sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 13/04/2026Thank you! I really appreciate you circling back on this one❤️ 020
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 13/04/2026of course I had to have a typo in my post. 😂I’m gonna MISS the feeling. 120
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 13/04/2026In a few hours we will no longer be #revpitwaiting. I’m gonna the feeling becoz this experience in itself has been a win! Made new friends and got so much support from my writing group ❤️@cecewrites13.bsky.social @lizdaviswrites.bsky.social @bmfwriter.bsky.social @dani-s-writes.bsky.social and Ash! 290
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 13/04/2026Telling it like it is so grateful for you writing bestie! ❤️ 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 13/04/2026So grateful for y’all! ❤️ can’t believe that in a few hours we will no longer be #revpitwaiting lol😂 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026My betas loved the multiple POVs and didn't find them confusing. Pretty much all my projects end up being dual or multi POV so I want to keep honing this craft. Dual POV novels are easier to find and study, but multi POV are harder. If you know of some you enjoyed, do share! 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026Thank you! That’s super helpful ❤️ 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026It’s super rare to find pov changes in a chapter though. The only example that comes to mind is Lessons in Chemistry. I’d love to hear of other examples so I can study how it’s been done! 000
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026Agreed for YA. Mine is adult. I have a reason for intro-ing all povs in my opening chapter ( as they all are very deeply affected by what is about to happen—the main hook of the story) but the story then splits up into individual chapters for each pov. My beta readers loved it but…🤷♀️ 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026This is my exact concern with my multi POV MS, although mine is third person close except for one pov which is first person for a specific reason. Having said that, there are wonderful books ( like Remarkably Bright Creatures - a debut!) that have pulled this off. 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026None seem to be mine but love that you are pro-prologue! ❤️ would love ur thoughts on multi pov prologue ( this is for my other ms, not the one I submitted for Revpit) — can one have a prologue with all 4 POVs, separated by ***, as long as the voices are distinct? 220
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026I love this book! It’s one of the comp for my speculative fiction manuscript ❤️ 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 08/04/2026Some of my favorite books have been multitaskers in that they are also quiet love letters to the cities that form the backdrop of the story. I’ve found myself trying to do the same in my writing. This view tho! 😍 050
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 07/04/2026So excited for this one! Cant wait for my pre order ( and accompanying cat stickers) 😻 130
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 07/04/2026Oh I definitely felt all the possible feels, crying included lol! 000
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 07/04/2026I just finished You& Me and You & Me and You& Me ( gosh, it’s a hard title to write out lol!) —and absolutely adored it!! 000
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 07/04/2026My favorite reads so far have been Just Watch Me by Lior Torenberg and You& Me and You & Me and You & Me by Josie Lloyd + Emlyn Rees. So many I’m excited to read next: Once & Again by Rebecca Serle, American Fantasy by Emma Straub, and The Astral Library by Kate Quinn 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 07/04/2026How adorable! Our kiddos are our biggest cheerleaders ❤️ 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 05/04/2026When you end up recreating a precise scene from your manuscript—the time of year, the view, even the weather ended up aligning!❤️ #lifeimitatesart #revpitwaiting #seattle 1100
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 03/04/2026lol was worth a shot 😂 Pulling on my patience pants! #revpitwaiting 230
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 02/04/2026media.tenor.coma man in a blue shirt and tie is sitting at a desk and saying fair enoughALT: a man in a blue shirt and tie is sitting at a desk and saying fair enough 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 02/04/2026Thank you for all your amazing notes across two rounds of #10queries. Curious if you came across several dual/multi pov submissions and whether the notes here reflect thoughts on both/multiple povs when they were reflected in the opening pages. 5 pages is too short, but had to ask! 😆 150
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 31/03/2026Currently reading while I’m #revpitwaiting and obsessed with this dual pov speculative romance! If you’ve ever made a mixed tape for someone or had one made for you ( aging myself here lol!) this one will bring back all the feels 😍 #currentlyreading 190
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 31/03/2026media.tenor.coma man in a suit and tie is standing next to a woman in a green shirt .ALT: a man in a suit and tie is standing next to a woman in a green shirt . 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 30/03/2026Searching for glimpses of spring while tracing my FMC’s running loop. She enjoys morning runs, while I will only amble lol! Does anyone else live vicariously through their MCs? #revpitwaiting #spring #arboretum 260
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 29/03/2026I get tons of writing inspo from music. Indie music has a special place in my heart, especially this band: Good Neighbours! I’ve watched them perform live twice now and obsessed with all their songs 😍 #writinginspo #revpitwaiting #vinyl 170
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 29/03/2026Having read this swoony MS, I can confirm this sorbet has a very important role to play in the story 😍 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2026Might need to create a springtime playlist to go along with them lol 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2026Right now I am focused on my #revpitwaiting ms but noodling with a new ms idea. 111
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2026Lemons FTW 🍋 also, no sharpened ✏️ 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2026They are making me sneeze a lot ( hello spring allergies) but I don’t care because they are pretty lol! 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 28/03/2026Writing involves a lot of waiting— waiting on your characters to tell you where their story is going, waiting on beta reader feedback, waiting on agents, #revpitwaiting Treating myself to flowers to make some of that waiting a tad bit easier ❤️ 5200
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 27/03/2026media.tenor.coma close up of a woman 's face with the words im not nervous at all nope im just fiiiiiiine .ALT: a close up of a woman 's face with the words im not nervous at all nope im just fiiiiiiine . 020
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 27/03/2026Channeling good vibes via my coffee mug❤️ #revpitwaiting #goodvibesonly 0281
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 26/03/2026My favorite part was seeing her desk! And getting a feel of her life there. They had a letter on display that her father had sent out on her behalf to a publisher which was “returned by post “- regency era of a rejection. I am just so impressed with her tenacity to pursue her dream! 020
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 26/03/2026I shall DM you pics lol! Maybe we need to plan going to a ball together 😍 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 26/03/2026I am obsessed with Jane Austen! Have read a bunch of her biographies, geeked out at her house in Chawton and have a whole shelf of not only her books but several dedicated to her! 😍 220
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 25/03/2026I have done this in a prior manuscript and OMG, the chaos! Have learned since then to do the (painful but necessary) individual Find and Replace. 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 21/03/2026It’s got such a fantastic speculative angle that the voices are unique. I got derailed a bit in my reading with life and had to hit pause but I loved what I’ve read so far! 010
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 21/03/2026@laurabethwrites.bsky.social and @natashahanova.bsky.social Another dual pov spec romance I am currently reading was recommended by Annabel Monaghan ( whose writing I adore)- it’s a called You& Me and You & Me and You & Me www.goodreads.com/book/show/23... Written by a husband-wife duo!goodreads.comYou & Me and You & Me and You & MeAdam and Jules have been married for twenty-five years … 220
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 21/03/2026I loved The Impossible Us! The Husbands is so incredible too, and it’s being adapted too! 😍 011
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 19/03/2026Thank you for this! I had been brutal with cutting my “that”s , then found myself adding some back recently when I thought they helped with a smoother sentence flow. I was probably overthinking at least a few of them! 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 18/03/2026I love this question! I have this situation for a different MS ( not my RevPit submission)! 011
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 14/03/2026media.tenor.coma baby is covering his face with his hand and making a shhh gesture .ALT: a baby is covering his face with his hand and making a shhh gesture . 020
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 14/03/2026I love this! My two MCs are awkward too, and so scared of signaling the wrong thing and ignoring the obvious tension between them lol! 130
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 14/03/2026My favorite elements in my contemporary romance are forced proximity and the the slow, delicious burn that comes from it, while being grounded in what I hope is a realistic, believable setting and a fun play on indie music! 110
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 14/03/2026You know how much I love this origin story 😍 020
sakshibwrites.bsky.social @sakshibwrites.bsky.social · 14/03/2026It was definitely the shower for me. What is it with the shower and its ability to magically inspire story ideas?!! It’s making me think of “the attic” in The Husbands! 010
