Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 17h🤔The Ventus citizens didn't trust Aldous, but he wasn't the only starving kid, so if he didn't do the things he needed to survive, well, he probably wouldn't. 010
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 17hThat sucks. I hope stabilization come quick, and things get better swiftly. 110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 19hFYI: this is a great character focus MM story that I've stay up late to read. 151
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 20hThe only code Guts believes in is might makes right. If you get beaten, your deserve it. This gets put to the test when he makes himself leader. Mihri believes in honor. However, when she challenges a stronger enemy, instead of ambushing them, she begins questioning if it was worth it. 3/3 180
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 20hErica and Berkant are the definition of getting results, doesn't matter it they leave things a little worst. However, Berkant is now questioning what kind of world does he want to bring Nefi back into. And Erica, the woman who known for gettings results, well she has some hard choices ahead. 2/3 180
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 20h#AwesomeCharacters Heiden would choose Honor. She needs others to trust her and she has the ability to do things by the book. Also, diplomacy demands it. Results may of kept Aldous and his sister from starving, but if he had honor, the community would of had his back. He focuses on honor now. 1/3 1120
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 21hIt going to be pretty interesting to see how Ray deals with such a moment. 🙂↕️ 170
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 10/10/2026Alright I fleshed out some new named #AwesomeCharacters. Let see if I can give one of them this... oh, it's Heiden. Throwing or archery, on foot or horseback, it's Heiden. For range she uses a composite bow and throwing knives. Wait! Aldous is better with a bola, so... one point for him. 1100
Reposted by Jade LawrenceDD Ward ..."Interim Pirate Queen" @ddwardiswriting.bsky.social · 09/10/2026I know social media marketing is lame, but I'm not asking you to buy anything. I write Fantasy, Romantasy, Science Fantasy, and Dark Fantasy. And it's all free with no sign up required on my Patreon. ddwardiswriting.com 12718
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 09/10/2026#LitHodgepodge 9 Probably Lindsey Sterling. The right vibes and awesome music. A lot of her music would fit right in with my novel.youtube.comLindsey Stirling–Eye Of The Untold Her (Echo In The Dark) ft Chrissy Costanza [Official Music Video]YouTube video by Lindsey Stirling 1272
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 09/10/2026Yes! Love these guys. Their new Control Resonant one, "The Sky below," is on repeat in my house right now. 140
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 09/10/2026It's mostly a light grey. (I'm commissioned some art of it, but it could be up to Dec before I see it. 😩) 110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 09/10/2026#AwesomeCharacters Heiden wears plenty of decorative items and she loves dressing up. However, when she on an adventure, her outfit is more functional (and I focus on the adventures in my stories). A decorative item she wears all the time though, is a dire wolf fur pelisse over her left shoulder. 1110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 08/10/2026Now I really want to hear Hailey views on time travel. 140
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 08/10/2026⏳Future, he excited to see how technology progresses. (What types of locks will they have in the future?) 💔 Never show. Though he hates stoicism, and is often vulnerable with the right people, there are too many wrong people that has shown they will easily take advantage of that. 2/2 1160
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 08/10/2026#LitHodgepodge 8 Aldous: 🪦As a man who knew both, he prefers the how. He can come to peace with that information. As for the when, it’ll stress him out as the time gets closer. 🧠 Forget, though he would probably use it too often and there are lessons he needs to remember. 1/2 1222
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026You build scenes very well, like Cookie is not tired, she is _tired_, and we know that. It also telling of Grilled's character as well as he analyzes her. 010
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026Thanks, and nice. I can be really bad about that puncuation sometimes. When people say 'kill your darlings', to me, it's my ellipsis. 130
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026It a good close 3rd. Not only can you picture the environment with the detail descriptions, you know what it means to Angie. Bonus, you can tell Sayan see it differently still, without going to their POV. 020
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026Your descriptions always make it easy to 'read the room' of the people in the scene. Also, this is awesome 🤘. 110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026I like the lavished descriptions, and the cadence definitely makes it easy to read. I can definitely picture the ominous eye in the sky. 110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026Thanks. 😁 Yeah, I'm pretty scared of head hopping so I try to keep the prose tight to one perspective. 120
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026"Maybe I'm not made for this" 😭 The number of times I've said this at the beginning of a hobby I started (and ended up loving). Including writing. 120
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026So I was looking for my humor, or how I shorten sentences, or my overuse of ellipsis, and I found this concentrated section. I try to write like the character acts, even in close 3rd POV. 5202
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026Hailey-ness is a great way to put. It does seem like the voice of a senior in school and how she talk to herself feels authentic. 110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026Great voice. I like the rich details provided in your descriptions. 120
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026Oh yeah, this is Ray. You writing always tells up so much about a character with so few words. 120
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 07/10/2026Ahh, I did thought you meant literally. But your description of it is great. There is an added layer on top where It does create a power imbalance between mentor and mentee, and that a problem as one of skill Heiden needs to teach if for Aldous to lead. (Also romantic tension) 110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 06/10/2026I like the shadow daddy trope, and yours sound like a novel take on it. I don’t want to make any assumptions, but your description definitely perk my interest. 030
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 06/10/2026(Oh, Bluesky is working again for me, it wouldn't let me post stuff for like most of the weekend). So here's a snippet where the training officially starts: 090
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 06/10/2026#LitHodgepodge 6 Heiden serves two archtypes. She's a hero, but she is also Aldous's Mentor. Despite his protests, Heiden points out he’s going to have to fight, and teaches him how. She not a wise elderly sage, they are about the same age. And she will always will be much more competent fighting. 2192
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 06/10/2026> Looks like a shadow daddy > Is a bit of a damsel That’s great. I’ve never been sold on a character any faster. 150
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 06/10/2026#AwesomeCharacters In WIP1, Erica and Berkant are parents who will do anything to help their kid. Of course there is some "ends will justify means" going on. Luckily their opponent is Aldous. 1130
Reposted by Jade LawrenceAlex Larkspur 💛📚🌻 @applesncinnamon.bsky.social · 05/10/2026OUT TOMORROW! THE WITCH OF THE WOOD🏚️ 📖Novella 🖤MM Fantasy Romance 💀Breaking a Curse A Spooky Forest ❤️🔥Fast Burn 🏚️A Search for a Witch 😟Nervous x Confident 🍂 Coming October 6, 2026 Uni: books2read.com/u/bw6gwP Itch: applesncinnamon.itch.io/the-witch-of... Cover Art: @isthiseva.bsky.social 23523
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 04/10/2026My favorite rite are scallops. I usually pan sear them, and wrap them in bacon. (I also usually mess it up when do it myself) Muscles are my second favorite. Just steam them in wine and butter till they open up. 3rd: Lobster. Love the taste, hate the mess of eating them. I get them cheap, though. 000
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 03/10/2026I mean chef. She can clearly cut, and no one is going to argue with her in the kitchen. 130
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 03/10/2026I feel like she would be great at escaping escape rooms. 120
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 03/10/2026He looks like he master billiards in a day. Become a shark in a week. 170
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 03/10/2026I like Jade’s relaxed demeanour, despite her figuring out she is in some unnatural place. 110
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 03/10/2026Actually no, at least for the ones she know about. She trusts his judgment and assume if he breaks a rule its for a good reason. He is her favorite monk. However, Aldous may of been at sword/mace point and threaten to keep some of his deeds quiet, like playing with a holy artifact. 010
Jade Lawrence @jade-lawrence.bsky.social · 02/10/2026#AwesomeCharacters So we learn about Godwin in flashbacks. He a cruel prankster, often saying one thing and doing another. He the Herald, the right hand of the Hierophant, but doesn't follow her rules or even Fulla's dogma. He's impulsive yet he can scheme for moons, or even years. 1121