Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 01/10/2026Early feedback is... I'll call it positive. 002 2
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 08/09/2026Found a sad looking mountain in Værøy. 002 2
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 21/08/2026I remember that with the introduction of mobile phones and the web there was a relatively long period where TV and film writer's could just ignore them and pretend that they didn't exist, even though they could solve a lot of their character's problems […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 100 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 02/06/2026@ben Sounds like CSIS black-ops to me. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 18/04/2026Sean Connery said of The Lord of the Rings (for which he was offered the part of Gandalf): "Yeah, well, I never understood it. I read the book. I read the script. I saw the movie. I still don’t understand it." Meanwhile, in 1974, this was apparently clear as glass. 104 4
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 15/03/2026Well, that's something, Whatsapp. That's something at least. 002 2
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 05/02/2026Is this some designer at Google getting in a very subtle dig at corporate culture? 100 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 25/01/2026broke: Going back in time with access to modern science to invent everything. woke: Going back in time with access to modern news stories to write some killer dystopian sci-fi. 001 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 19/12/2025The third one is "god and the devil" are both in the details. The devil is in the details means that the details is where screwups are hiding. "God is in the details" means something slightly different. Vermeer spent months painting this, blocking out the […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 19/12/2025These three are more personal, and some fiction writers may not agree, but it's worth thinking about. Asking the right questions in functional writing means "who is it for, what do they want." In fiction, it's trickier, but the general message translated to […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 19/12/2025#WritersCoffeeClub 20251219 If you were to teach a writing course, what would be the most important lesson? I did a lecture on writing once; academic rather than fiction, but some of the lessons translate. Here is one: writing is not just the stuff you do […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 06/12/2025Of course, no baggy clothes for professor Spiro. What do you mean "children's program for the BBC"? 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 09/09/2025Boy, I'd hate to be those guys. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 25/08/2025Made it to the first page of the #royalroad short stories ranking. 101 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 19/08/2025The very best thing about Trump is that he still, after all these years, hasn't figured out how to use sneer quotes correctly. Every time he manages to gain the beginnings of an image of competence, he posts something like this, and he is immediately […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 19/08/2025#til Elaine Paige once starred in a musical about premature ejaculation. 100 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 15/07/2025Something that people rarely mention about that "gazing into the abyss" line. It's right in the middle a terribly mysoginistic rant. It's not news that Nietzsche was, on the face of it at least, a mysogynist, but it is odd that this grand statement comes […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 110 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 15/07/2025I've finally had that writerly experience of seeing something I've made up "emerge" in the real world. At the end of A Veil of Brightness, I added a detail about a blue hippopotamus toy made by someone who comes from the south of Egypt. I invented a minor […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 101 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 21/06/2025I don't think the bicycles StackExchange is about bicycles at all. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 16/06/2025Some rules should come with a short history of the incident that made the rule a necessity. 001 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 01/06/2025Somebody asked on twitter to adapt one of my stories (maybe a hustler, it's hard to tell). In any case, I've decided to release all my short stories under CC-BY. profane-tmesis.info/about That means anybody can do what they like. Run it through […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 022 2
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 17/05/2025Running another ad on Royal Road for my serial (it's a little early, but five chapters should be decent). Let's see how it does. It's always hard to predict what will bring in the clicks […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 17/05/2025The prequels, for all their faults, were daring enough to build a truly different world, which expands the universe. Nothing you see looks or feels like the original trilogy, while still feeling connected to it. The sequels, in trying to reclaim past glory […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 18/04/2025I use a photo of the red Army taking the Reichstag for my web serial experiment, and the very next day my global ranking drops to 1942... Coincidence? 100 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 06/02/2025#WritersCoffeeClub 6 Feb Have you tried creating your own book cover designs? Share your work/attempts. Yes. I have some (minor) background in design, so I enjoy the flexing the old muscles, and since I'm not having much luck with trad publishing, I […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 050 5
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 23/01/2025#WordWeavers Does the thought of one day dying scare your characters? #snippet 010 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 21/12/2024I was re-reading my old vss entries on twitter, and they seem stronger than the ones I've written here on Mastodon. Perhaps it's because I did it properly every day back then, and kept my hand in. But it could also be that the stricter character limit […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 010 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 20/12/2024Showing my ignorance here, but I only just realized that Putti (the little baby "angels" you see in Renaissance paintings) existed long before Christianity. They were totally appropriated, like Christmas and Easter and who knows what. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 17/12/2024In 2013, Disney released a flagship movie, which was basically one big queer coming-out parable. It latched itself onto the minds of a generation of toddlers with the ferocity of a facehugger and did not let go for years. This is to the point that (in my […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 100 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 15/12/2024Story of 10K words drafted. There's still a bit of editing and polishing to do, but not too much. I don't think I'll submit this this one. It's a bit too niche. I'll just put it up on The Word Wide Web, like we did in the good old days. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 06/12/2024#WordWeavers Dec 6: Share a description of unusual or interesting clothes in your story. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 30/11/2024Submitted one new story. Only 1900 words, which is very short by my standards. Here's a snippet. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 30/11/2024#PennedPossibilities 514: Has your SC ever felt as though they’ve been reborn? My current draft has a character struggling with this. He is part of an order that changes bodies in order to live long enough to travel between stars. Their code requires them […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 010 1
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 24/11/2024In the John Wick universe, does everybody who visits the Sommelier have to keep up the wine puns? You'd think the guy would get tired of the schtick pretty quickly. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 11/11/2024Borges on Nazism. I think this will be shown to be true of Trumpism as well. It is founded on a defiance of truth, and powered by rage. This makes it uninhabitable. The only way to keep it going is to keep fueling the rage, which soon becomes profoundly self-destructive. 000 0
Profane tmesis @ptmesis.writing.exchange.ap.brid.gy · 10/11/2024#RecommendedReading Professor Borges: A Course on English Literature www.goodreads.com/book/show/1617383… This is meticulously edited version of a student's transcription of Borges' lectures on English literature. I'm two chapters […] [Original post on writing.exchange] 100 1