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SFF writer. He/Him. RVA. 🇵🇸 🏳️‍🌈 🏳️‍⚧️ | 🚫 AI 📷 by makowwka Blog: pjheck.com ☀️ THE EVERWINTER KING | fantasy, adult, querying now!

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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Look, Vanness, I came to your website with a very specific purpose in mind
A screenshot of an order confirmation page with seven different red ink selections.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
Someone is certainly beloved alright 👀
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
A necromancer priest and an undead wraith team up to solve a murder during a royal summit, except the wraith is the killer, and each new clue warns the priest this might be one mystery better left unsolved. For the last day of #DVParty, I’m sharing part of my updated guide for BONE KING’S BLUFF!
The background is an image of a castle atop a forested hill. The sky is gray and dreary. The overall mood is bleak. 

The text reads
"An agent’s guide to Bone King’s Bluff
Adult fantasy MM romance, 85k
Part locked-castle mystery.
Part Robin Hood-style revenge plot.”Character art of the main character, Nevell. Nevell is a white man with dark curly hair. He is looking to the right. He wears a green cloak over white priest robes. In the second image, he has a white fox mask covering most of his face. The text says "Nevell of Farlay. Necromancer. Hates the rich. Ghost kisser. Plague priest. Trans guy."
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 28/09/2026
It’s only kind of Mal’s fault the world is stuck in an endless winter. Don’t worry, he’s DEFINITELY going to internalize all that guilt. #DVParty day four, your story as a meme! Mal’s life is one big joke, really. Poor guy.
A meme board featuring character art. The character is a man with light brown skin, dark brown hair, and a golden sun for his left eye. He's wearing a simple jerkin over a white shirt.
The memes are in tweet/tumblr format and read:
"mother thinks i'm unfit to reign lol"
"what do you mean 'what's wrong with him?' he's mentally ill. he's catholic. he's even gay"
"Why don't we let the guy whose very plan could be reasonably construed as an abstract suicide attempt take a crack at it"
"Oh sure let's blame the guy whose fault it is"
"anyone else feel like god is just toying with u however he pleases. he thinks he's so funny. well i'm about to be hilarious"
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 27/09/2026
Local man goes to the river after a terrible storm and almost drowns in mud. "He's totally fine," says the voice of god in his head. "Don't give into his dramatics." Opening lines for THE EVERWINTER KING! #DVParty
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 26/09/2026
Meet Mal! He's a gruff fisherman who lives in the far north and pops into town periodically to deliver trout. Don't worry, he doesn't live alone. He shares his head with his oldest friend, the sun god, who comments on everything Mal does. Until he disappears. What's a guy to do then? #DVParty
A drawing of a bearded man facing to the left with his back to the viewer. He is wearing a white blouse with a green jerkin and tattered brown pants and boots. He has light brown skin and brown curly hair. He's carrying a fishing rod. Behind him is a simplified yellow sun.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING, an adult fantasy following a former holy king coming home to search for his missing sun god. It's basically the Lion King if Simba was a sad, gay fisherman. ☀️🍋 #DVParty DRAGON AGE II x THE RAVEN SCHOLAR ft a second chance MM romance, divine trials, found family, and a trans LI.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 16/08/2026
Didn’t even have time to get this speedwell in the ground before this little guy came by…
An unplanted pot of speedwell in bloom with a monarch butterfly on it. The speedwell is surrounded by irises. A close up of the butterfly.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 29/07/2026
The board convinced me I should put tomatoes on every cheeseboard. 🍅 Any guesses what the theme was?
A charcuterie board with pimento cheese dip, tomatoes, watermelon spheres, cherries, floral crackers, and lemon cupcakes in addition to the usual meats and cheeses. It’s arranged on a circular serving board.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 24/07/2026
BONE KING'S BLUFF After being accused of inviting the plague into a royal summit, a necromancer priest has to work with his only alibi, a cagey nobleman, to clear his name. 🦴 Death magic 🏰 Locked-castle mystery 🕯️ Medieval fantasy 🏹 Robin Hood trope 🏳️‍🌈 MM romance #QuestPit #W #A #F #LGBT
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 24/07/2026
ROBIN HOOD, but with DEATH MAGIC After being accused of inviting the plague into a royal summit, a necromancer priest has to work with his only alibi, a cagey nobleman, to clear his name. BONE KING'S BLUFF, coming to betas soon, and querying early 2027! #QuestPit #W #A #F #LGBT
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 24/07/2026
Desperate to find his missing sun god, a former holy king returns home to compete in trials meant to bring his god back and stop the onslaught of an endless winter. THE EVERWINTER KING is an adult fantasy standalone. #QuestPit #A #F #Q #LGBT #agentsguide
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 24/07/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING Desperate to find his missing sun god, a former holy king returns home to compete in trials meant to bring his god back and stop the onslaught of an endless winter. 🏳️‍🌈 Queer norm world ☀️ Light-based magic 🏳️‍⚧️ Trans love interest 👑 Hidden royalty #QuestPit #Q #A #F #LGBT
Title page for an agent's guide to THE EVERWINTER KING. The title is placed over a moodboard featuring a Mediterranean inspired setting and royalty imagery. In addition to the title the page reads "Adult Fantasy Standalone. Queer normative world. MM romance subplot. 99,000 words."
THE EVERWINTER KING's pitch.

PITCH
A former holy king does the one thing he swore he’d never do in search of his missing god. He goes home.

Malachi was born with God’s voice in his head. When God vanishes in the midst of a decade-long winter, Mal breaks the oath he made to himself and returns to the home he abandoned—the city where he was raised to be king. There, he’s marked to compete in trials meant to select God’s new emissary. His replacement.

After succeeding in the first trial, Mal demands entry to the royal temple, where he learns the skies are empty. God has stopped speaking to his priests and Mal alike. With no other avenue for answers, Mal must win the competition for God’s favor and assume the throne he never wanted, or risk losing his oldest friend for good and damning the world to a worsening everwinter.An excerpt from THE EVERWINTER KING. Next to the excerpt is character art of the main character. He has light bright skin, dark brown hair, facial hair, and a simple jerkin over white shirt. His eye is glowing like the sun.

EXCERPT STARTS BELOW

“My head hurts,” Malachi mumbled into his drink.

“They say King Ridaris’ eye glowed like this.”

Did they? Malachi shuffled through his memories for any mention of that from his mothers, or the history books, and found nothing.

“I think it means God knows who you are.” Sen lowered her voice, eyes shifting toward the surrounding priests. Kinder to pretend she did it out of concern for his headache. “You need to be careful.”

“Aye.”

“It hasn’t stopped glowing. Everyone else’s did.”

He raised a hand to cover his eye, pausing to marvel at the light pouring over his fingers and palm. It spilled into every crack, crevice, and scar his hand had to offer, like liquid pooled against his skin. Malachi closed his fist around the cold light and pressed it to his face. “Hurts.”

“Close your eyes,” Samara offered. “Rest. We’ll handle it from here.”

For once, he did just that.A page listing comp titles.

Comp titles for THE EVERWINTER KING include: "The Raven Scholar" by Antonia Hodgson, "The Raven Tower" by Ann Leckie, "WITCH KING" by Martha Wells, and "The Red Winter" by Cameron Sullivan.

Similarities include: godly shenanigans, political trials, queer-norm worlds, queer male leads, messy homecomings, and a second chance subplot.

Bonus comp! Dragon Age 2.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 13/07/2026
PROJECT BONES After being accused of inviting the plague into a royal summit, a necromancer priest has to work with his only alibi, a cagey nobleman, to clear his name. 🦴 Death magic 🏰 Locked-castle mystery 🕯️ Medieval fantasy 🏹 Robin Hood trope 🏳️‍🌈 MM romance #BluePit #📖 #W #A #F #LGBT #DIS
A moodboard containing imagery of ghosts, bones, foxes, the night sky, and a palace. The title says "PROJECT BONES." 
PITCH

Necromancer Nevell of Farlay cannot die, not since surviving the plague as a youth. Now he works as a priest to the god-king, summoned to protect His Majesty during the plague season. But when a mysterious spirit is sighted and nobleman is found dead, Nevell’s reputation gets called into question. His only alibi is the cagey, annoyingly handsome Lord Hargrave, whose reluctance to help Nevell clear his name threatens Nevell’s clergy rank—the only thing protecting his home from the horrors of the plague.
EXCERPT

“Have you no sense?” Nevell stepped between the man and the dying girl’s bed. His magic persisted, but the man carried a lantern that brought too much light into the room, threatening to wash out the spell. “A priest is at work. You should not be here.”

The man paid him no mind, instead peering over Nevell’s shoulder. “I’ve been called senseless before,” he said, speaking with the same grace his attire implied. “Is she…?”

“Dead? Nearly. The spirits are about her. You may have let them out.” 

“Her mother has tended to her since this morn.” The man still didn’t look at Nevell. “The spirits will have fled already, if they intended to.”

“Spirits often lack intention.”

“You would know best.” The man took a few steps toward the bed, only stopping when Nevell grabbed his shoulder. He tried to shrug out of the grip, but Nevell held fast. “Father, we can save her—”

“Nay,” Nevell said. “She’s gone.”
INSPIRATION

This image contains inspirations for this WIP, including:

A serious of T. Kingfisher books ("A Sorceress Comes to Call," "Nettle & Bone," and "Hemlock & Silver) labeled "T. KIngfisher's horror-fantasy blend.

A picture of Robin Hood from Disney's Robin Hood, labeled as such.

An image of a necromancer with skeletons from Bioware 4 labeled as "The Country Nevarra from Dragon Age 4."

"The Tainted Cup" by Robert Jackson Bennett, "The Gentleman and his Vowsmith" by Rebecca Ide, and "Green & Deadly Things" by Jenn Lyons, all labeled as "potential comps."
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 13/07/2026
MAL is the former holy king. AGAPIOS is the sun god who lives in his head. When Agapios vanishes, Mal returns to the home he abandoned to find him before his disappearance rids the world of its chance to break free from an endless winter. CH.1 of THE EVERWINTER KING #BluePit #📖 #Q #A #F #LGBT #DIS
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 13/07/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING is an adult fantasy standalone. It's a story of homecoming, second chances, and not succumbing to the voice in your head that says you aren’t good enough. #BluePit #📖 #A #F #Q #LGBT #DIS #OV Credit to caracastro on Insta for the format!
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 13/07/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING Desperate to find his missing sun god, a former holy king returns home to compete in trials meant to bring his god back, and stop the onslaught of an endless winter. 🏳️‍🌈 Queer norm world ☀️ Light-based magic 🏳️‍⚧️ Trans love interest 👑 Hidden royalty #BluePit #📖 #Q #A #F #LGBT #DIS
Title page for an agent's guide to THE EVERWINTER KING. The title is placed over a moodboard featuring a Mediterranean inspired setting and royalty imagery. In addition to the title the page reads "Adult Fantasy Standalone. Queer normative world. MM romance subplot. 99,000 words."THE EVERWINTER KING's pitch.

PITCH
A former holy king does the one thing he swore he’d never do in search of his missing god. He goes home.

Malachi was born with God’s voice in his head. When God vanishes in the midst of a decade-long winter, Mal breaks the oath he made to himself and returns to the home he abandoned—the city where he was raised to be king. There, he’s marked to compete in trials meant to select God’s new emissary. His replacement.

After succeeding in the first trial, Mal demands entry to the royal temple, where he learns the skies are empty. God has stopped speaking to his priests and Mal alike. With no other avenue for answers, Mal must win the competition for God’s favor and assume the throne he never wanted, or risk losing his oldest friend for good and damning the world to a worsening everwinter.An excerpt from THE EVERWINTER KING. Next to the excerpt is character art of the main character. He has light bright skin, dark brown hair, facial hair, and a simple jerkin over white shirt. His eye is glowing like the sun.

EXCERPT STARTS BELOW

“My head hurts,” Malachi mumbled into his drink.

“They say King Ridaris’ eye glowed like this.”

Did they? Malachi shuffled through his memories for any mention of that from his mothers, or the history books, and found nothing.

“I think it means God knows who you are.” Sen lowered her voice, eyes shifting toward the surrounding priests. Kinder to pretend she did it out of concern for his headache. “You need to be careful.”

“Aye.”

“It hasn’t stopped glowing. Everyone else’s did.”

He raised a hand to cover his eye, pausing to marvel at the light pouring over his fingers and palm. It spilled into every crack, crevice, and scar his hand had to offer, like liquid pooled against his skin. Malachi closed his fist around the cold light and pressed it to his face. “Hurts.”

“Close your eyes,” Samara offered. “Rest. We’ll handle it from here.”

For once, he did just that.A page listing comp titles.

Comp titles for THE EVERWINTER KING include: "The Raven Scholar" by Antonia Hodgson, "The Raven Tower" by Ann Leckie, "WITCH KING" by Martha Wells, and "The Red Winter" by Cameron Sullivan.

Similarities include: godly shenanigans, political trials, queer-norm worlds, queer male leads, messy homecomings, and a second chance subplot.

Bonus comp! Dragon Age 2.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 10/07/2026
The first art I ever commissioned of my MC Mal is from princehowl on Vgen! Love his work. My whole writing group is obsessed with commissioning him. On the right is the first moodboard I ever made for the manuscript, from before I finished the first draft. 🥰 #BluePitHype
A drawing of a bearded man facing to the left with his back to the viewer. He is wearing a white blouse with a green jerkin and tattered brown pants and boots. He has light brown skin and brown curly hair. He's carrying a fishing rod. Behind him is a simplified yellow sun.A moodboard with dark images containing pops of sunlight, like sun through the trees and people glowing with sunlight. Also contains images of crowns, lighthouses on choppy waters, and red poppy flowers on the coast. Contains one quote that reads "I want a god who stands mute with me. A long, dull night on a hill, very still, without reaching."
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 01/07/2026
More than a decade after faking his death, former holy king Malachi returns to the capital he fled seeking the missing sun god. But coming home means facing the people he left behind, including a fiancé, Atreus, who spent the last twelve years seeing Malachi's ghost. #QueerPit #A #F #amquerying
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 01/07/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING Adult Fantasy Standalone 💛 Grumpy/Sunshine, platonic 💕 Second Chance MM romance ☀️ Light-based magic 🏳️‍⚧️ Trans love interest 🏅 Tournaments & Trials 💙 Mental health rep 👑 Hidden royalty 🏳️‍🌈 Queer normative world 🍋 Mediterranean inspired setting #QueerPit #A #F #amquerying
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 01/07/2026
MALACHI is a former holy king. AGAPIOS is the sun god who lives in his head. When Agapios vanishes, Mal returns to the home he abandoned to find him before his disappearance rids the world of its chance to break free from an endless winter. CH. 1 of THE EVERWINTER KING #QueerPit #A #F #amquerying
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 01/07/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING Desperate to find his missing sun god, a former holy king returns home to compete in trials meant to bring the god back, and stop the onslaught of an endless winter. 🏳️‍🌈 Queer norm world ☀️ Light-based magic 🏳️‍⚧️ Trans love interest 👑 Hidden royalty #QueerPit #F #A #amquerying
Title page for an agent's guide to THE EVERWINTER KING. The title is placed over a moodboard featuring a Mediterranean inspired setting and royalty imagery. In addition to the title the page reads "Adult Fantasy Standalone. Queer normative world. MM romance subplot. 99,000 words."THE EVERWINTER KING's pitch.

PITCH
A former holy king does the one thing he swore he’d never do in search of his missing god. He goes home.

Malachi was born with God’s voice in his head. When God vanishes in the midst of a decade-long winter, Mal breaks the oath he made to himself and returns to the home he abandoned—the city where he was raised to be king. There, he’s marked to compete in trials meant to select God’s new emissary. His replacement.

After succeeding in the first trial, Mal demands entry to the royal temple, where he learns the skies are empty. God has stopped speaking to his priests and Mal alike. With no other avenue for answers, Mal must win the competition for God’s favor and assume the throne he never wanted, or risk losing his oldest friend for good and damning the world to a worsening everwinter.An excerpt from THE EVERWINTER KING. Next to the excerpt is character art of the main character. He has light bright skin, dark brown hair, facial hair, and a simple jerkin over white shirt. His eye is glowing like the sun.

EXCERPT STARTS BELOW

“My head hurts,” Malachi mumbled into his drink.

“They say King Ridaris’ eye glowed like this.”

Did they? Malachi shuffled through his memories for any mention of that from his mothers, or the history books, and found nothing.

“I think it means God knows who you are.” Sen lowered her voice, eyes shifting toward the surrounding priests. Kinder to pretend she did it out of concern for his headache. “You need to be careful.”

“Aye.”

“It hasn’t stopped glowing. Everyone else’s did.”

He raised a hand to cover his eye, pausing to marvel at the light pouring over his fingers and palm. It spilled into every crack, crevice, and scar his hand had to offer, like liquid pooled against his skin. Malachi closed his fist around the cold light and pressed it to his face. “Hurts.”

“Close your eyes,” Samara offered. “Rest. We’ll handle it from here.”

For once, he did just that.A page listing comp titles.

Comp titles for THE EVERWINTER KING include: "The Raven Scholar" by Antonia Hodgson, "The Raven Tower" by Ann Leckie, "WITCH KING" by Martha Wells, and "The Red Winter" by Cameron Sullivan.

Similarities include: godly shenanigans, political trials, queer-norm worlds, queer male leads, messy homecomings, and a second chance subplot.

Bonus comp! Dragon Age 2.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 25/06/2026
Picture The Lion King, except Simba is a depressed gay fisherman with the sun god living in his head. That’s THE EVERWINTER KING. #UnhingedPit #Q #A #F #LGBT
A meme board featuring character art. The character is a man with light brown skin, dark brown hair, and a golden sun for his left eye. He’s wearing a simple jerkin over a white shirt. 

The memes are in tweet/tumblr format and read:
“mother thinks i’m unfit to reign lol”
“what do you mean ‘what’s wrong with him?’ he’s mentally ill. he’s catholic. he’s even gay”
“Why don’t we let the guy whose very plan could be reasonably construed as an abstract suicide attempt take a crack at it”
“Oh sure let’s blame the guy whose fault it is”
“anyone else feel like god is just toying with u however he pleases. he thinks he’s so funny. well i’m about to be hilarious”
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 25/06/2026
Happy make a terrible comic day! #makeaterriblecomicday2026
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 02/06/2026
Happy Pride, y'all! Read queer books all year round, but there's no better month to queer up your TBRs. 🏳️‍🌈 Here are some of my favs from recent years.
Nine queer book suggestions on a pride flag background. The books include: "Brighter than Scale, Swifter than Flame" by Neon Yang, "You Made a Fool of Death with Your Beauty" by Akwaeke Emezi, "She Who Became the Sun" by Shelley Parker-Chan, "The Bachelor's Valet" by Arden Powell, "The Spear Cuts Through Water" by Simon Jimenez, "The Wicked Bargain" by Gabe Cole Novoa, "The Prospects" by KT Hoffman, "Star Crossed" by KC de la Rosa, and "Off Course" by AM de la Rosa.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 23/05/2026
PROJECT CLOUDCORE After accidentally crashing into the floating city's arcane engine, a hotshot racer teams up with a disgraced skyship captain to harvest a new engine core from a rare cloud before their city falls from the sky. #WIPPit #A #F #SF #SFF #LGBT
PROJECT CLOUDCORE
Adult Sci-Fantasy Duology

The title is over a moodboard depicting colorful skies, clouds, and airships.PITCH

     All Devon ever wanted was to fly in the grand prix. But when a malfuction makes him crash into the arcane cloud core keeping the city afloat, Devon loses everything: the race, his celebrity status, and his home. Shunned by reputable skyship captains, Devon turns to his former boss, the once-proud, now drunk, Captain Hattie Bennett. His proposal is simple: she’ll lend him her crew to harvest a new cloud core and restore the city (and his reputation), and he’ll help her break into the sky pirate fortress where her wife was last seen alive—the same fortress he escaped as a child.VIBES

A moodboard showing images of colorful sky and clouds, airships of all sizes, floating cities, and assorted creatures flying through the sky.INSPIRATION

"Vibes" include "Treasure Planet," "Cowboy Bebop," "Castle in the Sky," "Star Wars," and Formula 1 racing.

Potential comps include "The Surviving Sky" by Kritika H. Kao, "Persephone Station" by Stina Leicht, and "The Adventures of Amina Al-Sirafi" by Shannon Chakraborty.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 23/05/2026
THE MANOR AT ABINGDON COVE. A manor keeper dives into a magical world trapped behind his estate's oil paintings in search of the last true magician, before a land-hungry lord can steal the estate. 🌊 Seaside setting 🏛️ Early 1900s-inspired era 🏳️‍🌈 Queer norm world, MM romance #WIPPIt #A #F #R #LGBT
"THE MANOR AT ABINGDON COVE" displayed over a letter graphic with images of the ocean and a portrait galley behind it.PITCH

     As the manor keeper of Abingdon Cove, Étienne knows the moon and all her names, the best way to restore an oil painting, and what year every bottle of wine in the manor was purchased. His efforts keep the estate intact until its owner, the last true magician, can return. When a local land-hungry lord tries to snatch the estate from the magician’s ownership, Étienne dives into a world of wonder trapped behind the manor’s oil paintings in search of the magician to bring him, and magic, back to the cove. A moodboard depicting ocean imagery, books, and seaside estates. The moodboard is framed in an old picture frame.INSPIRATION
"Howl's Moving Castle," "Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell," and "Downton Abbey" as historical and magical vibes.

Witch Hat Atelier aesthetics with a picture from the manga showing the main character discovering magic.

Potential comps include "The Everlasting" by Alix E Harrow, "The Isle on the Silver Sea" by Tasha Suri, and "Emily Wilde's Encyclopedia of Faeries" by Heather Fawcett.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 23/05/2026
PROJECT BONES After being accused of inviting the plague into a royal summit, a necromancer priest has to work with his only alibi, a cagey nobleman, to clear his name. 🦴 Death magic 🏰 Locked-castle mystery 🕯️ Medieval fantasy 🏹 Robin Hood trope 🏳️‍🌈 MM romance Status: drafting! #WIPPit #A #F #LGBT
A moodboard containing imagery of ghosts, bones, foxes, the night sky, and a palace. The title says "PROJECT BONES." PITCH

Necromancer Nevell of Farlay cannot die, not since surviving the plague as a youth. Now he works as a priest to the god-king, summoned to protect His Majesty during the plague season. But when a mysterious spirit is sighted and nobleman is found dead, Nevell’s reputation gets called into question. His only alibi is the cagey, annoyingly handsome Lord Margrave, whose reluctance to help Nevell clear his name threatens Nevell’s clergy rank—the only thing protecting his home from the horrors of the plague.EXCERPT

“Have you no sense?” Nevell stepped between the man and the dying girl’s bed. His magic persisted, but the man carried a lantern that brought too much light into the room, threatening to wash out the spell. “A priest is at work. You should not be here.”

The man paid him no mind, instead peering over Nevell’s shoulder. “I’ve been called senseless before,” he said, speaking with the same grace his attire implied. “Is she…?”

“Dead? Nearly. The spirits are about her. You may have let them out.” 

“Her mother has tended to her since this morn.” The man still didn’t look at Nevell. “The spirits will have fled already, if they intended to.”

“Spirits often lack intention.”

“You would know best.” The man took a few steps toward the bed, only stopping when Nevell grabbed his shoulder. He tried to shrug out of the grip, but Nevell held fast. “Father, we can save her—”

“Nay,” Nevell said. “She’s gone.”INSPIRATION

This image contains inspirations for this WIP, including:

A serious of T. Kingfisher books ("A Sorceress Comes to Call," "Nettle & Bone," and "Hemlock & Silver) labeled "T. KIngfisher's horror-fantasy blend.

A picture of Robin Hood from Disney's Robin Hood, labeled as such.

An image of a necromancer with skeletons from Bioware 4 labeled as "The Country Nevarra from Dragon Age 4."

"The Tainted Cup" by Robert Jackson Bennett, "The Gentleman and his Vowsmith" by Rebecca Ide, and "Green & Deadly Things" by Jenn Lyons, all labeled as "potential comps."
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 20/05/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING Desperate to find his missing sun god, a former holy king returns home to compete in trials meant to bring the god back, and stop the onslaught of an endless winter. 🏳️‍🌈 Queer norm world ☀️ Light-based magic 🏳️‍⚧️ Trans love interest 👑 Hidden royalty #amquerying #agentsguide
Title page for an agent's guide to THE EVERWINTER KING. The title is placed over a moodboard featuring a Mediterranean inspired setting and royalty imagery. In addition to the title the page reads "Adult Fantasy Standalone. Queer normative world. MM romance subplot. 98,000 words."THE EVERWINTER KING's pitch.

PITCH
A former holy king does the one thing he swore he’d never do in search of his missing god. He goes home.

Malachi was born with God’s voice in his head. When God vanishes in the midst of a decade-long winter, Mal breaks the oath he made to himself and returns to the home he abandoned—the city where he was raised to be king. There, he’s marked to compete in trials meant to select God’s new emissary. His replacement.

After succeeding in the first trial, Mal demands entry to the royal temple, where he learns the skies are empty. God has stopped speaking to his priests and Mal alike. With no other avenue for answers, Mal must win the competition for God’s favor and assume the throne he never wanted, or risk losing his oldest friend for good and damning the world to a worsening everwinter.An excerpt from THE EVERWINTER KING. Next to the excerpt is character art of the main character. He has light bright skin, dark brown hair, facial hair, and a simple jerkin over white shirt. His eye is glowing like the sun.

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“My head hurts,” Malachi mumbled into his drink.

“They say King Ridaris’ eye glowed like this.”

Did they? Malachi shuffled through his memories for any mention of that from his mothers, or the history books, and found nothing.

“I think it means God knows who you are.” Sen lowered her voice, eyes shifting toward the surrounding priests. Kinder to pretend she did it out of concern for his headache. “You need to be careful.”

“Aye.”

“It hasn’t stopped glowing. Everyone else’s did.”

He raised a hand to cover his eye, pausing to marvel at the light pouring over his fingers and palm. It spilled into every crack, crevice, and scar his hand had to offer, like liquid pooled against his skin. Malachi closed his fist around the cold light and pressed it to his face. “Hurts.”

“Close your eyes,” Samara offered. “Rest. We’ll handle it from here.”

For once, he did just that.
A page listing comp titles.

Comp titles for THE EVERWINTER KING include: "The Raven Scholar" by Antonia Hodgson, "The Raven Tower" by Ann Leckie, "WITCH KING" by Martha Wells, and "The Red Winter" by Cameron Sullivan.

Similarities include: godly shenanigans, political trials, queer-norm worlds, queer male leads, messy homecomings, and a second chance subplot.

Bonus comp! Dragon Age 2.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 01/05/2026
Two people now have pointed out this art of my MC must be an easter egg without having read the book...and they're right 🤫 Not that the big glowing eye is subtle or anything 😂 #CampRevPit #ScavengerHunt #CRPDirewolves
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 30/04/2026
THE MANOR AT ABINGDON COVE Downton Abbey x Howl's Moving Castle Adult MM Historical Fantasy Romance 🌊 Seaside setting 🏛️ Early 1900s-inspired era 🏳️‍🌈 Queer norm world 📚 Bookworm MC 🪞 Trapped on opposite sides of a mirror ✨ Let's bring magic back 🏡 Cozy nosy neighbors #QuestPit #W #A #RF #LGBTQ
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 29/04/2026
MALACHI is a former holy king who abandoned the throne after an attempt on his life. AGAPIOS is the sun god who lives in his head. Agapios' sudden disappearance drives Mal to do the unexpected—go home. The opening of THE EVERWINTER KING, plus some songs from Mal's playlist. #QuestPit #A #F #Q
The title and logline for THE EVERWINTER KING over a moodboard featuring a Mediterranean inspired setting and royalty imagery.

Logline: Desperate to find his oldest friend, the missing sun god, a former holy king returns to the home he abandoned and the people he betrayed to reunite with his god and prevent an endless winter.

Adult fantasy standalone, 95k.The opening of the book. This slide features art of the main character, Malachi, Mal has light brown skin, curly brown hair, and a simple attire of a jerkin over a white shirt. His left eye is covered with a glowing sun.

Opening: 

If Malachi had to sacrifice his boots to make it to the markets, he would. His damp footsteps echoed through the storm-mauled forest, each step muddier than the last. Against his back, the weight of freshly caught trout carried him onward, forcing him to ignore the worn path leading to his cabin. The markets called, and the sun already sat too high in the sky.

“Do not blame me for your delay.”

Malachi yanked his boot, freeing it from the mud before responding to the voice of God. /I don’t. It’s my fault./The opening, continued. This slide has different art of the main character, Malachi, on the left. Mal has light brown skin, brown curly hair, and a simple outfit of a jerkin over a white shirt and brown pants. He is carrying a fishing rod.

Opening (continued)

For the last few days, he’d been able to fish before noon. His crab traps didn’t have to be placed so far upriver. More importantly, the lumber he set out weeks ago finally had a chance of drying. Soon he could fix the damned roof and have a full belly at night. Nothing like the luxury of his youth, but it felt luxurious to have all he needed: an almost warm sun, ample trout in his bag, a sharp blade to filet them, and boots that could get him to town with limited protest. If he earned enough today, he’d pay the cobbler a visit. 

“You won’t earn enough to purchase my favors if you’re late, let alone the cobbler," said God.

He didn’t react except to pick up his pace till he reached paved roads. The ever-present thrum against his skin dulled as the clouds swallowed the sun.  He shouldered his way between the familiar gate guards, both unbothered as he passed.A list of six songs labeled "Mal's Music." The songs are on a graphic that looks like an audio player.

The songs are:

The View Between Villages by Noah Kahan
The Old Religion by Florence + The Machine
Through Heaven's Eyes from the Prince of Egypt OST
Fear and Trembling by Gang of Youths
I'll Believe in Anything by Wolf Parade
Better in the Morning by Birdtalker
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 29/04/2026
Not quite a plot twist, but moodboards for the MC 10 years before the book vs. during the book itself! #CampRevPit #MoodboardTwist #CRPDirewolves
A moodboard depicting a Mediterranean-inspired fantasy world with poppies, cliff side cities overlooking the ocean, a young queer couple, and imagery around royalty. A moodboard with dark images containing pops of sunlight, like sun through the trees and people glowing with sunlight. Also contains royal imagery.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 29/04/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING Adult Fantasy Standalone 💛 Grumpy/Sunshine, platonic 💕 Second Chance MM romance ☀️ Light-based magic 🏳️‍⚧️ Trans love interest 🏅 Tournaments & Trials 💙 Mental health rep 👑 Hidden royalty 🏳️‍🌈 Queer normative world 🍋 Mediterranean inspired setting #QuestPit #Q #A #F #LGBT
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 29/04/2026
THE EVERWINTER KING Querying Soon! Desperate to find his oldest friend, the missing sun god, a former holy king returns to the home he abandoned and the people he betrayed to reunite with his god and prevent an endless winter. #QuestPit #Q #A #F #AgentsGuide
Title page for an agent's guide to THE EVERWINTER KING. The title is placed over a moodboard featuring a Mediterranean inspired setting and royalty imagery. In addition to the title the page reads "Adult Fantasy Standalone. Queer normative world. MM romance subplot. 95,000 words."
THE EVERWINTER KING's pitch.

PITCH
A former holy king does the one thing he swore he’d never do in search of his missing god. He goes home.

Malachi was born with God’s voice in his head. When God vanishes in the midst of a decade-long winter, Mal breaks the oath he made to himself and returns to the home he abandoned—the city where he was raised to be king. There, he’s marked to compete in trials meant to select God’s new emissary. His replacement.

After succeeding in the first trial, Mal demands entry to the royal temple, where he learns the skies are empty. God has stopped speaking to his priests and Mal alike. With no other avenue for answers, Mal must win the competition for God’s favor and assume the throne he never wanted, or risk losing his oldest friend for good and damning the world to a worsening everwinter.An excerpt from THE EVERWINTER KING.

“My head hurts,” Malachi mumbled into his drink.

“They say King Ridaris’ eye glowed like this.”

Did they? Malachi shuffled through his memories for any mention of that from his mothers, or the history books, and found nothing.

“I think it means God knows who you are.” Sen lowered her voice, eyes shifting toward the surrounding priests. Kinder to pretend she did it out of concern for his headache. “You need to be careful.”

“Aye.”

“It hasn’t stopped glowing. Everyone else’s did.”

He raised a hand to cover his eye, pausing to marvel at the light pouring over his fingers and palm. It spilled into every crack, crevice, and scar his hand had to offer, like liquid pooled against his skin. Malachi closed his fist around the cold light and pressed it to his face. “Hurts.”

“Close your eyes,” Samara offered. “Rest. We’ll handle it from here.”

For once, he did just that.A page listing comp titles.

Comp titles for THE EVERWINTER KING include: "The Raven Scholar" by Antonia Hodgson, "The Raven Tower" by Ann Leckie, "WITCH KING" by Martha Wells, and "The Red Winter" by Cameron Sullivan.

Similarities include: godly shenanigans, political trials, queer-norm worlds, queer male leads, messy homecomings, and a second chance subplot.

Bonus comp! Dragon Age 2.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 27/04/2026
Had a busy weekend of good food and now I’m back to business. 🫡 Let’s get these edits done!
A plate of grilled octopus on beans in tomato sauce topped with greens. A bottle of white wine with a glass next to it. The bottle is from Terenzuola winery in Italy’s Cinque Terre region. A bottle of orange wine in front of a geometric painting of horses.A plate of roast pork in a cranberry sauce on a bed of beans and asparagus.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 24/04/2026
From chapter 15, a conversation between the MC and his sun god. Their dialogue together is some of my favorite in the book. #CampRevPit #DialogueDrop #CRPDirewolves
“You built houses?”

“Repaired houses.” Malachi thoughtfully chewed an olive. The pit hit the glass bowl next to him with a soft clink. “In the northwest.”

“Why not give them the money to do it themselves?”

Malachi shook his head, knowing Agapios would see. “Felt good to work.”

“Your hands are not meant for that work, Kyliares.”

“My hands are calloused and torn.” Another olive, another clink. “They can do any work now. I’m not sure luxury will ever suit me again.”

THE EVERWINTER KING | Ch 15 | @pjwrites


The snippet is shared on a beige square. The background of the image is a moodboard with images of a city on the coast, people glowing with light magic, a skull wearing a crown, a lighthouse, and lemons in water.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 22/04/2026
"I'm just a fisherman." #CampRevPit #OneLineMC #CRPDirewolves
"I'm just a fisherman," Malachi said, and Samara's shoulders fell like they often did when he doubled down. She expected more of him. Everyone always expected more of him.

THE EVERWINTER KING | Ch 1 | @pjwrites


The snippet is shared on a beige square. The background of the image is a moodboard with images of a city on the coast, people glowing with light magic, a skull wearing a crown, a lighthouse, and lemons in water.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 21/04/2026
Some recent commissions of my MC, Mal, from THE EVERWINTER KING. By Kuro in my writing group and princehowl on Vgen!
A drawing of a bearded man with his arms crossed. He has light brown skin and brown curly hair. He is wearing an off white blouse with a brown jerkin and matching pants. His eyes are light green. Behind him is a close up of his portrait. He has a grumpy expression. In the close up, one eye is bright gold.A drawing of a bearded man facing to the left with his back to the viewer. He is wearing a white blouse with a green jerkin and tattered brown pants and boots. He has light brown skin and brown curly hair. He's carrying a fishing rod. Behind him is a simplified yellow sun.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 20/04/2026
Howdy #CRPDirewolves! I'm PJ, a queer SFF writer in VA. My current WIP is THE EVERWINTER KING, an adult fantasy standalone about a former holy king seeking his old friend, the sun god, before losing him to an endless winter. Ft. found family, a second chance MM subplot, and trials. #CampKickoff
A moodboard featuring images of a Mediterranean inspired fantasy world with winter-y elements. The board also depicts images relating to light and royalty, such as crowns and hands cupping sunlight. The title, “The Everwinter King,” is placed in the center.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 14/04/2026
Woke up to my favorite irises opening 🥰
A patch of dark pink irises in a garden bed
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 12/04/2026
Some recent garden photos. Our irises started opening!! We have to plant three times as many tulips this fall to fill out our tulip bed.
A row of dark pink and white tulips in a garden bed.A wide shot of purple/blue irises in a garden bed.A close up of purple/blue irises in a garden bed.Three frilly pink tulips in a garden bed.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 10/04/2026
I love reading essay collections & non fiction by poets to improve my craft. The works aren't always about writing, but there's so much to learn from how they use language. Here are three of my favorites and one upcoming read by Ann Pachett! #RevPitWaiting
The book cover of "They Can't Kill Us Until They Kill Us: Essays" by Hanif Abdurraqib. The cover is a wolf wearing a red tracksuit with a gold chain standing in front of a blue background.The cover of "Braiding Sweetgrass: Indigenous Wisdom, Scientific Knowledge, and the Teachings of Plants" by Robin Wall Kimmerer. The cover has a thick band of braided sweetgrass over a beige background.The cover of "How the Word is Passed: A Reckoning with the History of Slavery Across America" by Clint Smith. The cover features the book's title in bold black font over a beige background.The cover of "These Precious Days: Essays" by Ann Patchett. The cover is a painting of a small dog on a red background.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 07/04/2026
My best reads so far have absolutely been beta reads. I can’t wait to see those books out in the world!! As for published work my top anticipated reads are “The Republic of Memory” by Mahmud El Sayed and “Bodies of Magic” by Freya Marske. #RevPitWaiting
“The Republic of Memory” book cover by Mahmud El Sayed. The cover depicts a sci-fi city built in layers on a space ship. “Bodies of Magic” book cover by Freya Marske. It depicts an imposing school setting with a tree shaped like lungs behind the main building.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 05/04/2026
Busy weekend! Brought home a new Meyer lemon tree (to match our other one) and he's already budding. 🍋 Also had more tulips pop up. I really doubted these guys because we planted them so late, but they're proving me wrong!
A Meyer lemon tree with buds.A small cluster of bright pink and white tulips in a flower bed.Three yellow and orange tulips in a flower bed.A few light purple and white tulips in a flower bed.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 03/04/2026
Usually I’m just writing in the dining room with my buddies (Merlin & Percy)! My number one writing ritual: before every writing session, I walk the dog and make a fun bev. #RevPitWaiting
A black and white cat and a laptop on a dining table. The table has a green gingham pattern. The walls of the room are light blue.A brown and white tabby cat making a silly face next to a laptop. The laptop and cat are on a table with a green gingham tablecloth. The walls of the room are blue.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 02/04/2026
Seems like a great time to share my updated comp graphic! #RevPitWaiting
A list of comp titles with their book covers. The comps include “The Raven Scholar” by Antonia Hodgson, “The Raven Tower” by Ann Leckie, “Witch King” by Martha Wells, and “The Red Winter” by Cameron Sullivan. 

Bonus comp: Dragon Age II.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 01/04/2026
One of my lovely betas made me a fleet of memes after finishing Everwinter. Here are the least spoiler-y ones. 😂 #RevPitWaiting
A man sitting on a couch holding a phone. The phone emits a bright light that obscures the man's face. The text above the man reads "The Priest." The text by the phone reads "Mal passing under the arch."An image of someone watching a pop star through a video call. The pop star is labeled "Oleander." The person watching is labeled "Pelolis Citizens." The person watching is screaming in joy.Images of Mike Wazowski from Monsters Inc. singing in a dark room. The image is labeled "the colosseum trial."Image of a man screaming in front of a whiteboard. The whiteboard reads "MURDER." The man is labeled "Mal Chapter 25."
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 31/03/2026
“I know. I’m the cobbler.” Is my husband’s favorite funny line, so I’ll share this one. 😂 #RevPitWaiting
Quote from a manuscript. Quote reads:

Lorien was reserved, as Samara said, obvious in how he hovered on the edge of the group. He was also familiar. Not in a way that made Malachi fear being revealed, no, he’d never seen the man before. But he knew how weavers carried themselves, and he recognized the worn, gold cowl under his traveling cloak, glimpsed while Lorien altered his boots.

It was one thing for a mender to escape Pelolis. A weaver meant a story. Secrets. They didn't have time for someone else’s secrets.

“Your cobbler could use more practice,” Lorien said, the coastal accent of Pelolis comforting to Malachi’s ears.

“I know. I’m the cobbler.”

Color drained from Lorien’s face.
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PJ (he/him) is querying... @pjwrites.bsky.social · 31/03/2026
Happy Trans Day of Visibility! Here are some of my favorite trans reads + one trans TBR pick. 🩵🩷🤍 🏳️‍⚧️ #tdov
A book recommendation image with a trans flag background. The book recommendations are “Star Crossed” by KC de la Rosa, “The Wicked Bargain” by Gabe
Cole Novoa, “Sorrowland” by Rivers Solomon, “Good and Faithful Sinners” by Elliot Sloan (coming September 2026), “The Raven Tower” by Ann Leckie, “Freshwater” by Akwaeke Emezi, “The Build-a-Boyfriend Project” by Mason Deaver, “Off Course: Episode 01 It Takes Time” by AM de la Rosa, and “The Sapling Cage” by Margaret Killjoy (TBR pick).
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