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Trinity🪞is querying🪞

@trinitywrites.bsky.social
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PNW🌲 26 y/o SFF and mystery/thriller writer 📝 #RevPit winner ‘25, PNWA Writer’s Contest finalist ‘26

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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 24/07/2026
An #agentsguide to DON'T LOOK TOO HARD, a 76k YA speculative thriller. #questpit #Q #YA #S #T #MY
a guide to "Don't Look Too Hard," a YA speculative thriller | 76k words. Background image of a young woman staring into a mirror, covering her eyes with one hand.Pitch: 16-year-old Jess, who sees people's future corpses in their reflections, must race to change fate when her visions reveal that her only friend is about to be murdered.
Comps:
"The Darkness Rises" by Stacy Stokes and "When the Bones Sing" by Ginny Myers Sain.tropes & themes:
PNW setting
guilt
facing unpleasant truths
addiction
loss & trauma
everyone's got a secretexcerpt:
Mel's reflection, illuminated by the glow of a yellowed bulb, proved oh-so-easy to catch. The sight ripped the air out of my lungs. All of it: the whine of a distant ambulance, Mel's shouting, the frantic steps of other people running before the police arrived, everything except the pool faded. Ripples distorted Mel's image, but it didn't matter.

It was impossible to miss the giant knife sticking out of her back.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 13/01/2026
16-year-old Jess, who sees people’s future corpses in their reflections, must race to change fate when her visions reveal that her only friend is about to be murdered. #bluepit📖 #bluepit #YA #M #SP #W
Girl with cracked mirror, wall of photos with red string, bff necklace, gothic woods, shadow of hand holding knife, two teens climbing a fence, headlights, and a girl whispering, also a cs Lewis quote saying you can’t go back and change the beginning, but you can start where you are and change the ending
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 09/01/2026
moodboard for my wip ya spec thriller: a teenage girl suffering from visions of death must save her only friend from being murdered before the vision comes true. #BluePitHype #BluePit
girl looking in cracked mirror, photos with red string connecting them, parted bff heart necklace, dark forest, shadow of hand holding a knife, two kids climbing a fence, car headlights, and a girl holding a finger to her lips
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 26/12/2025
Christmas book haul 🫶🎄 what about you guys? 👀
Save the cat writes a novel by Jessica Brody, the lamb by Lucy rose, and the raven scholar by Antonia hodgson
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 11/12/2025
snip from a party scene near the beginning of my WIP, a YA spec thriller #WIPsnips #writesky #writingcommunity
I fumbled with my phone, sliding it into the back pocket of my genes. “Uh, hey,” I said, crossing my arms.
The boy’s lips moved right as Ariana Grande went full send into belting out the bridge to her song.
“She’s too powerful,” he shouted.
“Who?”
“Ariana Grande.” He laughed and ran a hand through his hair. “I probably didn’t make the best first impression after all of… that,” he said, gesturing at the
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 21/10/2025
METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART 👩‍💻Lonely teenage hacker 🤖Mysterious android boy ❤️‍🔥Slow-burn romance 🩸Powerful mega-corporations 🌃A sprawling city 🔎Scavenger hunt for computer chips that hold answers about more than just a murder... 🎨: @kaelidem #SciFiPit #SFPit #YA #CB #Q
white hair boy stands next to girl with black braid on the roof of a cyberpunk city
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 10/10/2025
it's research, I SWEAR (it was not, in fact, research)
man with the caption "me" is whistling at a woman with the caption "article about bread in the middle ages" while his girlfriend with the caption "current wip" watches in disgust
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 23/09/2025
#ya #sf #q #unhingedpit iykyk
Four panels. First panel has vertical line of text, says “mysterious android boy.” Second panel has two vertical lines of text that say “mysterious android boy” and “angry hacker girl.” Third panel has two vertical lines of text that say “android and hacker make friends” and “totally not evil corps chase.” Final panel has one vertical line of text that says “everyone looks for same thing” and a horizontal line of text that says “memory chips w secrets”
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 25/08/2025
This is unrelated to writing, but I just wanted to share I passed JLPT N2 today 🥳
Text says N2, passed
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 19/08/2025
Excited to show the character art of Alecto and Renaya from my #amquerying YA sci-fi Metal Bones, Plastic Heart! Art is by the very talented @kaelidem.bsky.social ❤️
white-haired smiling boy in a black sweater and black jeans with his hands on his hips is standing next to a girl with black hair in a braid and dark brown eyes. The girl is wearing a long black coat, black pants, and a gray sweater, and her arms are crossed. Behind them is a cityscape with blue and purple lights.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 06/08/2025
bool father_murdered = true; char secrets[] = "hidden in the memory chips"; if (father_murdered) { printf(">> Initiating investigation...\n"); printf(">> Identity of killer: UNKNOWN\n"); printf("!! ERROR: Data corruption detected.\n"); } #questpit #Q #YA #SF
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 06/08/2025
BLADE RUNNER x THE PERKS OF BEING A WALLFLOWER Lonely hacker Renaya must help a kind android boy recover his memories so she can solve her father's murder - before those behind it get to her first. #questpit #Q #YA #SF
Black and gray background of the inside of a circuit board. Metal Bones, Plastic Heart. YA sci-fi, 85,000 words. 
White arrows point to the following:
Slow-burn romance
Dark cyberpunk vibes
Fast-paced plot
Grumpy x sunshine
Cast of messy, loveable teens
What does it mean to be human?
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 04/08/2025
25 years around the sun ☀️
heart-shaped birthday cake that says happy 25th birthday trin!leon dicaprio saying no dont turn 25 your so sexy aha
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 13/07/2025
METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART 👩‍💻Lonely teenage hacker 🤖Mysterious android boy ❤️‍🔥Slow-burn romance 🩸Powerful mega-corporations 🌃A sprawling city 🔎Scavenger hunt for computer chips that hold answers about more than just a murder... #BluePit #BluePit📖 #YA #SF #M #Q
girl leaning against a bare mattress. a pink and blue jelly fish. blurry red and gold fish. .a blond-haired man cooking with a cat on his back A tall, purple-tinted tower. A hand with blue fire. Two people almost kissing. A distorted silhouette. A dandelion on fire. A city with a red haze.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 11/07/2025
The perfect hand-crafted playlist to enjoy while reading about a loner hacker girl rolling her eyes for the fiftieth time at an android boi who loves cats #PlaylistPitch #YA #SF #amquerying
Spotify playlist. First song is "Please Please Please" by Sabrina Carpenter and the next song is "Read My Book" by Morris Warwick.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 09/07/2025
curse that android and his stupidly beautiful eyes and horrible taste in comedy #YA #SF #Q #UnhingedPit
photo of a girl getting a heart to her face. text on girl reads "socially maladjusted hacker girl who's grossed out by androids" and the heart says "one disgustingly endearing android boy"
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 08/07/2025
Hey Girl meme x MBPH. Truly the crossover to crossover all crossovers
ryan gosling. hey girl, i love how thoughtfull you are. you know nothing makes me feel more alive than our near-death experiences.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 08/07/2025
An #agentsguide to my #amquerying debut novel: ⚙️METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART💖 #YA #SF
An agent's guide to Metal Bones, Plastic Heart. YA sci-fi, 85 thousand words, by Trinity Pierce.The Pitch:
Comps are The Dividing Sky by Jill Tew, Mindwalker by Kate Dylan, Want by Cindy Pon, and Cinder by Marissa Meyer
Lonely hacker Renaya must help a kind android boy recover his memories so she can solve her father's murder - before those behind it get to her first.Tropes and Themes:
Slow-burn romance, black cat x golden retriever, he falls first, found family, corruption, identity, overcoming grief, and loneliness.Opening Lines:
From a distance, the mourners looked like clusters of penguins huddled together. I fiddled with the end of my braid, strangling my fingertips with strands of black hair until they turned blue. A shiver ran through me as a cold breeze kissed the back of my neck; I tossed my braid back over my shoulder. I'd take the clean, freezing air over the stench of other people's breath any day of the week, thank you very much. They could keep that.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 08/07/2025
No bingo D: but enjoy a snippet ft an eye color description 👀
His green eyes were a forest, the branches of its trees tangling me until I suddenly couldn't move.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 07/07/2025
#writing is all fun and games until this happens
spot an error in my WIP I'm too lazy to fix - a man holding his head with "Panik" written below him
it's fine, I write a note that says "fix this later" - a man calmly gazing at nothing with the word "Kalm" written below him
when "later" comes, I don't remember wth I'm supposed to fix - a man panicking a lot with the word "Panik" written below him
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 04/07/2025
omg there's no way, I couldn't possibly... I mean I guess if you really insist ≽^•⩊•^≼ enjoy the drone show #WritingCommunity, no flash photography plz (+ check out @jademasonwrites.bsky.social's wonderful snippets, Pop-Tarts are involved)
Drones whizzed past our floor, a black cloud that zipped up to the darkening sky. I recoiled, but Alecto caught me by the waist. "Watch."

The black cloud congealed into a clump, caught in the net of light pollution. A spark of red ignited amidst the amorphous blob and spread, blazing color into the other drones until a magnificent red rose blossomed before my eyes. The rose wilted and its petals peeled off, exploding into fireworks before they touched the skyline. 

"Told you," he whispered, pulling me in tighter. 

For half an hour, dragons and giants battled in the heavens; a jester cartwheeled across the stars; an elephant balanced on the moon. I wanted to glue the color in place, but it drained out at the end anyway and the sky became a graveyard. 

METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART by Trinity Pierce.

Photo of drones in the shape of a whale.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 03/07/2025
person posing happily with sparkles around them
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 08/06/2025
#RevPitClassof25 Day 7! A HUGE thank you to my wonderful, diligent editor, @dcmdraper.bsky.social. She offered so many great suggestions while also treating both me and my work with respect, and I can really tell that my manuscript is now on a completely different level. 10/10 would #RevPit again!✨
Blue background with RevPit logo and line drawings of books and sparkles. 

The winners of RevPit 2025 would like to share a little about our projects and experience.
#RevPitClassof25

June 2 - Pitch your book
June 3 - Share an aesthetic or playlist
June 4 - Introduce your MCs
June 5 - Share a snippet
June 6 - What you learned from RevPit
June 7 - Show us your writing space
June 8 - Say thank you to your editor
June 9 - Showcase
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 07/06/2025
#RevPitClassof25 #RevPit Day 6: Show Us Your Writing Space I’ve gotta be honest, 90% of my writing is done in my bed, so here it is in all of its glory:
Bed with stuffed animals on top of it.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 06/06/2025
#RevPitClassof25 Day 5: What You Learned From #RevPit 📝Edits aren't always as scary as they seem 👀The importance of fresh eyes on your writing cannot be overstated 👯Community really helps with the ups and downs of writing (and the RevPit community is fantastic)
Blue background with RevPit logo and line drawings of books and sparkles. 

The winners of RevPit 2025 would like to share a little about our projects and experience.
#RevPitClassof25

June 2 - Pitch your book
June 3 - Share an aesthetic or playlist
June 4 - Introduce your MCs
June 5 - Share a snippet
June 6 - What you learned from RevPit
June 7 - Show us your writing space
June 8 - Say thank you to your editor
June 9 - Showcase
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 05/06/2025
#RevPitClassof25 #RevPit #writing Day 4: Share a Snippet A short interaction between my MCs Renaya (a human hacker) and Alecto (an android boy) from my YA sci-fi, METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART💫
White text against a navy blue background. There is a leather couch, a small wooden table, and a candle. The text reads:

The lobby was small, but it dripped in sophisticated, understated opulence. Photographs of Neo Vaultira's skyline stood out against the dark-blue wallpaper, framed in silver and hanging over leather couches.
I inhaled deeply. "What's that? It smells good."
"White tea and sage," Alecto said.
"There's no way you actually know that. What, now you have a 'smell identifier' too?"
Alecto raised his eyebrows and pointed at a labeled candle on a small table by one of the couches.
"Oh."
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 04/06/2025
#RevPitClassof25 #RevPit Day 3: Introduce Your MCs Info about Renaya Gillox and Alecto Mordan from my YA sci-fi, METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART! ✨
The silhouette of a girl watching the sunset with black telephone wires stretching overhead. A hand pressed against a glowing blue chest. Pink and purple splatter background. Text reads: 

Renaya Gillox: a teenage hacker who is more comfortable with code than people. Bottles her emotions up. Likes trashy TV shows, retro tech, pizza. Dislikes exercise, androids, small talk. 

Alecto Mordan: a kind, yet mysterious android boy. Puts others before himself. Likes cats, funny movies, stupid jokes. Dislikes sad music, injustice. Text is illegible after.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 03/06/2025
#RevPitClassof25 #RevPit Day 2: Share an Aesthetic The vibes of my YA sci-fi, METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART <3 👩‍💻Lonely teenage hacker 🤖Mysterious android boy ❤️‍🔥Slow-burn romance 🩸Powerful mega-corporations 🌃A sprawling city 🔎Scavenger hunt for computer chips that hold the answer to a murder
Skyscrapers rising through a sheet of fog. Two people sitting next to each other on a rooftop. Fish inside a glowing computer screen. Blue forget-me-nots. A hand reaching towards another through the fog. A girl wearing a wired helmet sitting in front of nine televisions.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 02/06/2025
#RevPitClassof25 #RevPit Day 1: Pitch Your Book
Computer error message box in front of a glittery blue and purple background.

Metal Bones, Plastic Heart
Lonely hacker Renaya must help a kind android boy recover his memories so she can solve her father's murder—before those behind it get to her first.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 01/06/2025
Hello #writingcommunity, I have an exciting announcement! As the clock ticks down to the #RevPit showcase on June 9th, #RevPitClassof25 is going to share info about our projects starting tomorrow! ☺️🎉 If you're interested in following along, keep an eye on the hashtag for the next week. ✨
Blue background with RevPit logo and line drawings of books and sparkles. 

The winners of RevPit 2025 would like to share a little about our projects and experience.
#RevPitClassof25

June 2 - Pitch your book
June 3 - Share an aesthetic or playlist
June 4 - Introduce your MCs
June 5 - Share a snippet
June 6 - What you learned from RevPit
June 7 - Show us your writing space
June 8 - Say thank you to your editor
June 9 - Showcase
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 19/04/2025
Lonely hacker Renaya must help a kind android boy recover his memories so she can solve her father's murder—before those behind it get to her first. #PosterPitW #PosterPit #YA #SF
Memories hold more than faces. Renaya Gillox. Alecto Mordan. METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART, in the query trenches June 2025. A robot hand holds a red plastic heart. One half of the poster is red, the other blue. Faint binary code in the background.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 25/03/2025
here's the playlist! #revpitwaiting #revpit
METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART PLAYLIST.
Renaya (Female MC):
"I'd Rather Pretend" by Bryant Barnes and "You're On You're Own, Kid" by Taylor Swift.
Alecto (Male MC):
"Let Down" by Radiohead and "her" by JVKE.

A white-haired boy cheers happily in a corner while watching a cat sit on an irritated girl who is trying to sleep. A radio plays music in the corner. An arrow points at the boy and girl. A message next to the arrow reads "an accurate depiction of their dynamic."
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 12/02/2025
BLADE RUNNER x THE PERKS OF BEING A WALLFLOWER 👩‍💻Lonely teenage hacker 🤖Mysterious android boy ❤️‍🔥Slow-burn romance 🩸Powerful mega-corporations 🌃A sprawling city 🔎Scavenger hunt for computer chips that hold the answer to a murder… and maybe immortality, too. #questpit #Q #YA #SF #MY
A father and a daughter split by a tear in the paper. A foreboding alley in a red-tinted city. Piles of cash. A dark-haired girl with her eyes crossed out. A hand holding a key. A boy with an empty photo strip covering his eyes. A dark green eye.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 22/01/2025
Fun edit I made about my #amquerying YA cyberpunk story where an android and a hacker work together to solve a murder before they wind up victims themselves music: Warriyo - Mortals ft Laura Brehm, remix by Xandy 幽霊
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 17/01/2025
An #agentsguide to my #amquerying debut novel: ⚙️METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART💖 #P2Ppit #Q #UW #YA #SF
An agent's guide to Metal Bones, Plastic Heart. YA sci-fi, 82 thousand words, by Trinity Pierce.The Pitch:
Comps are The Dividing Sky by Jill Tew, Mindwalker by Kate Dylan, and Want by Cindy Pon.
18-year-old Renaya Gillox is more comfortable with code than people, but when the death of her father disrupts her peaceful life, she must help an android boy recover his emotions so she can solve her father's murder before those behind it get to her first.Tropes and Themes:
Slow-burn romance, black cat x golden retriever, he falls first, found family, corruption, identity, overcoming grief, and loneliness.Opening Lines:
From a distance, the mourners looked like clusters of penguins huddled together. Renaya Gillox stood alone, fiddling with the end of her black braid. She was busy contemplating whether the guests crowded together for warmth or comfort. Even if the answer was both, surely one outweighed the other by a slim margin. A particularly cold breeze whispered the answer she most expected.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 17/01/2025
BLADE RUNNER x THE PERKS OF BEING A WALLFLOWER 👩‍💻Lonely teenage hacker 🤖Mysterious android boy ❤️‍🔥Slow-burn romance 🩸Powerful mega-corporations 🌃A sprawling city 🔎Scavenger hunt for computer chips that hold the answer to a murder… and maybe immortality, too. #P2Ppit #Q #UW #YA #SF
A closed eye with specks of neon paint. A foggy road with a glowing traffic light. A quote that says, "It was a dream, must have been, because her hand fell into his in the same easy way yin interlocks yang." A shooting star. A glowing cityscape. A blurry photo of a nightclub. Two people holding hands.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 17/01/2025
BLADE RUNNER x THE PERKS OF BEING A WALLFLOWER Lonely hacker Renaya must help a kind android boy recover his memories so she can solve her father's murder—before those behind it get to her first. #P2Ppit #Q #UW #YA #SF
Skyscrapers rising through a sheet of fog. Two people sitting next to each other on a rooftop. Fish inside a glowing computer screen. Blue forget-me-nots. A hand reaching towards another through the fog. A girl wearing a wired helmet sitting in front of nine televisions.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 15/01/2025
Here are a few lines from my #amquerying YA sci-fi book, METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART! #P2Ppit
She didn't think the android was lying, but she almost wished it was. It would be more reassuring to know there was a solid reason behind his advice besides a gut feeling. A "gear feeling"? Whatever feeling an EvoSynth had.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 13/01/2025
BLADE RUNNER x THE PERKS OF BEING A WALLFLOWER Lonely hacker Renaya must help a kind android boy recover his memories so she can solve her father's murder—before those behind it get to her first. #BluePit #Q #YA #SF📖
Skyscrapers rising through a sheet of fog. Two people sitting next to each other on a rooftop. Fish inside a glowing computer screen. Blue forget-me-nots. A hand reaching towards another through the fog. A girl wearing a wired helmet sitting in front of nine televisions.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 13/01/2025
BLADE RUNNER 2049 x THE PERKS OF BEING A WALLFLOWER An #agentsguide to my #amquerying debut novel: ⚙️METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART💖 #BluePit #Q #YA #SF 📖
An agent's guide to Metal Bones, Plastic Heart. YA sci-fi, 82 thousand words, by Trinity Pierce.The Pitch:
Comps are The Dividing Sky by Jill Tew, Mindwalker by Kate Dylan, and Want by Cindy Pon.
18-year-old Renaya Gillox is more comfortable with code than people, but when the murder of her father and the arrival of an android boy disrupts her peaceful life, she must unravel her father's secrets before the city's elite put her in a coffin of her own.Tropes and Themes:
Slow-burn romance, black cat x golden retriever, he falls first, found family, corruption, identity, overcoming grief, and loneliness.Opening Lines:
From a distance, the mourners looked like clusters of penguins huddled together. Renaya Gillox stood alone, fiddling with the end of her black braid. She was busy contemplating whether the guests crowded together for warmth or comfort. Even if the answer was both, surely one outweighed the other by a slim margin. A particularly cold breeze whispered the answer she most expected.
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Trinity🪞is querying🪞 @trinitywrites.bsky.social · 09/01/2025
Here is a moodboard with some of the vibes of my #amquerying YA sci-fi novel, METAL BONES, PLASTIC HEART. I'm excited to share more about it in a few days! #BluePitHype
Night cityscape. A glitchy screen with a black gear cog on it. An outstretched human hand in pink lighting reaching toward a robot hand in blue lighting, with a glitch effect separating them. The silhouette of a girl watching the sunset with black telephone wires stretching overhead. A hand pressed against a glowing blue chest. White and purple flowers with a falling white petal. A red room with a broken white bust.
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