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Shy Alon

@shy-alon.bsky.social
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Author of speculative & medical thrillers 🧬 Querying my debut | #QuestPit Gym rat • tech survivor • dad

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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 23/08/2026
I started working on a new sci-fi project that I don't hate. The co-star is a rabbit.
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Funny Rabbit Knocks Over Pink Balls
ALT: Funny Rabbit Knocks Over Pink Balls
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 16/05/2026
Finished reading Fight Club. If you're one of those weirdoes who enjoy their sanity, I would not recommend. Otherwise ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ www.goodreads.com/book/show/36... #booksky
The cover of 'Fight Club' book - a man grinning with his front tooth broken and blood running from his nose.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 09/05/2026
So, how do I find critique partners? (I'm not even going to mention the β word, to avoid the onslaught of AI assisted paid readers). #writingcommunity
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 09/05/2026
Hello fellow #RevPit er's. Is #ABCPit happening? Is it a thing?
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 02/05/2026
Looking for beta readers and critique partners for The Idun Variant: • Adult speculative medical thriller • Single POV • Domestic drama + ethical horror • Near-future biotech • 80,000 words #A #SF #T #M #ABCPit
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 02/05/2026
I honestly don't know. Writing has always been a hobby for me, and (forgive my arrogance) I surprised myself with a book I believe is worthy of publishing. I don't know how and how well I fit in the publishing eco-system, if at all. #CampRevPit #CRPfireflies
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 02/05/2026
#ShoutOut to everyone who participated in #CampRevPit, and a warm thank you to my #CRPfireflies counselor @arumiwrites.bsky.social and the crew.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 29/04/2026
Well, it's more or less this. #CRPfireflies #CampRevPit #MoodboardTwist
An elderly, stunned woman in an emerald velvet gown confronts a blonde, sheepish young woman in a lace nightgown at the bottom of a grand, wood-paneled staircase.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 28/04/2026
1. Like my previous speculative books, the technology was published in a scientific journal while I was still revising. 2. The sexy self centered yoga instructor character is based on a real person, whom I no longer speak with. 3. I Fully understand the science in the story. #CampRevPit
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a man in a suit and tie says " you know i m something of a scientist myself "
ALT: a man in a suit and tie says " you know i m something of a scientist myself "
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 28/04/2026
Agent’s guide to THE IDUN VARIANT: • Adult speculative medical thriller • Single POV • Domestic drama + ethical horror • Near-future (almost here) biotech • 80,000 words • Standalone with series potential #CampRevPit #CRPfireflies
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 25/04/2026
When it's time to act, Adrian does... Nothing... At least until his back is against the wall. #CampRevPit #CharacterFlaw
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 25/04/2026
Well, it's definitely a moment: #CRPBeeMine #CampRevPit #CRPCabinRaids
Adrian wasn’t listening. He felt as if the blinds were removed from his eyes and he was seeing Tessa for the first time for what she truly was. It was like she was a butterfly, but he insisted on imagining her as a caterpillar long after she came out of her cocoon.
So many things seemed unnatural about her. Her eyes were perfectly clear, and her skin was so perfectly smooth it seemed unreal.
Adrian raised her hand and looked at her fingernails. They were cleared of their former pits, and had no hint of discoloration.
“What are you doing? Are we being intimate?”
Still not answering, Adrian looked at her lips. They showed none of the dryness that made Tessa religiously apply balm three times a day, and they filled up. Not quite plump, but almost. They were moist, and parted just slightly.
They were right, he realized. All of them. Mina was right, and Madeline was right, and Tessa was right. She was a different person, and a superior one, in every single way he could think of, every way that mattered. He needed to let go.
Tessa shifted closer, until their shoulders touched. “Do you find my lips interesting?”
He nodded.
“For research? Or for something else?”
“For something else,” he answered, his voice cracking.
“Like what? Intimacy? Show me.”
Adrian held the nape of her neck and kissed her.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 25/04/2026
Immortality with no catch and no strings attached! Scientists respecting rules and regulations down to the letter! Mentor and protégé totally respecting each other's boundries and acting professionally! #CRPCabinRaids #CampRevPit #CRPSparkleSkunks #CRPfireflies
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 25/04/2026
Well, #CRPCabinRaids #CRPFantasyFoxes
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a close up of an older woman 's face with her eyes closed and a serious look on her face .
Alt: a close up of Judi Dench's face with her eyes closed and a serious look on her face .
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 25/04/2026
As Adrian, probably Idris Elba. As old Tessa, Dame Judi Dench. As young Tessa... That's a tough one. Maybe Sydney Sweeney? #CRPCabinRaids #CRPNightcrawlers
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 25/04/2026
Adrian has the patience of a saint. Tessa, on the other hand, would snap like a twig even before the elevator stopped. Professor Magnus is not one for wasted time. #CRPfireflies
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 25/04/2026
I forced myself to return to my WIP. Literally forced myself. For multiple reasons, I didn't have the energy to write for a while now. Since this morning, I revised two chapters.
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a man in a suit and tie is smiling and says i just feel good
Alt: a man in a suit and tie is smiling and says i just feel good
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 24/04/2026
Adrian is alarmed when Tessa doesn't remember her wife Dawn. He's horrified that she doesn't care Dawn killed herself, and is more horrified still when Tessa dives straight back into their research with the ambulance still parked in their back yard.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 23/04/2026
"Are your childhood memories so important? Who cares about your honeymoon, the birth of your child, or their graduation ceremony? You live now. Strive for perfection now. And if someone cares for you, and they matter, they matter now. They have to." #VillainVoices #CampRevPit #CRPfireflies
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 22/04/2026
Oh, the generations gaps are starting to show... I'll give it a shot anyway. Story: 👵🏽💉🏥🤒💔❤️‍🩹✝️👩‍🦽💪🚶‍♀️☕🧘‍♀️🔬💰📚👱‍♀️⚰️💋👩‍❤️‍👨💀 MC: 💉😨🏥💀🦆🦆📚🔨🧘‍♀️☕⚱️💋❤️🧪☠️👼 #CampRevPit, #CRPfireflies!
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 22/04/2026
“The virus is working! It’s saving her! That’s why her fever was up!” Adrian growled at her as he persisted in his efforts. “Help me. You’re her doctor for crying out loud! You swore a fucking oath!” #OneLineMC
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 22/04/2026
Adrian's greatest strength is his heart. He fosters hope when all seems lost. He believes in the people surrounding him and their good intentions. He genuinely wants to help, and it shows. Adrian's greatest weakness is, well, his heart. He's easily manipulated and lets others get to him.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 21/04/2026
I mean, I think it's fully cooked, but my readers don't agree...
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a woman singing on stage with the words oh you 're halfway there
Alt: Jon Bon Jovi singing on stage with the words oh you 're halfway there
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 20/04/2026
I didn't choose my genre. My genre chose me. I wanted to write science fiction and fantasy. That was what I read since I was a kid, climbing on the shelves of my father's library, picking Asimov from all the way up. But when I started writing, it was just today with a twist. What if... #CRPfireflies
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 15/04/2026
As a data guy, I know the inherent issues of working with partial data. There are inherent biases, flawed relations and false assumptions. Still, this is the best I've got (I'd love more data). Here is my #RevPit winners analysis:
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 13/04/2026
It's not that I feel bad about losing (not winning) #RevPit, it's about belonging. Or rather, not belonging. Goodbye, fellow revpitters, and congrats to the winners.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 11/04/2026
A weird thank you. I started writing a few years ago and the most supportive community I've found was on Twitter. We had writing rooms. We did sprints. We read each other's premature stuff. About three years ago, they all scattered to the wind. Gone in a single day. Thanks guys, wherever you are.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 10/04/2026
Writing well never came easy to me (arguably it still doesn't). Out of the books on writing I've read (quite a few, most fairly good) this one stands out. Clear, concise, and down to earth, a perfect mix of theory and practice. I couldn't recommend it enough. www.ursulakleguin.com/steering-the...
The front page of "Steering the Craft" by Ursula K Le Guin.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 10/04/2026
It depends on my stress levels. If I'm relatively stress free - I'm pantsing the hell out of my book. Lately I've only been plotting 🥹
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 04/04/2026
My protagonist's flaw is that he has no agency. Let's see how we'll that goes through edits... #writingcommunity
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 03/04/2026
#revpitwaiting My watering hole / writing place:
Me sitting in a café with a hat
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 02/04/2026
This is Dawn. She passed away so suddenly. Me and my characters miss her sorely.
An elderly lady sitting by a pond holding a cup of tea.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 02/04/2026
I know how to make my novel more publishable: 1. Remove the gray areas and make it fit on a shelf. 2. Lay on some genre specific tropes. 3. Revise to 1st person, present tense (for the book-tokers). The problem is that it's really, REALLY, not the book I want to write. #writingcommunity
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 28/03/2026
I suspect it all ends with cultural fit.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 28/03/2026
Just started the actual writing, and I'm getting excited!
A confused troubled man in stressful situations
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 26/03/2026
I'll let you guess my favorite genre as a child, but I grew up on Asimov, Heinlein, C. Clark, Silverberg, and Zelazny. Of late, my favorite writer is Ursula K. Le Guin, and I can't recommend 'Steering the Craft' enough.
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Omer Behar @omer-behar.bsky.social · 24/03/2026
2/ beta is free, but we're keeping the group small so we can support everyone properly. once it fills up, it closes. join the waitlist → silentasistant.com/waitlist @shy-alon.bsky.social
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Join the Waitlist — Silent Assistant
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 23/03/2026
Well, I've been too stressed to write these last three weeks. I tried the "it's just a draft" thing but I can't turn a blind eye to lackluster prose. Let's hope better days are coming.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 23/03/2026
This will expose my age. My favorite book is The Man in the Maze by Robert Silverberg. It was the first sci-fi book I read where the heroes are not all good, the villains are not that bad. The "bad guy" wants to save the human race. The "good guy" just wants to die in peace. A masterpiece.
A sci-fi book cover depicting a man standing at the middle of a maze.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 21/03/2026
I think I've found the opposite of inspiration. Knock knock.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 20/03/2026
Well, it's not the climax, but it's close...
A woman twirling in a dark bedroom
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 19/03/2026
I'm not very good at mood-boarding... #RevPitWaiting
An old lady pushing her spouse, an old scientist, in a wheelchair. A glamorous blonde having coffee. Ducks swimming in a pond. A glass of amaretto. A virus. A syringe.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 19/03/2026
I'm doing my best to stay positive today, but it's hard. It's really hard.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 18/03/2026
👵🏻 Tessa, an aged scientist suffering from a terminal disease, wants another chance at life. 👤 Adrian, her teaching assistant turned nurse, is willing to risk everything to give her that chance.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 17/03/2026
Professor Tessa Magnus has one last chance hope of staying by her wife's side - the experimental Idun virus, a therapeutic promise of radical rejuvenation. Adrian, Tessa's dedicated teaching assistant, administers the cure, bracing for the onslaught of repercussions. #RevPitWaiting #RevPit
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 17/03/2026
I have no idea why...
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a yellow haired anime character wearing a pink top
Alt: a yellow haired anime character wearing a pink top
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 16/03/2026
It's always the "what if". What if a universal cure would rob you of who you are? (The Idun Variant) What if our descendants in the far distant future would want to learn about us? (sudo) What if an ex terrorist would become the world's best hope to defeat a deadly pandemic (The Pain)
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 14/03/2026
But... But what if I don't like romantasy?
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 13/03/2026
So *obviously* today I wrote the first chapter of a new sci-fi book that's been brewing in my mind because why the hell not.
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Shy Alon @shy-alon.bsky.social · 13/03/2026
I think I'm unlikely to sell my book because it doesn't really belong on any single shelf. Genre-bending is probably better left to the veteran writers.
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