Severa 💐 Tenya's other half 🌺 @sevxra.bsky.social · 28/09/2026Like… everything feels so strict and restricted. There’s no room to be… whimsy? It’s all serious history and yada yada yada every 2 lines. It’s unnecessary bloat that gets in the way of emotions and character writing imo. 120
Severa 💐 Tenya's other half 🌺 @sevxra.bsky.social · 28/09/2026And it also leaves me feeling like the characters don’t feel like characters; they feel like webinars for topic the scene. Sure they have personalities but they’re told to you and not shown or expressed with nuance. Any nuance is shoved in your face with direct dialogue that doesn’t feel natural. 130
Severa 💐 Tenya's other half 🌺 @sevxra.bsky.social · 28/09/2026There are things I want to figure out or gaps I wanna fill in with my imagination and ideas or my own critical thinking/reasoning skills, but this world setting doesn’t give any room for that kind of thinking. It just tells you everything without any effort on the reader’s part. 020
