Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL3: MG Horror. Really cool concept and execution. Good quick cast intros. Might be helpful to know MC's age. Wonder if stakes could be clearer: are these death stakes or not? 140
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P3: Lovely, eerie prose. Second-hand narration in first scene does good job of portraying MC and villain. Good pacing and setting description. But all internal monologue so far and could use more dialogue and scene action soon. 150
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL4: Adult Thriller. Strong QL. Maybe there can be a stronger connection between MC's past and current killings. Why (does MC think) the killer is targeting these people and that they might know the MC's secrets? And is MC's goal to expose the killers or just protect their community? 140
