. Eager for this twisty plot. Stakes feel clear and build off set-up nicely. How does the reawakening of this strange character affect the MC's life? Not sure yet what role this entity plays in the MC's past or present yet, but think they pose some kind of threat. 140
