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Elijah Yaks

@copybyelijah.bsky.social
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Conversion copywriter (trainee). No ego, just fresh eyes. I rewrite coach booking pages for free. You pay $0 unless my copy books you a call. 👇 Read my pinned thread to claim your free rewrite.

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 17/09/2026
Most coach booking pages have a button that says "Submit" or "Schedule." Both are passive. Try "Claim Your Spot" or "Pick Your Time." Small change. Big difference. I rewrite pages for free to prove it (pinned). #coaching #copywriting
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/08/2026
Took 2 months off for exams. Back now, sharper, and hungrier. 🧵👇
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 27/06/2026
3 reasons coaches lose calls before the client even hits 'submit': 1. Asking too many questions (feels like homework) 2. No social proof above the fold 3. Button says 'Schedule' (boring) Fix these = more calls. My pinned post shows how I do it for free.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/06/2026
I've never had a paid copywriting client. Here's why that's good for YOU. 🧵👇
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15/01/2026
I found a fitness coach with about 2,379 followers and real results (clients losing 15-20kg). His Linktree has 3 conversion leaks that are costing him clients. Here's what's broken (and how to fix it):
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 06/01/2026
Weak: “Helping you transform your mindset.” Strong: “When your thoughts stop fighting you, your life finally stops feeling heavy.” One is a vague promise. The other is a specific feeling. #Copywriting #Marketing #Coaching #Mindset #Clarity
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 06/01/2026
Storytelling > value dumping. You can teach someone 10 lessons… or tell them 1 story they never forget.
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/01/2026
Weekly reflection: I improved the fastest when I stopped trying to impress people who weren't even watching. #Mindset #Creator #Entrepreneur #Growth #PersonalBrand
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/01/2026
One thing I’d tell every coach: If your message doesn’t FEEL alive to you, it won’t feel alive to anyone else. #Coaching #PersonalBrand #Copywriting #Authenticity #Marketing
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/01/2026
Storytelling > value dumping. You can teach someone 10 lessons… or tell them 1 story they never forget. #Storytelling #ContentCreation #Coaching #Marketing #Copywriting
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 25/11/2025
Professionalism is destroying your engagement. People don’t want your polished mask. They want you. #Marketing #PersonalBrand #Coach #Entrepreneur #Authenticity #ContentCreation
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/11/2025
My writing rule: If it sounds like a classroom, delete it. If it sounds like a conversation, keep it. #Copywriting #Writing #ContentCreation #Marketing #BusinessCoach #Authenticity
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 22/11/2025
The real reason coaches struggle to “sound authentic”? They’re trying to impress strangers instead of speaking to the person who needs them. #Coach #BusinessCoach #MindsetCoach #Copywriting #Marketing #PersonalBrand #Authenticity
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 21/11/2025
Something I believed early on: “Write like a professional.” Nope. Write like a human with a pulse. #Copywriting #Marketing #ContentWriting #BusinessCoach #Freelance #Startup
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 21/11/2025
I didn't start helping coaches with their copy because it was trendy. I started because I kept seeing brilliant coaches sound boring as hell. No power. No emotion. No personality. I couldn't watch in silence. #Copywriting #Coaching #MindsetCoach #BrandVoice #Marketing #Founder
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 21/11/2025
Most coaches don't have a "content problem." They have a clarity problem. If your message is confusing, no amount of posting can save it. #Coach #BusinessCoach #Marketing #Copywriting #MindsetCoach #Founder #ContentStrategy
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 09/11/2025
You can teach people without preaching. Just tell them what you’ve learned, like a friend would. #LifeCoaching #ManifestationCoach #StorytellingForCoaches
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 09/11/2025
I used to write posts hoping they’d “blow up.” Now I write hoping they’ll help someone breathe easier. #CopywriterForCoaches #AuthenticMarketing #ContentThatConnects
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 07/11/2025
If you talk like a human, people will listen. If you talk like a brand, they’ll scroll. #CopywritingTips #AuthenticMarketing #OnlineCoaching
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 07/11/2025
Every time you share your truth, you build trust. Even if it’s one tweet at a time. #CoachingBusiness #PersonalBranding #LifeCoaching
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 07/11/2025
Your words are energy. When you write from peace, people feel it. #ManifestationCoach #EnergyAlignment #MindsetCoach
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 05/11/2025
Some days, posting feels pointless. But someone out there needs your words. Show up messy if you have to. #AuthenticMarketing #LifeCoaching #ConsistencyWins
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 05/11/2025
Your ideal client isn't reading your sales page. They're scanning it while distracted, stressed, and skeptical. Your job: Make them feel understood in 3 seconds or less. No pressure. #Marketing #Copywriting #UX #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 04/11/2025
They tell you to 'write like you talk.' I say: 'Write like your ideal client talks.' Use their words. Their fears. Their dreams. That's how you connect. #Marketing #Copywriting #SaaS #Product
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 03/11/2025
Had a client text me: 'Just booked 3 calls from the new page!' That feeling never gets old. This is why I do what I do. Not for the words. For the wins. #Copywriting #Business #Marketing #Results
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 02/11/2025
Your website isn't a brochure. It's a salesperson. It should: · Greet visitors · Understand their pain · Offer a solution · Handle objections · Ask for the sale Is your website a good salesperson? #WebDesign #Marketing #SaaS #Startup
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 02/11/2025
Serious question for coaches: What's harder for you? · Writing the actual copy · Knowing what to say in the first place The answer determines everything. #Marketing #Coaching #Business #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
I used to think I needed a fancy vocabulary to be a good copywriter. Then I learned that 'Get more clients' outperforms 'Leverage synergistic growth paradigms' every single time. Talk like a human. Profit like a business. #Copywriting #Marketing #Startup #Business
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Good copy isn't written. It's assembled. Like a chef using ingredients, we use: · Pain points · Desires · Objections · Social proof The magic is in the recipe, not the ingredients. #Copywriting #Marketing #Business #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Raise your hand if you've ever stared at a blank page for an hour, wrote one sentence, deleted it, and called it a day. 🙋‍♂️ The struggle is real. But the breakthrough is on the other side. #Writing #Creator #Startup #Marketing
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Let's be real: Your 'Book a Call' page isn't converting because you're asking for commitment before building trust. It's like proposing on the first date. Slow down. Build rapport. Earn the click. #Marketing #Sales #Coaching #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 01/11/2025
Watching a coach's sales page: Headline: 'Unlock Your Potential' Subhead: 'Book a Call' Me: facepalm That's like a restaurant sign saying 'Experience Culinary Bliss' with 'Order Now' underneath. Where's the menu? The prices? The reason to click? #Copywriting #Marketing #Coaching #WebDesign
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/10/2025
First client call today: Them: 'I just need better words.' Me: 'You need to understand why your clients hesitate at the buy button.' Them: '...oh.' We're not word-decorators. We're psychologists who type. #Copywriting #Freelance #Business #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/10/2025
Hot take: 'Just be authentic' is terrible advice for coaches. Be strategic. Be professional. Be clear. Authenticity without strategy is just oversharing. #Marketing #Business #Coaching #Startup
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/10/2025
My biggest copy breakthrough happened in a grocery store. I saw a label: 'Not just hot sauce. Adventure in a bottle.' They weren't selling ingredients. They were selling an identity. Your coaching program isn't a service. It's a transformation. Sell the identity. #Marketing #Business #Coaching #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 30/10/2025
You know you're a copywriter when you spend 20 minutes debating between 'Discover' and 'Explore' for a button. Your client wouldn't notice. But you will. And that's the difference between good and great. #Copywriting #Marketing #SaaS #Product #Startup
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 29/10/2025
I'm doing 3 free conversion audits this week. I'll find the #1 thing costing you booked calls. No pitch. Just a 2-min Loom showing you the leak. DM 'AUDIT' if you're serious about fixing it. #Marketing #Coaching #Startup #Founder
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 29/10/2025
Client: 1 call/week from his sales page. We changed 3 lines of copy. Not the design. Not the whole page. 3 lines. Result: 4-5 calls/week. The problem is rarely the whole page. It's the 3 critical lines no one is looking at. #Marketing #Results #SaaS #Tech
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 29/10/2025
Just provide value' is the worst advice for coaches. You provide value. Your competitor provides value. The winner is the one who communicates it in a way that makes the client feel understood. That's not value. That's positioning. #Marketing #Business #Coaching #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 29/10/2025
Good copy isn't creative. It's clear. It takes the mess in your customer's head and gives them a simple path forward. Stop being poetic. Start being persuasive. #Copywriting #Marketing #SaaS #Tech #Startup
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 29/10/2025
Here's a free copywriting trick: Read your sales page out loud. If it sounds like a robot wrote it, your clients will feel it. Write for humans. Profit. #Copywriting #Marketing #SaaS #Startup #Business
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
Your website is losing you money right now. I'll bet you $0 (because I'm not reckless) that your main headline is weak. DM me your site—first 3 get a free 2-minute tear-down. #Marketing #WebDesign #SaaS #Tech #Founder
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
I almost quit copywriting in my first year. I was trying to sound like a 'guru' and it was exhausting. The day I started writing like I talk was the day I got my first real client. Be human. #Freelance #Writing #Career #Startup #Tech
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
My first client ever told me my copy was 'too salesy.' I was pissed. Then I realized he was right. I was writing to sound smart, not to connect. Lesson: Write for the client, not for your ego. #Copywriter #Freelance #Writing #LessonLearned #Content
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
Most 'Book a Call' pages are broken. They focus on the call, not the outcome. Stop using 'Schedule Now.' Start using 'Get My Plan.' This simple change can double your conversion rate. #Marketing #SaaS #Tech #Startup #Founder
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
If your headline starts with 'I help...' delete it. Your client doesn't care about you. They care about their transformation. 'Get More Clients' beats 'I Help Coaches Get Clients' every single time. Fight me. #Copywriting #Marketing #SaaS #Product #Website #UIUX
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
Your 'Book a Call' button is probably as exciting as plain toast. Weak: 'Schedule Now' Strong: 'Get My Secret Playbook' See the difference? One is a chore. The other is a cheat code. Stop serving plain toast. #Conversion #Marketing #WebDesign #UIUX #SaaS #Tech
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
Be real: What's the cringiest thing you've ever put on your sales page? I'll start: I once wrote 'unleash your limitless potential.' I want to time travel and slap myself. #Copywriting #MarketingFail #Entrepreneur #Business #SaaS
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28/10/2025
95% of 'conversion copywriting' advice is overcomplicated garbage. The secret isn't some magic formula. It's understanding the one stupid, emotional reason your client is scared to click 'Buy'. That's it. #Copywriting #Marketing #Coaching #Startup #SaaS #Business
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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 23/10/2025
Coaches: Your homepage headline is probably about you. It should be about your client's transformation. 'I help coaches' -> 'Get More Clients'. Frame it around their desire, not your service.
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