Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/10/2026Repetition mostly. I am likely blind to it. But I will have it read outloud to be before that. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/10/2026I am doing as much as I can before I do that and will probably land on a line edit. My degree is in English so I have some good experience to draw from before I hand it off. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 05/10/2026I have a critique partner in my writing community. Thank you! 000
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 05/10/2026It's a dystopian thriller with a mystery engine and a slow burn romance. 100
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 05/10/2026What's wild is I have more "I couldn't put it down" responses than anything else. This is why I will be running it by a critique partner before I query. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 05/10/2026I just want to know if it hooks them. If they don't enjoy it, if they can put it down and walk away, if they forget about it until I remind them. I ask a few follow up questions. I have critique partners for the "what would make it better" questions. 100
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 05/10/2026Such a great question. My betas primarily read for enjoyment. Do they have questions? Did they get stuck anywhere? Did they like it? The critique partners look for ways to make it better. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 05/10/2026Truly madly deeply excited to finish up my last round of edits, hand this MS to some beta readers, and get to querying. What are you working on? #amwriting #writersky #dystopianthrillerbooks 540
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 12/09/2026#writing #dystopianthrillers #authorproblems 000
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 28/08/2026Sometimes you think you have a great title for your book and sometimes, after using this title for a long time in conversation, you realize (through a quick online search) that you chose the same title as the name of an RPG. I don't write RPG books. Back to the drawing board. 100
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 19/06/2026Sometimes, you just need to make a tie blanket for a cousin. This one is the sweetest strawberry blanket my niece could ask for, made by my daughter. #writingbreak #wearecrafty #finalcopy 010
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 13/06/2026Good question. It's written in first person present so odds are good it happens at the same time. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 13/06/2026Hmmmm. Maybe. I ended up changing the end of that one today during a line edit pass. I think it added another layer of danger and urgency. It gave them more of a reason to move on than what I originally wrote. But the chapter on the whole was more eye opening for the MC. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 11/06/2026Yes. I don't have major restructuring happening because I lay it out ahead of time but I did add a scene I thought would be a chapter and a chapter that I thought would be a scene. I have divided chapters to create new chapters so it could breathe a bit better. All those changes really helped. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 10/06/2026The second book came to me in a fever dream so I jotted it all down before I forgot it. I saved it. It's living for tomorrow at this point. I haven't looked at it in months honestly. So I guess it's a roadmap for that book when I get there, subject to changed based on where book 1 takes me. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 08/06/2026I really don't know. If I had to guess, it's my rough outline for the second book. Not touching it until the first in series is done. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026I try to connect them. Sometimes I have to change some of the existing book. Other times, I don't. I am not precious about it. 210
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026Hey! I email myself ideas that I cannot get to. It has helped me hold onto them tremendously. When I have time and space to dedicate to writing, I go to my inbox and find all of my ideas waiting for me. Give it a try and let me know how it goes! 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026Yes and I actually love revising. Getting to add layers? Sign me up. I am always down to make things better. Do you like to revise? 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026You know what? Writing by hand actually helps you remember better. So I bet you know that book backwards and forwards now! 100
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026I write as much as I can until I need an outline and then I do one. And then I write. And then I revise. Somewhere in the morning mist and sometimes in the evening I get ideas. I percolate them for a while and get them in. One scene is turning out differently than I had planned and for the better. 🤪 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026Hey, that works, too. A lot of people in my discord have to kill their darlings. Sounds like you're in the same boat. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026I really only have ideas that serve the story. It's like it's constantly playing in the back of my head. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026Honestly, this will sound totally hokey but they both just came to me when I wasn't paying attention. I sat down and wrote a folk resistence song to go in one of them. And the other? I guess I just realized I mentioned something twice, opened it as a mystery and never gave the MC any closure. 🤷♀️ 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026One of them partially answers a question from earlier chapters. The other open the MC's eyes to another way of looking at the world. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026Like you, I write the bones first. I do have two scenes I want to add but had been looking for the right place. I found one last week and today, I found the other. These scenes will expand the world and the understanding of things happening in the plot. Everything else will be texture and color. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026Tbh, that's the next pass on my list after interiority. I bet it will just enhance what is already there. But I don't know yet for sure! 🫣 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 06/06/2026I've been quietly revising my debut novel over the last few weeks. I am currently on my interiority pass and then I will do a world building pass. I've made my myself a checklist but need your help. What's your method for revising? #amwriting #writersofbluesky 220
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 19/05/2026I've been working through an expansion pass on The Last Remnant and it is so fun to add things that make the world richer or the characters deeper. Tell me - are you an overwrites or an underwriter and what do you love about your method of writing? #writersofbluesky #amwriting #writingcommunity 010
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 17/05/2026I am so glad you did! I read The Count of Monte Cristo- unabridged- years ago and it was a delicious read. Totally worth the wait. I just keep hearing that readers are binging books and trying to impress others with how many books they've read and shorter books allow them to read more. 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 17/05/2026I want to know your opinion on book length. People are gravitating toward shorter books these days but publishers still have higher word count expectations. Are they right to hold the line or should they get more in line with what the market seems to want? #writersofbluesky #amwriting #booksky 141
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 04/05/2026On the road today I decided that I needed another scene/chapter in The Last Remnant Here's what I can tell you. 👉It has a cave 👉There's a folk anthem 👉It's important It was so fun to write the anthem before digging into the actual scene! #writingcommunity #readersofbluesky #writersofbluesky 040
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 30/04/2026Not as much food as you would want but yeah. There's food. and lies. And danger. All the good things, you know? 120
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 30/04/2026Sometimes inspiration hits at night. This evening, I was able to write a section that deepens the relationships and reveals in the chapter. It's one I have had in my head for a while. It isn't done yet but I got pretty far and I am so proud of it. What are you working on? #writingcommunity 030
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 25/04/2026I got feedback that my characters feel real and the settings lived in. Goal unlocked! 🔓🔑🙌 110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 20/04/2026My WIP for #CampRevPit is The Last Remnant. Hunted by the Initiative for secrets they think she knows, Sauriah is desperate to learn the truth behind mysterious disappearances before the nation's past is erased - and her with it. 071
Reposted by Winter StevensRevise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · 20/04/2026Good morning, Campers! 🏕️ Let's kick off #CampRevPit with some introductions! Use #CampKickoff to tell us a bit about yourself and what you're working on. Pitch it in any way, shape, or form. 166314
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 18/04/2026At The End of Everything X Sunrise on the Reaping A young woman in hiding races to discover the truth behind the new regime's plan before they erase every trace of the past - and her with it. #posterpit #W #T #YA / #NA The Last Remnant is a commercial thriller set in a dystopian world. 0197
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 18/04/2026Poster Girl X Sunrising on the Reaping A young woman in hiding races to discover the truth behind the new regime's plan before they erase every trace of the past - and her with it. #posterpit #W #T #A 1257
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 16/04/2026I took the pruning sheers to my book this evening. To my surprise, one of the scenes I cut would be PERFECT later in the book. PERFECT. Seriously. Addition by subtraction. (And addition again.) NBD Keep going! #writingcommunity #revision #writersofbluesky 010
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 15/04/2026I was so worried about you. I actually thought something tragic had happened. I am glad you survived! Bullet wound? What a story you must have. Girl, take care of yourself. First and foremost. 030
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 15/04/2026Just a little encouragement this morning for all my #writer friends out there. It's your MS's first time on the planet. It's like your kid, still trying to figure out what it wants to be when it grows up. Revise Rewrite Ask for advice and help. It takes a village. You got this. Keep going. 040
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 15/04/2026I dug into my manuscript tonight. I had revised it once before submitting to #revpit and that was definitely not enough. I: 👉 added important details 👉 reorderd the opening 👉 raised the stakes And more. It is so much better. Can't wait for chapter 2! Keep going! #writingcommunity 070
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 13/04/2026#RevPitWaiting is over and I am diving back into my MS tomorrow with a few pages of additions I'd like to layer in. Not gonna lie - so excited about this! Here's to all who entered! You did a brave thing. Never give up! #writersky #writingcommunity #authorsofbluesky 0110
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 13/04/2026Thanks for all of this. Will you be emailing all who submitted to you? Some editors are and I just wondered if I should watch my inbox for anything from you. I understand if time doesn't permit. I am just curious. 000
Winter Stevens @winterstevens.bsky.social · 13/04/2026Fair. I just wondered if you had hired an editor and they turned you down after taking your money or signing an agreement. It's poor form even with a verbal agreement, though. 010