una
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30+ MDNI, use the block button, leave me alone to play with my dolls 👒🐯 callunar.straw.page ko-fi.com/calluna42999 - will consider writing comms
30+ MDNI, use the block button, leave me alone to play with my dolls 👒🐯 callunar.straw.page ko-fi.com/calluna42999 - will consider writing comms
![Eight-page One Piece fancomic, Pre and Post Dressrosa
PAGE 1
[Panel 1] At night, before a bright full moon, Law stands at the railing of the Thousand Sunny, looking out over the sea with his back to the viewer.
[Panel 2] Luffy approaches Law from behind, his back also to the viewer. Law hears him coming and, without looking back at Luffy, says, “You should be sleeping.”
[Panel 3] Luffy steps up behind him, leaning playfully to the side with his arms folded behind his back, and says, “And you should be too, Torao.” Law continues to look out over the sea.
[Panel 4] Luffy leans against the railing, his hair and face glowing a little in the moonlight as he says, “You’re always out here thinking too hard.”
[Panel 5] The angle changes, so the viewer sees both Law and Luffy’s back and the huge, full moon glowing between them. Law has turned his head subtly towards Luffy, and Luffy asks, “What’cha thinking about?”](https://cdn.bsky.app/img/feed_thumbnail/plain/did:plc:rud67s6pwxattmuetbukp6tz/bafkreiejbj4lwqzeugcmrsn2zs5j6gjkboisa5tf2ne6jldxgxx3hpsvo4)
![PAGE 2
[Panel 1] The panel shows a close up of Law’s hand, his arms folded across his chest and the tattoos across one hand clear in the moonlight. His face can’t be seen as he says, “You.” Luffy, from off panel, asks, “Oh?” He laughs. “Shi shi shi. What about me?”
[Panel 2] Law’s hand tightens on his sleeve as he answers, “You. What you mean to me.”
[Panel 3] Luffy in profile, alone in the panel, casts a sidelong look. He doesn’t say anything, but he looks contemplative.
[Panel 4] The viewer sees Law and Luffy face-forward for the first time, both of them washed in bright moonlight. Law, with his arms still crossed and his head turned away from Luffy, seems uncomfortable with the direction the conversation has taken as he asks, “What does this alliance mean for you?” Luffy, with his arms crossed on the railing, asks, “What do you mean ‘what does it mean?’”
[Panel 5] An establishing shot showing the rigging of the Sunny. Luffy, off-panel, says, “It means we’re gonna take down Mingo.”
[Panel 6] Another establishing shot, this one showing the tree and swing on the lawn of the sunny. Luffy, still off-panel, says, “And after that, Kaido.”
[Panel 7] The viewer sees Law and Luffy against the railing again. Law has uncrossed his arms, but he’s still looking away from Luffy while Luffy leans toward him and grasps Law’s forearm with firm confidence as he says, “Whatever you need, Torao. We’ll do it together.”](https://cdn.bsky.app/img/feed_thumbnail/plain/did:plc:rud67s6pwxattmuetbukp6tz/bafkreiare4f4h2ksxvwppb4xw6gzaou6t6kziaqxbasvqyh45upcv75hcy)
![PAGE 3
[Panel 1] Law, facing the camera, looks somewhat uncomfortably as he looks down at Luffy’s hand which is still gripping his arm.
[Panel 2] Law raises his eyes to look straight at Luffy (which, in this panel, is also straight at the viewer) as he asks, “And what if I need you for more than just fighting?”
[Panel 3] The view changes to a wider view of the deck, with Law and Luffy connected by Luffy’s hand still on Law’s arm and the full moon in the distance framed perfectly between them. Luffy answers, “Then I’ll fight whatever Torao needs. Even himself.” Law protests, “You make it sound simple.” But Luffy assures him, “It is simple. You’re my friend, Torao. And I’m always gonna be here for you.”
[Panel 4] Luffy moves closer to Law and now holds both of his forearms. He’s looking up at Law with a serious, determined expression. Law, now obscuring part of the moon, says, “I… I don’t want you to just be here for me. Not just as… a friend.”
[Panel 5] A close-up of Law’s eyes. His expression looks hard, serious. Off-panel, Luffy says, “Torao… if you need something more, then tell me. I’ll figure it out.”
[Panel 6] A close-up of Luffy’s eyes. He also looks serious, his brow furrowed. Off-panel, Law says, “You can’t just--you don’t understand.”
[Panel 7] A close up of Law and Luffy in profile, their faces close together but their height difference pronounced. Luffy says, “Then make me understand.”](https://cdn.bsky.app/img/feed_thumbnail/plain/did:plc:rud67s6pwxattmuetbukp6tz/bafkreig5wox2k57db4qkmgubivqwkmjfz6rlimm5m2nnho6dhyllk3rjmy)
![PAGE 4
[Panel 1] The camera turns to show Law’s back. His shoulders are hunched, his arms bent, and though his head is mostly obscuring Luffy’s, it’s obvious that Law has kissed Luffy. Luffy’s hands hover just over Law’s waist, his fingers splayed apart--he’s surprised by the kiss, and his body hasn’t reacted just yet. In the background, the full moon casts a bright reflection on the sea below and the two captains.
[Panel 2] A close-up of Luffy’s left hand, moving as though to touch Law’s waist.
[Panel 3] A close-up of Law’s right eye, closed tightly.
[Panel 4] A close-up of Law’s right eye, opening wide--he’s realized what he’s just done.
[Panel 5] Law and Luffy in profile, now with space between them because Law has retreated quickly. His body language is tight and awkward, his shoulders pulled up to his ears and his eyes wide as he stammers, “I-I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have--that was--“ Luffy looks surprised, but before he can respond, Law says, “Shambles,” and the page fades to black.](https://cdn.bsky.app/img/feed_thumbnail/plain/did:plc:rud67s6pwxattmuetbukp6tz/bafkreic66nckrca5k5b3ls5uqi5hlzmqm2iierjfnhwmk7lov5f7fnyuii)
