Hi! I'm the wife! I don't think it's entirely possible to fix the plot as the energy of the songs doesn't allow for narrative build. I think it flubbed the ending a bit, but otherwise is more cohesive and coherent than Chess has any right to be.
Sara Love
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Thespian, dog-lover, and huge nerd.
