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Jasin Fayble

@jasinfayble.bsky.social
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Greetings and Salutations! I'm Jasin Fayble, a writer. Next step Author. Books are the gateway to civilization. Good writing is Ego Death. - David Foster Wallace Will refollow those of the #writingcommunity

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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 1h
100% agreed. A Ninja or assassin in a fight has already failed.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 3h
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Me @ewiggins66.bsky.social · 11h
#vss365 Granny said It was a #sin To not use the talents You were born with But I was born To be a witch The church Tortures witches Stones Drowns Burns them at the stake She said it was okay They did the same To scientists Teachers Doctors And artists So there was nothing Special about a witch
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 3h
I thought this about Terminator myself. Nobody liked my take. "What would really be scary and efficient would be to replicate a mosquitoe instead of a human. Then they could send millions of them instead of one. Hell, they could collect sewer water to inject you with or have an explosive charge..."
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 3h
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Mo Hayes 📚📖👩🏼‍💻 @mohayeswriter.bsky.social · 4h
‘My business is really taking off.’ ‘Really? What is it?’ ‘Instead of a boring prayer mat for people to communicate with God & seek forgiveness, I’ve worked the design into a trampoline.’ ‘You mean, people can jump away their #sins?’ ‘Exactly. Prophets are going through the roof.’ #vss365
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Dr. Kimi W.W. is teaching Indigenous Vampire and Ghost Stories @drkimiww.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
This is my third book with OU Press! I love how supportive and professional they always are!
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 4h
By book 3 yes. They'll need to go through a rough patch book 2.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 16h
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 16h
I redo some scenes because I've changed by the time I make it back around to that scene, and because of this, I see more that the scene could be. I've written, not fully completed, five novels as I learned how to become a "proper" author. I've never discarded a scene, only improved them.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 17h
Yes. When I see a story, I see it in its completion with many details included. I write that as my skeleton before I flesh everything out, which includes any number of reworking concepts and ideas. It could be as little an add-on as a new sentence I really liked or complete redo of the same scene.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 17h
Stay safe.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 17h
Jakob and Miriam had their first night together without fighting at said taco place because it was the only thing open, and they both liked it. Otherwise, Jakob's going for expense over anything else. He's accustomed to schmoozing wealthy women and getting what he wants.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 17h
In Last of the First Miram's going for any place with alcohol, preferably bourbon. She loves a specific taco joint next to a liquor store. Jakob? "Money's no object? What's the catch? Can I keep it? Mmmm..." The wild animal salivates as eager eyes glide over you, "Can I keep you?" No, seriously...
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 18h
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Raven @ravenbranhard.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
with you by my side we sail through a sea of dreams nirvana beckons #Vss365 #Sail #Poetry #ECK #Haiku #FineArt 🎨 Marc Chagall
A dreamlike Chagall painting in deep blue, with a green horse, a yellow rooster, an embracing couple and a small village floating beneath them.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 19h
All of them. 😁 I write a very skinny practically a skeleton of the story. After completion and a word count, I add the five senses and descriptions to flesh it all out. Finally, I do a full edit of each chapter indivisible and within the whole until it all sings. Every chapter is important.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 20h
It should be know what you write. If you're writing a medical drama and the nurse uses a defibrillator without removing the clothing first, you failed even if you work in a hospital. Research all of it, even if you believe you know. You'll be surprised and get to write a post like this one day. 😉
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 20h
On men writing women, for me, I have four women I ask questions through text with the promise, that I fully intend to keep, that I'll be thanking them and such if published. Besides, they enjoy the odd questions. On write what you know, I disagree. Many successful authors do so and still fail.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 20h
Stirred, not shaken. Wonderful!
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 23h
Discussing it currently with the wife. Thank you for your kind words and advice. I've learned a few things. It's been many months since I've learned anything in the author world. I'll keep you in mind for after my next rejection. 🙇
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
I point out both MC's really didn't like life until everything goes to hell and they find one another. I should focus more on this since it is the core of the story and genre.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
It does not and you're correct, I should emphasize this more. I'm very new to queries. I do understand each step of the novel writing process is an entirely new job to master. I'm a master storyteller specializing in reimagination. I've learned how to be a very good editor. Next is mastering queries
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
Romance. The end of the world bit is a fuse I add mid story for the reader as a way to clarify why Lilith desires Miriam, build on the character of Lilith and Samyaza, and up the stakes and conflict. This' Romance Paranormal first and foremost. Miriam and Jakob falling in love through tough times.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
Jakob's queen, finds a way into Heaven, an act the angels prophesize will undo all of existence. In the query I speak about both MC's unknowingly seeking forgiveness and finding it through one another while they run from both of their pasts. #EnemiestoLovers #ForbiddenLove #ForcedProximity tropes
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
Pitch: While destined to slay one another, Miriam and Jakob find a way to turn enemies into lovers and through the power of that love they strive, together, to save not only themselves but all of humanity before Lilith,
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
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Raven @ravenbranhard.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
you and me we were never two islands only one shore divided by tides of time #Vss365 #Island #Poetry #Tanka #Nature #Photography #ECK my 📷
Waves rolling onto a pebble beach beneath a bright blue sky, with white sea foam spreading across the shore and a pier stretching into the distance.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
It's not published. No quit. Politics is a bit of a stretch. The theme is based in it sure, can a demon be forgiven by Heaven through true love, but the plot only dabbles in the political side because it's a core element of the catalyst. Roughly 8% is that dynamic of angel v devil or devil v devil.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
In Last of the First... Sam, aka Samyaza leader of the Sebitti of Iblīs meets Leti, aka Lilith the leader of the Sebitti of Titans for the first time. He was cast from Heaven for fornication with humans and she manipulates through sex. #amquerying #writingcommunity #romance #angel #devil #erotic
Sharp pricks of fire sprang from her tight clawed grip as his face contorted into shock and awe at the ancient feeling of intimate contact returned from forced celibacy. The neglected memory of the soft hot passionate embrace of a woman paled in comparison to Leti’s work with body and tongue. The demon in his hands excitedly lapped the sanguine release when intense pressure pierced his white silk shirt and thick chest. The pain robbed him of his control. He exploded against his measured will.
Red iron in her mouth and lecherous desire between her legs excited her plans further. “Stay with me.” Clawed fingers gripped his hair and forced him to meet her eye-to-eye.
Samyaza panted and snarled as his muscles slowly relaxed before he placed her onto the soft grass. The tiny wild animal lunged at him and wrapped sensual lips around his sticky bestial member the moment he let go of her. Muscles clenched from her relentless refusal to let him be done. Wicked submissive temptations screamed from his most sensitive moment. A whispered moan wailed from him as his head slammed back and mouth opened wide toward the clear night sky. Her aggressive magical tongue slathered wet heat while a delicate hand gently cupped him from beneath. A tight pull refused him calm as a white fever washed over every sensitive inch of skin and instinct forced a hand on the back of her head and hips to press against the constriction. Leti slowly licked him clean as her gorgeous eyes gleamed with success.
He panted, donned wool trousers, and rubbed sweat from his wide brow. “Well, that was unexpected. You truly have power over me. It’s been, I mean . . .”
“A long time.” She smirked and grazed gentle fingers across his normally solid legs. “You deserve more.”
The playset creaked as he climbed into the pitiful swing and straightened his button down. “You must be her for I’ve found none like you.”
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
Tension’s dam breaks as I whisk myself away to a distant island where wet sand molds between my toes. Relaxation, laughter, and roses turn moldy brown when the boss asserts the no day-dreaming policy and subject of my return to work. #thingstowriteabout #WildWalkPrompt #vss365 #FoxProse #2WordPrompt
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A s p e n🕊️©️(AspenBrave®️™️) @aspenbrave.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
#BraveWrite #vss365 #tanka #haiku #Poetry #Sail #harbor #island a #harbor within that docks all my memories when I die they’ll #sail out to sea and set us free on your heart’s #island remember~me for you were a wave far more than any ripple my tribe~oh sweet family youtu.be/h0K9jxmFMNo?si…
Mom & son on beach making a heart with their hands touching to capture sunset
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
He's quite self-centered and oblivious to others for the most part. He is a demon, after all, and not exactly a himbo but not the smartest charmer either. 😉
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 07/10/2026
In Last of the First, Miriam always has a plan and works it until success or fail, then immediately creates a new plan. The problem is that most of her plans eventually get convoluted by alcohol. Jakob is the king of winging it. If alcohol isn't the problem, Jakob usually is. #writingcommunity
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D.N. Schmidt, SF author🪐📚 @dnschmidt.com · 05/10/2026
When my dad was a kid, if he misbehaved, his father would make him read from Moby-Dick or Pilgrim’s Progress. Dad still doesn’t enjoy reading to this day. If you frame something a punishment, your kids won’t do it for fun as adults. Except for going to bed early. That’s a great time right there.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
To help her get into Heaven. 😉 No more spoilers on that. 😁
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
Creating both sympathy and empathy works very well.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
Your Dawns Blood MV sounds a bit like Dr. Doom from Marvel Comics. I love Doom. Very complicated and ultimately in the end, more good than evil despite his willingness to do bad to make things right.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
Then there's Samyaza, leader of the Iblīs. Those Angels who were commanded to get close to humans where they fell in love with human women and became intimate with them. Thusly, they were cast out of Heaven. Fallen. His kind have spent millennia repenting. They seek forgiveness. #writingcommunity
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
Meanwhile, Lilith is a Titan, the first beings created. Her kind were never allowed into Heaven. Even cast out Angels had their time in Heaven. She want's what's right and fair and she doesn't care that the Angels prophesize her entrance would undo all existence. #writingcommunity
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
In Last of the First, Pollux is terrified of his mother, Lilith. Both Pollux and Jakob, the protagonist Incubus, have to tread lightly when they fail to bring Miriam in. Through Miriam, Jakob finds a way out, but poor Pollux is stuck between Lilith's claws and capturing Miriam. #writingcommunity
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A s p e n🕊️©️(AspenBrave®️™️) @aspenbrave.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
#BraveWrite #vss365 #WIPㅤ #AmWriting #Script “Normal is a mirage. The only 'normal' is the setting on a washing machine. I'm not going to apologize for surviving my share of life's storms & pouring rain. For the most part, I AM 'sunny with blue skies'-but beware- so is the eye of a #hurricane.”
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
A pattern strikes where every shadow whispers doubt in my ear. I must clean the fur, yet a hurricane of incertitude cripples me over and over. Seventy is too loud, but sixty isn’t enough. Back and forth, which volume to choose? #OCD #thingstowriteabout #WildWalkPrompt #vss365 #FoxProse #2WordPrompt
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
Repeated words. Had had. Actually. Was were. Is this what you mean? His rippled muscles were actually rippled muscles he had had installed, which was actually convenient for his reputation. No. The installed muscles rippled and elevated his reputation.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
"How did you get into TTRPG's?" Stepfather wanted to connect and ran an AD&D campaign when I was 8 years old. Within a month, I ran my first game for friends. Within three months, I ran my first for adults. By the time I was 9, I built and ran a D&D and AD&D for adults simultaneously.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
@katekilla.bsky.social and... game. Gratz.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 04/10/2026
He disdains anything budget. Only the best, everything fitted, nothing but the most refined for Jakob. This is why he prefers to stalk wealthy trophy wives. One stolen necklace, and he's set in a four or five star for another week. Of course, this all changes when he meets Miriam.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 04/10/2026
Facts. I'm logical. Quite uncommon, I understand.
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 04/10/2026
Jakob lives with whomever he intimately pleasures, or he'll steal enough for a hotel. He lives a vagrant lifestyle and relies on his charms to get through the door and into a bed. #writingcommunity
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Jasin Fayble @jasinfayble.bsky.social · 04/10/2026
In Last of the First of the First, Miriam converted her low rent apartment into an office for her Private Investigator business. Her slumlord is constantly threatening to evict for late rent and passing out drunk while customers loiter in the hallway. #writingcommunity
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