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Elijah Yaks

@copybyelijah.bsky.social
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Conversion copywriter (trainee). No ego, just fresh eyes. I rewrite coach booking pages for free. You pay $0 unless my copy books you a call. 👇 Read my pinned thread to claim your free rewrite.

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 17/09/2026
Most coach booking pages have a button that says "Submit" or "Schedule." Both are passive. Try "Claim Your Spot" or "Pick Your Time." Small change. Big difference. I rewrite pages for free to prove it (pinned). #coaching #copywriting
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 31/08/2026
100%. But most coaches use 'Book a Call' — it's passive. Swap to 'Claim Your Strategy Spot' or 'Pick Your Time'. Makes them feel in control, not sold to. I rewrite pages to prove that.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/08/2026
Slow down is great advice — but your booking page? That's where most coaches speed up and lose leads. Quick glance: your button just says 'Learn More' — that's passive. Swap to 'Book Your Strategy Session' to match the 'slow down' vibe. I rewrite pages for free (pinned).
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/08/2026
Reply 'PAGE' to this thread. Picking 5 coaches this week instead of 3. First come, first served.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/08/2026
Still rewriting coach booking pages for FREE. You pay $0 unless my copy books you a call. Offer hasn't changed — I just got better at writing.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/08/2026
Took 2 months off for exams. Back now, sharper, and hungrier. 🧵👇
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 27/06/2026
3 reasons coaches lose calls before the client even hits 'submit': 1. Asking too many questions (feels like homework) 2. No social proof above the fold 3. Button says 'Schedule' (boring) Fix these = more calls. My pinned post shows how I do it for free.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 26/06/2026
😂 Respect the spite! But hey, if you ever want to run a 7-day A/B test —your longer version vs my tighter one …..my pinned offer stands. Data wins over loyalty tests. 🤝
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 25/06/2026
Hard disagree. Booking pages sell, not test loyalty. Busy clients scan. Put 'result' & 'who this isn't for' at the top. Cut the bio. I rewrite pages for free to prove it (pinned).
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/06/2026
Reply 'PAGE' to this thread. I'll pick 3 coaches this week. First come, first served.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/06/2026
I'm offering to rewrite your entire 'Book a Call' section for FREE. You test it for 7 days. If you get a call from it, you pay me $200. If you don't? You pay $0 and keep the new copy.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/06/2026
I have no ego. No 'formula' I'm forcing on you. I'll look at your booking page with fresh eyes and ask 1 question: 'Would I click this?
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/06/2026
I've never had a paid copywriting client. Here's why that's good for YOU. 🧵👇
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
Big lesson: Even coaches with real results lose clients when their funnel lacks clarity. Your offer can be great. Your results can be proven. But if your path to booking feels like a maze, people won't convert. What would you fix first?
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
The fix: Put the sales page FIRST. Show the transformations, testimonials, and proof BEFORE asking for the call. Let the results sell the conversation. Then booking becomes the natural next step.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
Problem #3: His BEST content is buried. He has client transformations, testimonials, certifications—all hidden on page 2 of the Linktree. Most visitors never see it because they click "Book a call" first.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
The fix: Pre-frame the call. "On this 15-min call, we'll: ✓ Review your fitness situation ✓ Identify what's blocking progress ✓ Create your action plan This is for busy professionals (I've helped 100+ lose 10-20kg). Not for quick-fix seekers."
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
Problem #2: The booking page has zero context. Just says "Enquiry Call for Health & Fitness" then straight to calendar. No call agenda. No results proof. No qualifier.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
The fix: ONE clear funnel. Step 1: Landing page (with results + what you get) Step 2: Coaching plans (with pricing) Step 3: Book call (with qualified leads only) Every extra option is a decision—and decisions kill conversions.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
Problem #1: The Linktree is a mess. "Book a call" competes with "1:1 Coaching Plans," protein lab reports, honey testing, shoe guides, and his music. A visitor has 8+ options when they should have ONE clear path.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
I found a fitness coach with about 2,379 followers and real results (clients losing 15-20kg). His Linktree has 3 conversion leaks that are costing him clients. Here's what's broken (and how to fix it):
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 06/01/2026
Weak: “Helping you transform your mindset.” Strong: “When your thoughts stop fighting you, your life finally stops feeling heavy.” One is a vague promise. The other is a specific feeling. #Copywriting #Marketing #Coaching #Mindset #Clarity
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 06/01/2026
Storytelling > value dumping. You can teach someone 10 lessons… or tell them 1 story they never forget.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/01/2026
Weekly reflection: I improved the fastest when I stopped trying to impress people who weren't even watching. #Mindset #Creator #Entrepreneur #Growth #PersonalBrand
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/01/2026
One thing I’d tell every coach: If your message doesn’t FEEL alive to you, it won’t feel alive to anyone else. #Coaching #PersonalBrand #Copywriting #Authenticity #Marketing
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/01/2026
Storytelling > value dumping. You can teach someone 10 lessons… or tell them 1 story they never forget. #Storytelling #ContentCreation #Coaching #Marketing #Copywriting
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 25/11/2025
Professionalism is destroying your engagement. People don’t want your polished mask. They want you. #Marketing #PersonalBrand #Coach #Entrepreneur #Authenticity #ContentCreation
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/11/2025
My writing rule: If it sounds like a classroom, delete it. If it sounds like a conversation, keep it. #Copywriting #Writing #ContentCreation #Marketing #BusinessCoach #Authenticity
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/11/2025
The real reason coaches struggle to “sound authentic”? They’re trying to impress strangers instead of speaking to the person who needs them. #Coach #BusinessCoach #MindsetCoach #Copywriting #Marketing #PersonalBrand #Authenticity
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 21/11/2025
Something I believed early on: “Write like a professional.” Nope. Write like a human with a pulse. #Copywriting #Marketing #ContentWriting #BusinessCoach #Freelance #Startup
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 21/11/2025
I didn't start helping coaches with their copy because it was trendy. I started because I kept seeing brilliant coaches sound boring as hell. No power. No emotion. No personality. I couldn't watch in silence. #Copywriting #Coaching #MindsetCoach #BrandVoice #Marketing #Founder
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 21/11/2025
Most coaches don't have a "content problem." They have a clarity problem. If your message is confusing, no amount of posting can save it. #Coach #BusinessCoach #Marketing #Copywriting #MindsetCoach #Founder #ContentStrategy
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 09/11/2025
You can teach people without preaching. Just tell them what you’ve learned, like a friend would. #LifeCoaching #ManifestationCoach #StorytellingForCoaches
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 09/11/2025
I used to write posts hoping they’d “blow up.” Now I write hoping they’ll help someone breathe easier. #CopywriterForCoaches #AuthenticMarketing #ContentThatConnects
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 07/11/2025
If you talk like a human, people will listen. If you talk like a brand, they’ll scroll. #CopywritingTips #AuthenticMarketing #OnlineCoaching
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 07/11/2025
Every time you share your truth, you build trust. Even if it’s one tweet at a time. #CoachingBusiness #PersonalBranding #LifeCoaching
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 07/11/2025
Your words are energy. When you write from peace, people feel it. #ManifestationCoach #EnergyAlignment #MindsetCoach
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 05/11/2025
Some days, posting feels pointless. But someone out there needs your words. Show up messy if you have to. #AuthenticMarketing #LifeCoaching #ConsistencyWins
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 05/11/2025
Your ideal client isn't reading your sales page. They're scanning it while distracted, stressed, and skeptical. Your job: Make them feel understood in 3 seconds or less. No pressure. #Marketing #Copywriting #UX #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/11/2025
They tell you to 'write like you talk.' I say: 'Write like your ideal client talks.' Use their words. Their fears. Their dreams. That's how you connect. #Marketing #Copywriting #SaaS #Product
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 03/11/2025
Had a client text me: 'Just booked 3 calls from the new page!' That feeling never gets old. This is why I do what I do. Not for the words. For the wins. #Copywriting #Business #Marketing #Results
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 02/11/2025
Your website isn't a brochure. It's a salesperson. It should: · Greet visitors · Understand their pain · Offer a solution · Handle objections · Ask for the sale Is your website a good salesperson? #WebDesign #Marketing #SaaS #Startup
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 02/11/2025
Serious question for coaches: What's harder for you? · Writing the actual copy · Knowing what to say in the first place The answer determines everything. #Marketing #Coaching #Business #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
I used to think I needed a fancy vocabulary to be a good copywriter. Then I learned that 'Get more clients' outperforms 'Leverage synergistic growth paradigms' every single time. Talk like a human. Profit like a business. #Copywriting #Marketing #Startup #Business
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Good copy isn't written. It's assembled. Like a chef using ingredients, we use: · Pain points · Desires · Objections · Social proof The magic is in the recipe, not the ingredients. #Copywriting #Marketing #Business #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Raise your hand if you've ever stared at a blank page for an hour, wrote one sentence, deleted it, and called it a day. 🙋‍♂️ The struggle is real. But the breakthrough is on the other side. #Writing #Creator #Startup #Marketing
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Let's be real: Your 'Book a Call' page isn't converting because you're asking for commitment before building trust. It's like proposing on the first date. Slow down. Build rapport. Earn the click. #Marketing #Sales #Coaching #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Watching a coach's sales page: Headline: 'Unlock Your Potential' Subhead: 'Book a Call' Me: facepalm That's like a restaurant sign saying 'Experience Culinary Bliss' with 'Order Now' underneath. Where's the menu? The prices? The reason to click? #Copywriting #Marketing #Coaching #WebDesign
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Hah, you get it. It's like... A typist worries about the dictionary. A marketer worries about the person holding it. One is playing with words. The other is playing with psychology. (And thanks, man. You always catch the real point.)
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/10/2025
First client call today: Them: 'I just need better words.' Me: 'You need to understand why your clients hesitate at the buy button.' Them: '...oh.' We're not word-decorators. We're psychologists who type. #Copywriting #Freelance #Business #SaaS
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