iiinova — where your digital self keeps evolving

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 10/04/2026

Q4: Great opening and comps. Pitch is short. What are some of MC’s mini-goals? What are stakes? How does publicizing aspect affect plot? P4: Does story start after inciting incident? Because seems like MC is already adventurous. Backstory is interesting, but not hooked just yet.

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 10/04/2026

Q5: Some details unclear. Initial wording suggests MC's friend dies, so why is MC seeking them? Confused about “magic” system and what their abilities are. How does magical traveling affect plot? P5: Interesting worldbuilding. Love a dystopia. Want more MC motivation and goal insight.

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 10/04/2026

Q6: MC and setting intrigue me, but Q is vague. Why does MC come here? What is inciting incident specifically? What is MC’s motivation? Any writing/career info to add to bio? P6: Juicy tension right away, but want gradual buildup. Good MC interiority. Need more backstory on location and MC arrival.

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