Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025Ready for round two of my #RevPit #10Queries? Let's jump right in! QL= Query Letter P= Pages @reviseresub.bsky.social 1212
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL11: Adult Fantasy. Cool concept. Excited for the romance. MC's primary story goal could be clearer. What is their mission for most of the book after the inciting incident occurs? QL needs trimming (P1 is long) and more recent novel comps. 140
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P11: Clear, concise writing. Story could start a little sooner, perhaps starting before the death happens so readers understand why it had to happen and get more set-up first. Prologue may not be necessary. 130
