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Bria

@seshatediting.bsky.social
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Writer and editor w/ nearly a decade of experience in the academic and blog writing fields. If I'm not editing, I'm probably reading or playing a VN. Basically, I love a story! seshatediting.carrd.co www.etsy.com/shop/RoyalAzaleaPrintS…

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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
i made the hourly #planner of my dreams for fall 🍁🍂 (because sooo many either have one or two things but not the other or they're PLAIN af 😭). this guy is available on my #Etsy as an instant download printable (or digital file!) royalazaleaprintshop.etsy.com/listing/4584...
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
Good writing isn't about removing complexity, especially if it's a complex topic. It's about removing unnecessary jargon. ❌ "Light undergoes refraction as it traverses media with different indices of refraction." ✅ "Light bends when it moves from one material, like air, into another, like water."
White text on a golden-yellow background: "Quick Writing Tip: If a smart friend outside your field would get lost, that's a sign to translate, not simplify." The Seshat Editing logo and "seshatediting.carrd.co" sit at the bottom.
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 03/09/2026
hii, it's officially cozy season in MY house (ignoring the 90 degree weather...) SO, i made an autumn-themed #ESL teaching bundle. i think it's really cute, i love it www.etsy.com/listing/4567... 🍂🍁 #EFL #TEFL #EnglishLanguageResources #EnglishLanguageTeaching
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 03/09/2026
Instead of naming the emotion, try to describe what's happening in the body or the scene. ❌ "He was anxious over the email." ✅ "His coffee went cold while trembling hands rewrote the email for the fourth time." Specific details carry emotional weight!
White text on a golden-yellow background: "Quick Writing Tip: Naming the physical detail that causes an emotion often lands harder than naming the emotion itself." The Seshat Editing logo and "seshatediting.carrd.co" sit at the bottom.
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 27/08/2026
One editing question worth asking: "Could our biggest competitor yoink and publish this unchanged?" If the answer is yes, that's usually a sign to add specifics that reflect how you see the world.
White text on a golden-yellow background: "If a blog post could've come from any competitor, that's a chance to get more specific to your brand." The Seshat Editing logo and "seshatediting.carrd.co" sit at the bottom.
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 19/08/2026
currently reading Violets by Shin Kyung-Sook 💐it's giving me the same vibes as Morisaki Bookshop, but totally different (if that makes sense LOL). i like SKS's books, Please Look After Mom and I Went to See My Father were amazing
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 19/08/2026
Contrary to popular belief, passive voice is a tool, not a flaw! The key question is whether it serves the reader or simply avoids naming who's doing the action.
White text on a golden-yellow background: "Quick Writing Tip: Passive voice has its place. Just check whether it's hiding who's actually doing the acting." The Seshat Editing logo and "seshatediting.carrd.co" sit at the bottom.
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 18/08/2026
Just finished the first of the Finlay Donovan series! I can't WAIT to get to book 2, but all of the books I had on hold in Libby decided to become available at once LOL
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 13/08/2026
I am a certified #TEFL teacher, but unable to teach now. I LOVE everything about language learning, though, so I'm creating a series of learning materials for adults that other #ESL teachers might find useful for first-time or last-minute lessons. More to come in time 💛 www.etsy.com/shop/RoyalAz...
Text overlaying a spread of three worksheets reads "Real-Life English Roleplay Worksheets." A graphic in the top left notes it as 15 scenarios available. A graphic at the bottom says "printable, digital, PDF."Text above a spread of four worksheets reads "30 Day ESL Warm-up Bundle" On the left, each kind of warm-up is listed: writing prompts, this or that, would you rather, daily discussions, bell ringers, brain breaks. Beneath them, a note says "Pre-filled and blank versions!" A graphic at the bottom says "printable, digital, PDF."Text above a spread of four worksheets reads "200+ Real-Life English Conversation Cards." A graphic in the foreground notes it as 20 topics available. A graphic at the bottom says "printable, digital, PDF."
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 13/08/2026
A paragraph that looks manageable gets read. A paragraph that looks exhausting gets postponed. 🗣️📢Shorter paragraphs are less about style and more about courtesy to both the person on a smaller screen and the person who lives with a processing disorder!
White text on a golden-yellow background: "Shorter paragraphs aren't a lower bar. They're a courtesy to someone reading on their phone!" The Seshat Editing logo and "seshatediting.carrd.co" sit at the bottom.
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 06/08/2026
I started The Garden this week and it totally pulled me out of my reading slump (was hitting 3 months very soon lol). Eerie little stories, you have never failed me 😭🙏🏽
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 06/08/2026
Not to say that *every* "in order to" is wrong. Be concise, but be smart! Nuance is just as important as that quick scan 🧐
"Quick Writing Tip" and "'In order to' almost always works fine as just 'to.' It's worth a scan before you submit." in white text over a dark golden yellow background. The Seshat Editing logo and "seshatediting.carrd.co" sit at the bottom.
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Bria @seshatediting.bsky.social · 29/07/2026
Frame your call to action as an opportunity or next step, not a command. Your audience will be more likely to engage with confidence. #WritingTips #AcademicEditing #BusinessEditing
"Quick Writing Tip" and "A CTA that sounds like a next step tends to convert better than one that sounds like a demand," in white text over a dark golden yellow background. The Seshat Editing logo and "seshatediting.carrd.co" sit at the bottom.
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