Adventures in emailing my professors:
"Hi Ms. Smith,
I'm in your FYE class, and I'm not sure if I'm doing the High5 strength report right. Is there supposed to be more information than this? I'm not really sure what it means that I'm a "time keeper" or a "catalyst." Thank you!"
![1. Could you visualize the ad without seeing it based on this description? Are there any details you feel should be included or elaborated on?
I could visualize the ad. I think this is very good
2. Is the purpose of the ad clearly stated? Is this a good "nutshell" of what the ad is intended to accomplish? Do you have suggestions for altering this purpose statement?
yes, go more into detail about the purpose.
3. Is the target audience clearly of the ad specified? What else might she need to know about where the ad was found or who it is directed towards?
It is clearly specified, but maybe could add a little more detail
4. Are the strategies used by the ad designer described so Jenny Bell can see their connection to the audience? Is it clear how these strategies are used to achieve the ad's purpose? Are there other strategies the author could discuss or include in more detail?
They are described but maybe go into more detail about different culture [sic] food.
5. Is the report well organized? Is the information grouped in memo format to make it easier for a boss to find specific information? Is it clear who the memo is addressed to? Have all unnecessary or repetitive details and phrases been edited out to make the report concise and sharply focused?
yes, it is well organized, yes it is grouped good.
6. Has the author given a recommendation for the ad company's new campaign that shows they understand the competitor's ad (the
one being analyzed) and have interpreted what this means for the company in order to give a clear suggestion as to how they should
proceed? Do you have other ideas the author could include in their suggestion, or mark areas where the author could make cuts or changes?
yes and I think it was a good recommendation.
8. Is the language non-sexist/unbiased? Have all words been spelled correctly and all details reviewed carefully? Mark on the draft any areas you see where the grammar or structure need more attention or more general details ar…](https://cdn.bsky.app/img/feed_thumbnail/plain/did:plc:dcylibwsbc6zoxuqmuvfzocg/bafkreibd7r3uqwqj7vvzei5u4jclv5ds5auqr46na7oi56d344p67wdala)
