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Born to be a writer, forced to be a software engineer | she/her | 26yo | Portugal

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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 17/08/2026
Gave myself a second chance at digital art and the result was this portrait of my WIP's main character, Peter Howe. #DigitalArt #OC #OriginalCharacter #WriteSky
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 17/08/2026
Some cool weekly prompts going on at the WWAD Discord. This week's prompt broke me... CW: death of pet #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
I was ten when Dad wore a wide smile as he told me there was a surprise waiting for me in the stables. He had bought a caramel-coloured yearling and eagerly suggested I call him Pantaloon due to the big white socks on all four legs. And so I did. Pan was all legs back then, but I was sure he would grow to be the greatest horse ever.

Dad barely had the chance to get to know him. Much less watch me ride him.

Now I'm thirty-five and I'm brushing Pantaloon’s mane for the last time, trying not to choke on tears.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 17/08/2026
I have been quiet around these parts, I'm sorry. But rest assured, writing has been going smoothly! #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
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B. van Bodegom 📃is AGENTED @bvbodegom.bsky.social · 24/07/2026
CABIN IN THE WOODS × JOHN DIES AT THE END × JUMANJI When their detective friend is murdered at their annual gaming retreat, 5 dads must rely on years of TTRPG experience—and puns—to solve the crime before they're all killed off like NPCs in a badly written supernatural campaign. #QuestPit #A #H #AG
Poster-style graphic with a black background and heavy red blood splatter. Large distressed white and red text reads “DAD BODIES.” A dagger runs horizontally through the letters, and a 20-sided die showing low numbers appears on the right. Along the bottom are black silhouettes of heads with X-shaped eyes. Beneath, smaller text reads “ROLL FOR FUCKERY,” and at the bottom: “A co(s)mic horror novel by B. van Bodegom.”
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 17/07/2026
The evolution of the trio English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Romance
“I think you should try that hairstyle again,” I joked, unable to resist laughing at the bowl cut.

“I’d rather shave my head than put myself through that embarrassment.”

He turned the page, escaping the memories of his worst hairstyles and photogenic poses. We carried on laughing and commenting on the photos. We saw the evolution of three children: a girl with wavy, caramel-coloured hair, a figure who was overexposed in practically every picture, and a dark-haired boy with a long fringe complemented by glasses. We moved through their pre-teens, where the girl began to show her more feminine features, the blonde boy acquired a more confident and comfortable posture with a metallic smile, and the other boy's fringe grew in proportion to his glasses' prescription.

“I like how Diogo is inversely proportional to us,” Jonathan commented amidst breathless laughs. “We're at least halfway presentable here, but look at him.”
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 16/07/2026
Peter's POV: discussing the relationship between Ryan and Daniel English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #aroace
I exhaled loudly. The paradox of hearing something that was simultaneously so completely new, yet so incredibly familiar, was making my brain hurt.

"It was never a topic he liked to discuss. But I’m glad he felt that comfortable with you." As I finished the sentence, a sour taste of jealousy lingered in my mouth.

"I forced him into it," Ryan said proudly. "But seriously, don't pull that face like you've just found out your brother has a terminal illness. He's sound. For a definition of sound. Everything's cool between us. I'll take it."

"Good for you," I muttered, letting the sound of hooves fade back into background music. "But if he really is that closed off to relationships of any kind, then what was his deal rushing things with you and now seeming a bit obsessed?"

"Obsessed?" Ryan repeated, back by my side again. His cheeks were redder than usual. "I'm flattered."
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 11/07/2026
Peter's POV: the aftermath of going through his father's stuff English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
"Pete?" I heard a female voice in the distance, muffled as if it were coming from the bottom of the sea. "Pete?"

I opened my eyes slowly. They stung so much I felt a tingling in my nose.

"Hey. What are you doing here?" It was my mum's voice.

Here? I wasn't fully lying down, my legs were hanging off the side of the bed. I sat up, disorientated. It took me a moment to recognise the red bedspread on the bed I was on. I must have fallen asleep without realising.

"What time is it?" I rubbed my eyes.

"Nearly seven in the evening, I've just arrived home."

The text from the newspaper was still echoing in my mind. I didn't have to try hard to remember what I was doing before I threw myself onto the mattress, trying not to have an anxiety attack.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 06/07/2026
Peter can't find his horse English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Escrita
I went to the stables. It is a bad sign when I let myself be impressed by the sight of the wide, gleaming corridor, lined with polished wooden stalls. Everything is so immaculate and sweet-smelling.
I approached Pan's stall. It was empty. My heart skipped a beat.
I headed to the paddock as quickly as the dizziness would allow me. I got drenched again for nothing. Pan wasn't out there either. I hadn't turned up and he hadn't waited for me. Panic crept up my chest.
I slowly followed the muddy lane between the endless lawns and the heavy drops falling from the leaves of the trees. The door to the main arena was open. I could hear a lesson taking place. I went in through the back and climbed the stairs to the mezzanine. It was silent. I walked around the sofa and leaned against the glass. In the arena, there were trotting poles and low jumps. Five horses in total. But none with four white socks.
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We Write at Dawn @wwadcreative.bsky.social · 08/06/2026
Hello all✨ A little preview of the rest of the cover! A variety of stories packed into our first volume from a variety of authors across the globe! Releasing on the 30th of June (22days!!) you can grab your copy from Amazon soon!✨ #coverart #coverreveal #writercommunity #novel #writers
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 01/07/2026
LET'S GO TO THE MALL! English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Escrita
"You’re going to have to be my guides. I’m not sure I know the city anymore."

"You wanna go to the biggest shopping centre, yeah?" asked Ryan, walking beside us again. I nodded. "Bus just up the road to the city centre, then the metrolink. You’ve already got your pass, so we're sorted. LET'S GO TO THE MALL, EVERYBODY!" he shouted in a sing-song voice, throwing in an energetic dance. "Damn, you lot haven't watched How I Met Your Mother, so you don't get the references."

He took two seconds to judge us before going back to humming about going to the mall, dancing around with little skips and erratic movements.

Melanie leaned in and covered her mouth with her scarf before whispering to me:

"Do you think he’s like this because he drinks four coffees a day, or does he have to drink four coffees a day to manage being like this?"

"Neither option sounds particularly healthy, but we like Ryan just the way he is."

I only needed 0.001% of his upbeat energy to change my life.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 30/06/2026
Ryan loves eventing English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Escrita
My absolute favourite time of year is here. Nothing compares to the buzz of Summer Eventing. The joy of the season is multiplied a thousandfold, amplified by the thrill of spending three days surrounded by friends, hooves, and everyone cheering their heads off.

It’s my second year on the team. This time, I'm riding with Florence, Jonathan, and Daniel. Our Jona’s the one who’s been around the block the most with these comps, though he's top tier at the showjumping, really. He’s the one who drives the team forward, starting the game plan, and shouting advice like a proper coach. Florence is the oldest of the four of us, and she's just as bang-on at showjumping as Jona. Daniel is also a regular. He absolutely sends it round the cross-country course, making it look all easy.

And then there’s Ryan, me. I wonder how I managed to repeat the feat of qualifying for the team.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 30/06/2026
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 29/06/2026
Peter's coughing fit English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
"Mel told me this morning about your adventures."

My heart did a flip and I ended up choking.

"You alright?" Ryan got up, alarmed, and brought me the water bottle. "Don't go dying on me, mate."

I coughed until I was dizzy. Ryan thumped my back as if that would help, but every time I raised my hand to tell him to stop, the coughing fit started up again. I downed the water in gulps bigger than my throat could handle. By that point, he was laughing more than actually helping.

When there was nothing left but an irritating tickle in my throat, I managed to breathe in enough air to speak.

"What did she tell you?"

I swallowed hard, and not just to soothe the remaining itch.

"Judging by that reaction, looks like she didn't tell me everything," Ryan raised an eyebrow, a cheeky grin spreading across his face. "Mind you, I don't want no details anyway."
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 28/06/2026
Back to the show jumping scene for a snip showing how hard it is for Jonathan to be satisfied with his results. Peter's POV. English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
I looked at the time. 72.61 seconds. An excellent time, but 0.2 seconds too slow to dethrone Amanda.
Jonathan looked back at the screen. Given the result, the tiredness in his expression was joined by a dejection that weighed heavily on his eyes and the corners of his mouth. He gave Kris's neck two sharp pats, but even that gesture seemed empty.
"I'm holding myself back from running after him," Vanessa said, sounding like a worried mother. "But it's better to let him blow off some steam first."
I nodded. As much as I wanted to go over and tell him that what he did was incredible, I didn't think his bad sportsmanship would treat me well. Following Vanessa’s lead, I stayed still and tracked him with my eyes as he gave a nod of acknowledgement and headed back towards the warm-up arena. I saw my grandmother quicken her pace to catch up with him by the gate, wearing a victorious smile that contrasted sharply with the melancholy radiating from Jonathan.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 25/06/2026
Peter's POV: Pasta time 🍝 English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Escrita
We sat at the dining table. Ryan took Daniel’s place next to me, which brought a smile to my mum’s face when she came over to put the bowl in the middle. It felt good to be the three of us again.

"Help yourselves." She pulled out the chair opposite me and sat down, still wearing her apron. She took it off once she was seated.

Ryan didn't stand on ceremony.

"If this tastes even half as good as it looks, I’m moving in," he said, as the pyramid of pasta grew on his plate.

"You’ve got a spare bed," my mum said. "You can go and visit your parents whenever Daniel needs it."

"Nah, we can both fit." He choked a bit at the end. His cheeks flushed instantly.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 24/06/2026
Peter's diary entry about life and death English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Espelhos #Escrita
Life is a grand and intricate work of art. We can spend a hundred years working on it, but it will never be considered finished. There is always one more detail, one more colour, one more line to add or perfect. It is difficult, it is challenging. Fighting against entropy is what kills us. In the end, we are all doomed to the same outcome. Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. And just like a work of art, it is easier to destroy it than to improve it. Of course, the conscience one is left with after one act or the other is not the same, unless the individual is accompanied by the very same demons that accompanied me. Then, they will see destruction as an improvement of the work, and with absolute pride, they will show the corrupted canvas to the world.
You just have to catch the wave of entropy. One misstep can be fatal.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 23/06/2026
Peter's POV: video call with Daniel and Ryan English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Escrita
"Your little brother went missing last night," Ryan said, nudging me with his shoulder.
My stomach lurched. The innocence with which he said it only made things worse. Daniel frowned in silence, waiting for me to elaborate.
"I just went out for some fresh air," I snapped back. "If I'd gone missing, I wouldn't be standing here now."
I was met with two questioning stares.
"You don't seem to be all here right now." Daniel’s reply was quick and blunt. "But suit yourself. Just don't complain about it later."
"I won't complain."
I felt something pulling us apart, as though the ground were opening up between us. I sank into that abyss, savouring the justice of the punishment I was finally receiving for all the mistakes I'd made over the past few days. The part of me that feels abandoned tangled itself up with the part that is grateful for Daniel's coldness. Together, they tumbled down the ravine. I couldn't tell which one came out on top.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 22/06/2026
Peter runs into *the folded flag* English on alt CW: death of parent, panic/anxiety #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity #Escrita
I stood up and climbed back onto the stool to shut the door. It was then that a varnished wooden box caught my eye. My hands were drawn to it like magnets. The moment I touched it, I knew the hunt was over.

I stepped down from the stool carefully so the box wouldn't move too much. I sat on the floor with it in front of me. I took one, two, three deep breaths. There was no easing the tension in my chest.

With a click, I undid the metal clasp and slowly lifted the lid.

The second I caught a glimpse of an edge of royal blue, white, and red, my heart dropped into my lap. I shut the box close. I slumped back against the wall. I couldn't seem to catch my breath. I squeezed my eyes shut, but it was as if I'd never closed the box at all. The colours of the Union Jack were burned into my eyelids.

I knew I shouldn't have meddled with it.

I pulled my knees to my chest. The box remained on the floor in front of me. It kept calling to me. I swallowed hard.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 21/06/2026
Daniel's POV: Army lunch time banter English on alt CW: language #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
There was more cross-chatter at lunch than usual. Ten minutes in, I was the only one who had already finished eating.

​"I’m praying I don't draw the short straw." The bloke next to me — Bell, according to the name tag on his jacket — clasped his hands together and looked up to the heavens, despite the damp-ridden ceiling blocking his view. "It’s my girlfriend’s birthday next weekend."

​I bit my tongue to stop myself from barking that I had much better reasons not to have my leave cancelled.

​"Word is we're getting company from the Navy," said the one who's always red in the face.

​"Oh, yeah?" Another guy looked up from the plate of meat in front of him. His face annoys me, it reminds me of Jonathan. "We'll have to show those faggots what we're made of, then."

​"Reckon it'll be some of that joint-op bullshit?" someone said with their mouth full.

​"Next thing, the Royal Chair Force will be joining the party."

​Not even that made me laugh. Someone elbowed me.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 20/06/2026
Fresh out of the oven: Peter can't find his horse after one month of not seeing him English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
I stayed in the lounge in front of the roaring fire to dry off. There was no one there; I was able to lose myself in the flickering of the flame.
I went down to the stables. It’s a bad sign when I let myself be impressed by the sight of the wide, gleaming corridor, flanked by polished wooden loose boxes. Everything so immaculate and sweet-smelling.
I approached Pan’s box. It was empty. My heart skipped a beat.
I headed to the paddock as fast as my dizziness would allow. I got another soaking for nothing. Pan wasn’t outside either. I hadn’t turned up, and he hadn't waited for me. Panic clawed its way up my chest.
I slowly followed the muddy track between the endless lawns and the heavy drops falling from the leaves of the trees. The main indoor school had its door open. I could hear a lesson in progress. I went in through the back and walked up the stairs to the mezzanine. It was silent. I walked around the sofa and leaned against the glass. In the arena, there were trotting poles on the ground and low jumps. Five horses in total. But none with four white socks.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 19/06/2026
More of Dean's book reviews * Peter's POV English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
I looked for something with an older feel to it. A grey spine, cracked down the middle with worn corners, caught my eye. I pulled it out carefully.
The title took up almost half the cover, with a blurry photograph of a group of soldiers underneath. All Quiet on the Western Front. I knew that one. I had a gut feeling there would be something written at the end. I just wasn’t expecting this:
“War is shit. 5/5”
Searching for an answer to the question “did he read this book before or after he enlisted?”, I turned back to the beginning of the book. It was a 1994 edition. I believe that if he’d read it before, he would have backed out. But then, I don't understand how, after being there, he could still read war stories in his spare time.
I smiled to myself. I felt sad. Then I chuckled again.
There were books with no reviews at the end. Books filled with annotations. I could picture my mum asking him to stop writing in the books and him finding alternatives—torn-out sheets of paper tucked into the cover with his thoughts on them, post-it notes stuck to the final page. All of them always with a five-star rating.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 18/06/2026
L/R tattoo kinda slaps tho English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
“You came alone again.” Her voice distracted me.
“Daniel is property of the Crown now. I can't count on his company anymore.”
“When can I tattoo a ‘Mum’ heart on him?”
I choked back a laugh to avoid moving.
“Never, I think. I do try to convince him. Tattoed knuckles would suit his attitude.”
“‘FUCK’ on the right, ‘THIS’ on the left.” She gave a nod of approval.
“I’d pay for that.”
“What about you?” she asked, between wipes of a paper towel. “What would yours say?”
I stared at the white lights on the ceiling, mentally running through a list of four- or eight-letter words, looking for something that'd fit me.
“I don't know.” I held my hands up in front of me. "Left and right indicators would come in handy.”
“I’ll do an L and an R for free before you leave.”
“I’ll pass,” I said, after considering it for a legitimate second.
“You were close to saying yes, admit it.” The corners of her mouth twitched upwards without breaking her focused expression.
“No, it’d be embarrassing to explain.”
“Sure.”
The buzz of the machine took over the room again.
The hand holding my skin moved a couple inches to the side and the needle resumed its work. I understood what Ashley meant about the skin being more sensitive there.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 14/06/2026
The video scene English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
Patrícia gently moved her mobile phone in a horizontal line around her. It stopped with the camera pointed at me. Her grey eyes peacefully swept over my face before giving me a smile, which I returned without thinking.
"That smile suits you, Peter. Keep it."
At the compliment, I looked away and instinctively hid my face. Satisfied, Patrícia lowered her phone and looked at the screen. She thanked me, although I didn't understand what I had done to deserve the thanks.
"Give me your number, so I can send you the video."
"Video?" I asked, alarmed.
"The photos weren't working, so I decided to record. And thank goodness, otherwise I wouldn't have captured that adorable smile live."
"What are you going to do with this video?" My panic was louder than Patricia's contentment.
"I'm going to save it in a folder on my computer, so that in a few months or years I can go back there and revisit all those moments."
"Photo diary?"
"Exactly!" She extended her hand toward me. "You know, I used to call this a “project”, but now that you’ve used the word diary, I’ll adopt it. Four years, one photo or video a day. I wish I had started sooner."
The sharing slowed my pulse. We have more in common than I could ever imagine.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 13/06/2026
Jonathan's worse idea *so far* English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
“I knew you were going to say that. You’re desperate for me to be wrong. But I’ve already told you, you’re looking for trouble where there isn't any. When I tell Vanessa my plan, she’s going to jump for joy. And once we’re there, it’s going to be brilliant. Best holiday yet.”
“I love the ambitious tone when you say ‘best holiday yet’.”
“Right, look at it this way: if you took your girlfriend on holiday with you, wouldn’t it be great?”
“First of all, there’s no ‘if’ about it, because I’ve already taken Patrícia on holiday more times than I can count. Secondly, out of all those times we went, there wasn't a single one where I took her with the sole intention of getting her to mate up with every single girl I’ve ever slept with. Because that is mental!” he shrieked. “What would I even stand to gain from that? A proper hiding. She’d think that in my eyes she’s nothing more than a toy, even though I still care about her—even after I caught her with your cousin.”
Diogo abruptly cut himself off, just as I was getting excited to hear him talk about a relationship that actually made sense.
“You’ve changed, Montepio. You used to get it, and you’d do even worse. You’d egg me on and say I should put Vanessa and the other girl in a ring and watch the show.”
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 12/06/2026
Peter just wants to feel something English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
I hid my cold hands in my pockets. I’m no fan of gloves, not even for riding. But after a few unwanted cuts and burns, you have to give in. Not today, though. I want to feel everything with bare hands.
​I started as I felt the familiar angles of the notch in the handle and the cold metal of the switchblade in my left pocket. I flicked it open. It's like playing with fire, but I’ve reached the point where I've tamed the flames. I ran my thumb along the edge, careful not to cut the skin. It was one of the first times I didn’t feel a burning—or cutting—desire. No thirst for pain, nor the slightest belief that it would solve anything.
​Why him? Why? Why? I repeated the questions, detached from the coldness of the metal.
​A buzzing pierced my ears, taking over and drowning out every other sound. I felt a sharp twinge of pain under my right arm, forcing me to double over. That movement was cut short by a tearing pain, like the slash of a sharp razor. The sensation of the stab was such that I instinctively clapped my hand to my neck, where the burning was coming from. The buzzing intensified, leaving me dizzy. I let out a gasping roar between breathy exhalations.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 11/06/2026
Peter and Florence meet again, but she's not happy with Jonathan English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
"Having you here today wasn't in the plans at all." Florence's eyes were red when she pulled away from me. She cupped my cheeks in her hands, as if making sure I was still the same person. "Took you long enough. Did you forget the way back? Idiot."
"I could ask you the same." I stroked her bare arms, the warmth radiating from her was real.
"I feel like I'm watching something I shouldn't be," said Ryan, who had stayed behind with Melanie and Jonathan. "I don't know. I'm not used to seeing you being so lovey-dovey."
"Put like that, it sounds like something else," I grumbled, feeling my cheeks burning.
I took a step back, making space for us to form a semi-circle in front of the house door, where Florence was still composing herself.
"Sorry, with all this I didn't even say hello," she said, before greeting Melanie and Ryan with a hug. "You lot? Here? Someone pinch me."
"I'm a professional at doing the impossible," Jonathan said with an overly wide, white grin, finishing with a smug wink.
With her arms crossed, Florence marched over to Jonathan. She had that expression that commanded respect.
"Oh, you... arghh!" She gave his ear a sharp tug. Jonathan’s gripes didn't move Florence one bit. "Gran called and told me everything. No need to act as if you've actually done something brilliant. Hypocrite." She let go of him, but still gave his cheek a hard pinch before leaving him alone. "Sore loser. You're supposed to get over that in primary school."
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 10/06/2026
If I get high enough will I see you again? English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
About last night…
​I want to make it clear that nothing happened to me. I just laid in bed listening to music.
​I listened to the song Patrícia sent me along with the video she recorded at the beach. "If I Get High", by a band called Nothing But Thieves. I’ve been listening to it on repeat. I already know the lyrics by heart, which isn't like me at all.
​I never really replied to that message. What would I even say? That I cried for an hour when I watched the music video? Ask her how on earth she knew which songs would leave me completely shattered?
​It’s hard to ignore the unease that all of this is causing me.
​I’d have preferred it if she’d sent me a love song, even though I know that wouldn’t be any easier for me. I’m in no fit state to be in a relationship. Leave alone a long-distance one.
​Looking at those messages is like hearing her say, "I know exactly what's going on inside your head." It only makes me want her more than I should.
​It's so frustrating. Why couldn't I have met her sooner.
​At the very least, I should thank her. I thought about her so much that I forgot whatever it was that was making me anxious.
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We Write at Dawn @wwadcreative.bsky.social · 03/06/2026
Author lineup, the FIRST EVER We Write at Dawn Anthology L. M. du Plessis - @smoking-gnu.bsky.social Jacob Foster - @fosterja8.bsky.social Solane Jute - @typhlosion.pmd.social Kiwa Lowe - @kiwapon.bsky.social Carolina Pereira - @carolinampereira.bsky.social Sam W. Tennyson - @MsBsandRs.bsky.social
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 08/06/2026
That line needs editing English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
The sky was grey, as usual. We were formed up in the square. Straight ranks, boots aligned on the concrete still wet from the night. The smell of rain never lasted long before being replaced by the smell of fuel, oil, and, on a less boring day, gun smoke.
​You could tell it was Friday. There was a buzz and a certain relaxed atmosphere. Everyone was already thinking about the weekend. Me included.
​I submitted my request on Monday. By Wednesday, my leave was approved. Someone celebrated because Howe had finally remembered he had a home to go back to.
​Yesterday, I bought my train ticket. Today, when my shift finishes, I’ll pack my stuff and get my ass outta here. I’ll arrive late, but I hope not too late.
​I haven’t heard from my brother in a week. And this time, it’s not my fault. I’ve been ringing him every day. And every day, it goes straight to voicemail. He leaves my messages on read. Mum assures me that everything is fine, that he just needs some alone time. He hasn't left the house since the day he nearly gave me a heart attack and I considered stealing a jeep to go looking for him.
​There’s only one way to make sure things don't go off the rails: go back, however much it might prove that I was wrong to give him space to bloom.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 07/06/2026
Peter can't cope English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
"Where…? Did she…?" I shot up suddenly and looked around the cramped space. Panic surged up my throat like a flash of lightning. "Mel… was someone else here? With us?"
Her hands guided me back down to her with a calmness I didn't possess. She let my head rest on her shoulder. Her fingers traced wide, slow circles on my back. I was so exhausted, it actually worked.
"Looks like she didn't fancy third wheeling," Mel said.
I looked at her, searching for a more concrete clue. Nothing. Just a serene smile.
I tried to smile back, but a laugh of sheer disbelief escaped me instead. Did that really happen? Between the three of us? Absurd. Perhaps my mind will make up a better version tomorrow.
I’ve been told plenty of times that my dad is watching over us from wherever he is. I really hope he closed his eyes for this one.
"I need to sleep on this," I concluded, more to myself than to her.
The stroking stopped.
"Let’s head back to the hotel. I can’t go back inside after this." She laughed. "But it was… incredible."
"When I first saw you coming through that door, that wasn't quite the adjective I was expecting you to use."
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 06/06/2026
Someone got deployed with the worst timing English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
Cleaning, checking, prepping. None of this required using my head. And that was precisely the problem. The movements were just as automatic as the thoughts. But nobody cared what I thought. We had all already accepted that we hadn’t been asked to check our kits just for the sake of it.
A month or two ago, having a deployment on the horizon would have been a blessing. No one would have been able to nag me about not going home for weeks.
But now? My mind won't stop trying to come up with reasons to believe I still have a chance.
I looked at the time. It’s nearly four in the afternoon and I still haven't cancelled my train ticket.
"Howe."
I looked towards the voice.
"What now?"
"The sergeant wants to speak to you," he said, as if it wasn't important.
I swore under my breath.
There you go. It was blindingly obvious what was going to happen. Having to head over to the admin building was just a bureaucratic formality for what was already more than confirmed in my head.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 05/06/2026
Ryan's not a fan of Dan's old car English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
"Won't he be pissed about you rolling in late without giving him a shout?"
"He's well used to it. Wouldn't be the first time I've called a taxi in the dead of the night cos I was proper fed up."
A heavy silence fell over the car. There was only the sound of the tyres rolling on the tarmac and the engine roaring with disproportionate effort. I leant my head against the window, feeling the cold glass contrast with the stuffy heat inside.
"You should save up to buy a proper motor," I suggested, lightening the mood again.
Dan shrugged, an awkward gesture when you have one hand on the steering wheel and the other on the gearstick.
"If it's just gonna sit in the garage, might as well keep the cash in the bank." He let out a laugh. "Besides, where's the thrill in driving a car that actually works?"
"Masochism's a bitch."
"Yeah..."
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We Write at Dawn @wwadcreative.bsky.social · 04/06/2026
Hello all✨ The long awaited Cover Reveal for the Anthology is here!! Both Cover art & design done by @augustsstudio.bsky.social Thank you to team who suffered through eye twitching when things weren’t aligning for print. Releasing on the 30th of June!✨ #coverart #coverreveal #writercommunity
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 04/06/2026
Vibes from Strider's Equestrian Estate being an elite riding school English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
“You sure you’re alright?” I insisted on asking, even though Ryan’s cheerful expression had returned to paint his face.
​“Still feeling the adrenaline, but I’m in one piece.” He brushed down his breeches. “Ain't taken a tumble like that in a bit.”
​“That was an excellent fall.” I laughed, now that the worry was nothing more than a memory. “Almost looked on purpose, to be honest. Proper cinema.”
​His laugh joined mine. Perhaps, much like me, he was reliving the moment in his head.
​“Gotta do the school proud. You can’t go round wearing this crest and make a right hash of a fall.” He pointed to the burgundy logo embroidered on the chest of his polo shirt.
​“Of course. We can’t be acting like Daniel and chucking ourselves into a mud puddle at the first chance we get.”
​“Blackie must be proper confused that I’m still this clean.” His laughter intensified. “He ain't used to it.”
​Speaking of the horse, he already seemed impatient with standing still. He quickly got over the fright and was ready for action, pawing the ground with a hoof.
​“What spooked him even?”
​“Have a look over there.”
​Ryan gestured for me to step forward and peer through the trees. I don’t know how it escaped my notice all this time. In the pasture to the right of the road, half a dozen brown and white cows were moving slowly, nibbling at the short grass. One of them raised its head, as if sensing me watching it. I didn’t think they were particularly pretty, but they were far from scary. They weren't even making a sound.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 02/06/2026
Pantaloon isn't a fan of road trips English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
Once we reached the arena, I loosened the lunge rope and allowed him to walk in a circle around me. I didn't enforce a gait or a direction. I left him loose enough to forget that I was even holding him. He broke into a trot, his short strides punctuated by clumsy kicks that I decided not to discipline. If I was allowed to lie on the kitchen floor, he was allowed to throw a tantrum.
"Is he alright?" Jonathan’s voice came out of nowhere, startling me.
"As alright as he can be." I waited until the horse was facing his way before looking at my cousin. "He's calming down already."
It was true. After half a dozen circles, his pace began to slow down. He lowered his head and turned an ear to me, waiting for a command.
"Whenever you're ready, we are."
I nodded. Then I felt a tug on the rope. Pan’s neck was tense again, but the problem was that I had shortened the lunge rope myself without realising. I loosened my grip and took two steps back, widening the circle. The sand stopped flying every time a hoof struck the ground.
"It's the best we can do," I said, not quite knowing who I was saying it to.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 01/06/2026
Loss and selfish grief English on alt CW: death of parent, war #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
The margins of the page began to warp. The letters blurred together, the text losing its focus. I let the paper drop, as if it were burning my fingers. I could hear my heart like a sound coming from outside, growing louder and louder. The air rasped in and out of me like a whistle, a whirlwind trapped in my throat.
Dad, our dad, was killed. Correction: murdered. For what? So a number could go from 388 to 389? To them, these are just hundreds. The units don't even matter anymore. Round it up to 400, the next eleven won't make a blind bit of difference.
If he’d been just some ordinary Rifleman, he wouldn’t even have been entitled to a column in the Evening News. But surely it couldn't just be his stripes that guaranteed him airtime. Something doesn't add up. I always knew it didn't.
Why did they even have to publish this?
It’s our loss. Ours. Not this stupid country’s. Not some random person's on the internet.
Ours. And we didn’t need to read the paper to get the news.
I tried to read the article again, looking for the part where they say who killed him, but the letters started slipping away from my eyes even sooner this time. It wasn’t me looking at the newspaper anymore. I was outside my own body, watching myself, utterly powerless.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 31/05/2026
I can't wait for June 30th to come! Stay tuned for the first anthology of #WWAD! #Defiance #WritingCommunity #AMWriting
List of contributing authors for We Write At Dawn Anthology Volume One: Defiance. I am one of them!
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L.M. du Plessis 📚💙 ‪✨Taking a small break✨ @smoking-gnu.bsky.social · 31/05/2026
Good Afternoon! This is your Bi-weekly reminder of the brand new WWAD Anthology launch, coming on the 30th of June. First volume theme is: Defiance. Now with contributing authors included! #Writingcommunity #Writesky #Anthology
We Write At Dawn Anthology
Volume One: Defiance
Contributing Authors:
Sam Accardi
Lillian Bricker
R. K. Bryant
L. M. du Plessis
Jacob Foster
Solane Jute
Kiwa Lowe
Sean McMullen
Kai Nobel
Carolina Pereira
M. A. Sawchuk
Hawk Stevenson
Sam W. Tennyson
August B. Ward


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Releasing on the 30th June 2026
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 31/05/2026
Mournful obsession English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
I don’t know when this evolved from a search for clues, to a hunt, to testing my limits. But entering my mother’s bedroom feels like a good place to draw the line of extreme obsession.
In our bedroom, there’s a photo of us with Dad. In Mum’s, there’s a frame of their wedding. A beautiful, bright picture with the two of them smiling at each other. My dad’s immaculate haircut. My mum’s white veil. On the other wall, there’s something darker hanging, something that has only been put back on display since we moved back here. A dark red frame with a black velvet background. On one side, a photo of Dad in his dress uniform, wearing an expression that wasn't entirely serious. On the other, badges, insignia, and seven medals lined up in a row. Some colourful, others inspired by sand and mud. I never bothered to memorise the meaning of each one. To me, they’re just proof that he spent far too much time away from home.
I should have stopped there. I should have turned around and gone to take a nap. But I kept going.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 30/05/2026
#Mememay 30 I don't know where time went
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Max Verstappen at Austrian F1 Grand Prix
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 29/05/2026
A lot of different things, but this one has been driving part 4: youtu.be/15Fg3sTag4w?... #Mememay 29
youtu.be
Bring Me The Horizon - DIg It (Lyric Video)
YouTube video by BMTHOfficialVEVO
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Barrows @barrows.itch.io · 12/05/2026
Reading a book written using AI? Broke. Reading a book in which an AI repeatedly threatens to blow herself up if you don't do as she asks, and also writes bad poetry and talks like a Tesco self-checkout machine? Unfathomably woke. BUY MY BOOK OR THE ROBOTS WIN ⬇️ barrows.itch.io/event-horizon 📚🪐
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First Light Book I: Event Horizon by Barrows
A sci-fi novella about finding happiness in space.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 29/05/2026
A funny snip to break the sad streak English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
"What’s your name? Are you Ryan’s friend? Are you in the same class? Where do you live? How old are you? Do you have a girlfriend?"
It was impossible not to laugh, both at the questions being fired off with that childlike innocence, and at Dan’s terrified expression as he found himself overwhelmed by a six-year-old girl who just wants to be friends with everyone in the world (except me). Even I lost track in the middle of the interrogation, but I was curious to see how Dan was going to answer.
"Hell...o?" Dan eventually managed to say.
"Don't be nosy, Jessica," my dad said, unable to hold back his laughter. He must think his 'Mini Dean No. 2' is a bit of a weirdo, but the sight amuses him just as much as the rest of us.
"Do you want to be my best friend?" Yet another question to add to the interrogation.
Dan looked at me in a silent plea for help. I wiped a tear from the corner of my eye and tried to catch my breath, but having everyone around me dying of laughter wasn't helping.
"C'mon, Dan," I tried to encourage him. "Are you really going to say no to a child?"
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 28/05/2026
#MemeMay 28 Evans Nikopoulos for the twins (Peter and Daniel) (yes, he'd be working overtime) (no, I don't care he's not an actor) He's a little too pretty for the role, but he's got the right eyes and lips, so...
Your typical dark hair blue eyes Caucasian white male model.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 28/05/2026
Citing that one Portuguese song: "nos afilamentos das alâmpadas" English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
Turns out a coat wasn't necessary. The night insisted on being atypical.
There was still a hint of blue on the horizon. The clouds looked darker than the sky. On either side of the street, windows lit up in yellow and white. Insects flew in circles in the glow of the streetlamps.
We walked down the street. We were heading in the opposite direction of his house, plunging deeper and deeper into the neighbourhood and the late-evening tranquility. I didn't recognise those facades, nor the cars parked outside, nor those trees.
Or so I thought.
At a certain point, the predictability of the brick walls and green hedges was broken by an opening. A playground.
"I’ve always wanted to do this," Ryan said, already hopping the fence. I was impressed by how effortlessly he did it. "Not parkour. Going to a park like this at night. It’s so cliché, proper movie stuff. I love it." He gestured towards me. "Come on."
I looked at the gate. It had a simple latch that opened without any effort.
"That was clever, but boring."
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 27/05/2026
Just vibes today Still on the sad vibe tho English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
I picked up my smartphone. It was a lazy way to avoid drifting away, but I didn’t have the energy for anything else. After ten minutes of scrolling through random images and videos, the phone vibrated and Patrícia’s name appeared at the top of the screen.
“Did you get back alright?” she asked.
“Tired, but alive,” I typed quickly.
“Look at him, replying straight away.”
I laughed. The sound of my own laughter felt strangely unfamiliar, but I refused to dwell on it. I looked at the car keys on my bedside table, still waiting for me to find a safe place to put them. I focused on writing a reply. My fingers were shaking, but this time it wasn’t nerves. It felt more like excitement or anticipation.
“Are you really coming over?” I sent it without a second thought.
I don’t know how long I stared at the screen. It could have been hours.
Patrícia’s reply never came.
Fair enough.
I opened her profile and looked for the tour poster. The last date was the 28th of September. At least until then, I think I’m free from having to deal with this. I kept repeating that to myself until I believed it.
I don’t need sleeping pills tonight. I tucked tonight's dose into a little plastic bag and stuffed it back into the bottom of my backpack.
The future is still just a massive black blur rushing towards me at high speed.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 26/05/2026
Just finished reading If He Has Been With Me by Laura Nowlin and I've never been so pissed at a book before oh God protect my phone before I smash it against the nearest wall
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 26/05/2026
A long one, but the whole convo makes the scene hit as it should. Peter hears his grandma talking about his late father. English on alt #WIPSnip #WriteSky #WritingCommunity
“I’d like to…” I tasted the words in my mouth, once the mandatory minute of silence had passed. “…know more about him.”
“So would I, son. So would I.” She stirred her tea before continuing. “He was ever so closed off. Then there were… things.”
She paused, as if she were reliving the said things. Her smile turned downwards. My clammy hands were sliping in the mug.
“You’re no child anymore, you understand these things now.”
I slowly looked up until my eyes met my grandmother’s. She was different from how I remembered her last summer. Gentler. Maybe it was because it was just the two of us. Or because of what I’d told her last year. Or because of what she felt while stroking my arms like that.
“There was some sort of curse when it came to weddings,” she went on. “When it was your aunt’s, it was a right shambles. I don’t understand how they just stopped speaking to each other as if it were the most natural thing in the world.”
So that was what happened.
“Before he moved out, it was him mithering that he couldn’t stand being here a minute longer, and his dad shouting his head off that he was just trying to dodge everything. And me telling them to stop it, but they never listened.”
I didn't know what to do with all of that.
“He’d just say to me, ‘Mam, I love you to bits, but you doing nowt about this.’ What did he want me to do? I couldn’t change his dad's way of thinking, nor his.” Her eyes welled up, making the green in them stand out. I was struggling to breathe. I couldn’t swallow my tea. “It hurt more when he banged the door on his way out for the last time than all the rest of it.”
I’d reached my limit. I stood up.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 25/05/2026
Just shower/torrent/water vibes. And dissociative episodes. English on alt #WIPSnip #WritingCommunity #WriteSky
I don’t know how long I stood there. I don’t remember making it to my room. When I finally became aware of my existence in a physical space again, freezing water was pouring over me with the force of a torrent.
I tried to gasp for air, but the icy water gripped my chest. It bounced off the shower walls, echoing like a homemade waterfall. Only my thoughts screamed louder. Wrong. I’ve ruined everything. Disgusting. Wrong. I want to disappear. Wrong. Sorry. I can’t.
The only warm water was flowing down my cheeks. But it cooled instantly, swallowed by the jet. The shower handle was too far away. I didn’t move.
I opened my eyes, despite the stinging. I saw my naked body. It was different from how it looked inside the van. These harsh white lights leave nowhere to hide. There’s too much detail. It’s too real to be my body. The massive feet. The wet hair stuck to my skin. The bulging veins. Clumsy hands. The ink more faded than it should be. The lines don’t even seem to guide anything anymore. The texture of the skin shows through too much beneath the black. Even the scars I could have sworn had vanished leapt out at me, white and raised. I looked down at my legs. But there… the skin told worse stories, more exposed. They still looked red, painful, lines that were clearly wrong. Or was it just me wanting to see them that way? My stomach churned. I squeezed my eyes shut. I didn’t need to see any more.
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Carolina | Looking for feedback @carolinampereira.bsky.social · 25/05/2026
#Mememay 25 Peter would choose Lucario. Reading auras is definitely his thing.
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Funny Lucario Twerk in Pokemon
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