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Jou Montfort

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Fantasy & Romantasy author, currently working on stories of the Phoenix and the Five Worlds. New book reviews every week, plus original fiction!

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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 4h
The #FourthWing #BookClub begins dissecting the worldbuilding of the final chapters! Let’s talk about broken magic, sweeping things under the rug, and why Xaden’s father was a dumbass. #bookreview #fantasy #dragonriders joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 36 through Chapter 39 (Part 2)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on December 15th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 14h
Magic systems that are functionally just superpowers seem to be popping up everywhere these days ... for better or worse. Join Recent Reads as we dissect the advantages, risks, and mishandling of this trope! #BookSky #BookReview #Hierarchy www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Magic Superpowers — Recent Reads — Jou Montfort
Join in for deep-dive book reviews of Fantasy and Science Fiction literature!
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 09/10/2026
Next week, Recent Reads begins the #bookreview of MADNESS IN WONDERLAND! Now's a great time to check out another story by Mindy LeMieux, "I'm Not a Supervillain"! #romance #BookSky #readersky #bookrecommendation #indieauthor www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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I'm Not a Supervillain (A Hero-Villain Clean Romance Short Story) — Jou Montfort
Greetings, everyone. Thank you for joining me for a review of a Romance short story. In late June, indie author Mindy LeMieux posted a call for ARC readers for her new clean Romantasy novel, Madnes...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 08/10/2026
Recent Reads reviews PROPHECY! Let's end the Masquerade Cycle by discussing a war story that looks behind the curtain to explore its villains. #BookSky #readersky #MTG #readerscommunity #magicthegathering #bookreview #bookrecommendation www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Prophecy (Masquerade Cycle, Book 3) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to our exploration of MTG tie-in fiction, for the final book of the Masquerade Cycle. While the crew of the Weatherlight had their adventures on Mercadia, and while Crovax...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 08/10/2026
The #bookreview posts for #ThreshingDay are all drafted and begin releasing this Sunday. Overall #anthology rating: 2.5/10 While it has good moments, this anthology does more harm than good for the wider canon of the #empyrean . #fourthwing #readers www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Focus and Continuity (A Prelude to Threshing Day) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome to the semi-official start of the review of Threshing Day, the anthology released by Rebecca Yarros to tide over audiences during the wait from Onyx Storm to Book 4 of The ...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 08/10/2026
The #FourthWing #BookClub reviews the final chapters of the novel! Let’s get into mangled endings, laughable plot holes, and changing sides because That's Good. #bookstagram #dragonriders #fantasy joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 36 through Chapter 39 (Part 1)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on December 15th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
I've finished #ThreshingDay . The story #review posts begin dropping Sunday. Now, join Recent Reads for groundwork on how I'll do this #bookreview a little differently. #bookstagram #dragonriders #booksky #readersky #readers #fourthwing #readingcommunity www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Focus and Continuity (A Prelude to Threshing Day) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome to the semi-official start of the review of Threshing Day, the anthology released by Rebecca Yarros to tide over audiences during the wait from Onyx Storm to Book 4 of The ...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 06/10/2026
#ThreshingDay Update Finished #Sloane and #Aaric . Both are 4/10. Yarros took characters with immense potential and wasted them. Sloane remains a puppet to serve Violet's story, while Aaric is a puppet to screech the theme. Full #review Dec 27 ("Sloane") and Jan 3 ("Aaric").
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 05/10/2026
The #bookreview of KINGMAKER concludes! This is a book with a static and fairly stereotypical (of their factions) cast, yet their dynamics and the setting still produce rewarding drama. #BookSky #readersky #readers #bookrecommendation #warhammer40K www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Kingmaker (An Assassinorum Novel) (Part 3 - Characters & Worldbuilding) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome to the conclusion of the Assassinorum: Kingmaker review series. This final part will focus exclusively on the analysis of characters and worldbuilding. If you’d like the overv...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 04/10/2026
#ThreshingDay Update Finished #Ridoc (8/10, full #review Dec 13) and #Liam (6/10, full review Dec 20) These stories are more proof that Yarros CAN write compelling character work and effective plots. It's her constant efforts to embellish and cover up mistakes that derail her.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 04/10/2026
Looking for some #Fantasy to enjoy this weekend? Chapter 11-1 of A CHIME FOR THESE HALLOWED BONES is here! Join in to learn how a #necromancer from Kabarāhira commands a wight. #Romantasy #readers #serializedfiction #readingcommunity #indieauthor www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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A Chime for These Hallowed Bones (Chapter 11, Part 1) — Jou Montfort
The day after visiting Tesfaye’s shop, Yadleen rose before sunrise. Rajeev was, predictably, waiting behind the ossuary. She wordlessly beckoned to him and led the way to the townhouse while the city ...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#ThreshingDay Update Finished #Sawyer . Rating: 7/10 Much like #Mira , the plot is wafer-thin, yet this is another one that is functional as a character study. Also like #Dain , the dialogue scene actually ties into the bonding scene. Full #review coming 12/06.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
The dissection of Ch. 33 through 35 continues! Join the #FourthWing #BookClub as we break down how the big pre-climax twist (and its fallout) deal one more cripplingly blow to the intended framing of the characters. #bookreview #fantasy #dragons joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 33 through Chapter 35 (Part 2)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on December 8th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#THRESHINGDAY Update Finished #Rhiannon . Rating: 5/10 It's filler. Not good, not bad, and no real story or contribution to the wider narrative. Just pages filled so Yarros could check a box for a Rhiannon story. Full #review coming 11/29.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
Recent Reads reviews NEMESIS! Let's return to Rath for an attempt at a dark, political fantasy that lacks the time or character work to stick the landing. #BookSky #readersky #MTG #readerscommunity #magicthegathering #bookreview www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Nemesis (Masquerade Cycle, Book 2) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to our exploration of MTG tie-in fiction and the adventures of the skyship Weatherlight … or, in this case, the adventures of those the Weatherlight left behind. Much li...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 02/10/2026
#ThreshingDay Update Finished #Imogen . Rating: 1/10 As with #Garrick, Yarros sees a plot hole from #OnyxStorm and spouts garbled nonsense that doesn't patch it. This time, she goes out of her way to enlarge the hole first. Full #review arrives 11/22.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 01/10/2026
#ThreshingDay Update: Finished #Garrick (1/10), #Dain (4/10), and #Bodhi (4/10) Two deliver strong characters but are ruined by plot holes. The last is filler. Full reviews in November.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
#ThreshingDay Update Finished #Xaden last night. Rating: 3/10 What began as an engaging character piece that proves Yarros can do better with this character turned into sludge as the story was ripped apart by plot holes incurred by its own internal logic. Full review Oct. 25th.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
The #FourthWing #BookClub dissects Ch. 33 through 35! Join in as we dissect a climax that’s not only an abrupt swerve but was also set up so terribly that it was only foreshadowed in the most technical sense. #bookreview #bookstagram #dragonriders joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 33 through Chapter 35 (Part 1)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on December 8th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
Rebecca Yarros wrote a story about a woman in the military … in a setting where, by the story’s own internal logic, women would not be allowed in the military. Join the #FourthWing #BookClub as we dissect this unforced error in #worldbuilding . joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 30 through Chapter 32 (Part 3)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on December 1st, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
#ThreshingDay Update Finished #Mira . Rating: 7/10 The plot's wafer-thin, but this is successful as a character piece to restore Mira to her factory settings and give her a narrative voice of her own. More of this in #theempyrean, please, Ms. Yarros. Full #bookreview Oct 18.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 30/09/2026
#ThreshingDay Update: Finished #Brennan . 4/10 - Characterization relies on Telling and making others "foolish". - Many pages wasted to rehash unneeded exposition. - Hollow memberberries. The only positive is that Marbh has Terriermon energy. It's endearing. Full #bookreview 10/12. #empyrean
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
This week, A CHIME FOR THESE HALLOWED BONES continues with Chapter 11! Now’s a great time to get caught up on the Enemies to Lovers drama so far, whether from Chapter 1 or the latest chapter! #RomanceReads #Fantasy #Romantasy #serialfiction #readers www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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A Chime for These Hallowed Bones (Chapter 1) — Jou Montfort
It was just after noon when the graverobber trespassed in Master Baig’s reception hall, bringing with him a sack of human bones. Red clay caked both him and the sack. A fetid reek preceded him, overw...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 29/09/2026
The #bookreview of KINGMAKER continues with Part 2! Let's discuss the engaging and evolving plot, including one phenomenal twist that more than compensates for another that fell flat. #BookSky #readersky #readers #imperialknights #bookrecommendation #warhammer40K www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Kingmaker (An Assassinorum Novel) (Part 2 - Plot) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to the review of Assassinorum: Kingmaker. This part will specifically be a dissection of the plot. If you are looking for the overview, please see Part 1 . The characte...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 28/09/2026
The review of Chapters 30 to 32 continues! Join the #FourthWing #BookClub as we dissect how the worldbuilding Yarros rammed in for sex ends up doing yet more damage to the integrity of this setting. #bookreview #dragonriders #romantasy joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 30 through Chapter 32 (Part 2)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on December 1st, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 26/09/2026
Chapter 3 of MORAL SUPPORT wraps up with Part 2! The source of Gvish's grievance with Bracha is revealed! Chapter 4 arrives October 23rd! #indieauthor #fantasy #militaryfantasy #serializedfiction #readers #readingcommunity www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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Moral Support (Chapter 3, Part 2) — Jou Montfort
Cremation was standard practice for every religion approved by the Inquisition. The red-clad mortuary chaplains only needed Gvish to specify the details. Corporal Saqqaf had requested no special accom...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 26/09/2026
The #FourthWing #BookClub reaches Chapters 30 through 32! Let’s talk about that … “betrayal” … and how the evidence on the page points towards it being an accident (and how Violet should have figured that out). #bookreview #fantasy #dragonriders joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 30 through Chapter 32 (Part 1)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on December 1st, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 25/09/2026
Tomorrow, Chapter 3 Part 2 of MORAL SUPPORT arrives! This week, the true nature of Gvish’s grievance with Bracha is revealed. Catch up now on the chapter thus far! #indieauthor #serializedfiction #MilitaryFantasy #DarkFantasy #readers #ReadingForPleasure www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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Moral Support (Chapter 3, Part 1) — Jou Montfort
The blood of Private Awan and Corporal Saqqaf stained Bracha’s hands. Any squad could have been assigned to escort Bracha to Fort Jahangir. If not Gvish’s people, someone else’s would have died in th...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
Recent Reads reviews MERCADIAN MASQUES! Let's review an escapist adventure with a plot so fast-paced, it's easy to miss the absence of character. #BookSky #readersky #MTG #readerscommunity #magicthegathering #bookreview www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Mercadian Masques (Masquerade Cycle, Book 1) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to our exploration of MTG tie-in fiction and the adventures of the skyship Weatherlight . As mentioned at the end of the Rath and Storm anthology review, the next chronolog...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
The #bookreview of THE ETERNAL ICE concludes! Let's talk about well-balanced action, immersive worldbuilding, and themes that are fine in concept and harmless in execution. #BookSky #readersky #MTG #readerscommunity #magicthegathering www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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The Eternal Ice (Ice Age Cycle, Book 2) (Part 2 - Plot, Worldbuilding, Theme & Cover Art) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to the review of The Eternal Ice, Book 2 of the Ice Age Cycle . Yesterday, we did the overview and discussed the characters. Today, we’ll go over the plot, worldbuilding...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 23/09/2026
The #bookreview of THE ETERNAL ICE is here! Let's talk about how Grubb again took an obvious cash grab and elevated it into an entertaining adventure, this time including memorable characters. #BookSky #readersky #MTG #readerscommunity #magicthegathering www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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The Eternal Ice (Ice Age Cycle, Book 2) (Part 1 - Overview & Character) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome to Dominaria’s Ice Age. It’s Silver Week, and seeing has how we’ll be reviewing Mercadian Masques this Wednesday, I thought we might as well make this holiday all about MTG by ...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 22/09/2026
Recent Reads dives into the operations of the #assassinorum with KINGMAKER! Let's talk about how an unassuming tale of assassins and #mechs delivered an immensely satisfying experience. #BookReview #BookSky #readersky #readers #bookrecommendation #warhammer40K www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Kingmaker (An Assassinorum Novel) (Part 1 - Overview) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all, welcome back to the grim darkness of the 41st … … sorry. 42nd Millennium. Yes, this latest entry in our exploration of the Warhammer 40K mythos comes from the time of the Indomitus Cr...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 20/09/2026
It’s finally time, folks. Come watch me get apoplectic about the worldbuilding virus-bomb that is Violet’s Special-Snowflake, Combat-Wheelchair, Not-A-Reasonable-Accommodation #dragon saddle. This week: Ch. 30 - 32! #FourthWing #BookClub #fantasy #romantasy joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 22 through Chapter 29 (Part 3)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on November 24th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 19/09/2026
The breakdown of Chapters 22 through 29 continues! Join the #FourthWing #BookClub as we discuss the really weird handling of Dain throughout this chunk of the book. #Romantasy #bookreview #dragons joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 22 through Chapter 29 (Part 2)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on November 24th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 19/09/2026
Chapter 3 Part 1 of MORAL SUPPORT is here! Join Staff Sergeant Gvish as his squad returns to Fort Jahangir, a beacon of civilization in a cursed wilderness! #MilitaryFantasy #Fantasy #IndieAuthor #readers #serializedfiction #readingcommunity #DarkFantasy www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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Moral Support (Chapter 3, Part 1) — Jou Montfort
The blood of Private Awan and Corporal Saqqaf stained Bracha’s hands. Any squad could have been assigned to escort Bracha to Fort Jahangir. If not Gvish’s people, someone else’s would have died in th...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 18/09/2026
The CLUTCH AND CLAW #bookreview concludes with the plot analysis and a FIRE AND FANG retrospective! Let's talk about how, despite a rushed ending, this series sets the benchmark all #Romantasy should clear. #indie #BookSky #readersky #fantasy #readerscommunity www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Clutch and Claw (Part 4 - Plot & Series Retrospective) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to the review series for Clutch and Claw , the grand finale to Fire and Fang series. This week will serve as the final part of the analysis, digging into the plot of th...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 17/09/2026
The #FourthWing #BookClub dives into Chapters 22 through 29! The plot breaks into an all-out sprint … and yet, there is little progression, as new conflicts spawn and then evaporate in the span of a couple of chapters. #bookreview #fantasy #romantasy joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 22 through Chapter 29 (Part 1)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on November 24th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 15/09/2026
The #bookreview of THE BURNING BRIDGE wraps up with plot contrivance! Let's discuss how this plot is held together by decisions that, while not impossible, do feel incredibly artificial. #RangersApprentice #BookSky #readers #readingcommunity #Fantasy #MiddleGrade www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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The Burning Bridge (The Ranger's Apprentice, Book 2) (Part 4 - Spotlight on Plot Contrivances — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to the conclusion of the review for The Burning Bridge , Book 2 of The Ranger’s Apprentice. We’re going to wrap things up by dissecting the plot contrivances of this bo...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 14/09/2026
The #FourthWing #BookClub wraps up Ch. 19 to 21 with the #worldbuilding (including the worldbuilding skipped in Ch. 17 & 18)! Let’s talk about things that fit nicely and things that don't make sense in this meeting. This week, we sprint from Ch. 22 to 29! joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 19 through Chapter 21 (Part 3)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on November 17th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 12/09/2026
The trial / execution of Amber is a taste of just how divorced Violet’s biased POV is from the actual scenarios in which she exists. Join the #FourthWing #BookClub as we continue our exploration of Chapters 19 through 21! #romancebookstagram #fantasy joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 11/09/2026
Volume II of A CHIME FOR THESE HALLOWED BONES is here! Read Chapter 10 now on my website and Substack, and follow along as more chapters release across autumn and winter! #indie #serializedfiction #romantasy #necromancer #readers #fantasy #enemiestolovers www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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A Chime for These Hallowed Bones (Chapter 10, Part 1) — Jou Montfort
Daylight transformed Kabarāhira from a city of the dead into one of the living. Crowds flowed along cobbled streets between buildings of marble, alabaster, or various whitewashed materials. The poor ...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 10/09/2026
The CLUTCH AND CLAW review delves into the characters! Let's explore how Buroker successfully fleshes out the motivations of an entire faction of #dragons. #indie #BookSky #readersky #fantasy #romantasy #readerscommunity #bookreview www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Clutch and Claw (Part 3 - Character) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to the review series for Clutch and Claw , the grand finale to Fire and Fang series. It’s time for us to talk about the foundation of any Romance story: the characters....
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 10/09/2026
Volume II of A CHIME FOR THESE HALLOWED BONES kicks off on Friday! Now's a great chance to get caught up in the #slowburn #enemiestolovers drama thus far! #indie #readingcommunity #readers #romantasy #necromancer #fantasy www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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A Chime for These Hallowed Bones (Chapter 1) — Jou Montfort
It was just after noon when the graverobber trespassed in Master Baig’s reception hall, bringing with him a sack of human bones. Red clay caked both him and the sack. A fetid reek preceded him, overw...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 10/09/2026
The #FourthWing #BookClub reaches Chapters 19 through 21! Let’s talk about sloppy foreshadowing and more wildly flung plot spaghetti. #bookreview #bookstagram #dragons joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 19 through Chapter 21 (Part 1)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on November 17th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 09/09/2026
Recent Reads dives into NicholasWolf's #warhammer40K stories with "Sorrowcrown", a novella of THE LONG VIGIL! Let's explore this tale of brotherhood in the #Deathwatch ! #BookReview #BookSky #readersky #readers #bookrecommendation www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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Sorrowcrown (A Novella of The Long Vigil) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome for joining me for another jaunt into the grim darkness of the 41st Millennium. Those of you who read my review of Beyond the Crimson Mists that Nicholas Wolf had previously do...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 08/09/2026
Let's dive into the plot of THE BURNING BRIDGE, where the unconventional structure and bold twists really make this sequel stand out. #RangersApprentice #BookSky #readersky #readers #bookreview #readingcommunity #Fantasy #MiddleGrade www.joumontfort.com/recent-reads...
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The Burning Bridge (The Ranger's Apprentice, Book 2) (Part 3 - Plot) — Jou Montfort
Hello, all. Welcome back to the ongoing analysis of The Burning Bridge , Book 2 of The Ranger’s Apprentice. This part is going to focus on just the worldbuilding and characters. Please check o...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 08/09/2026
The #fourthwing #bookclub wraps up Ch. 17 & 18! Let’s talk about how Yarros’s lazy handling of Representation feels inauthentic to the world she chose to create, thereby exposing the artificiality of both. This week: Ch. 19 - 21! #bookreview #dragonriders joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 17 & Chapter 18 (Part 3)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on November 10th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 06/09/2026
MORAL SUPPORT has kicked off with Chapters 1 & 2! Come for a story of brotherhood, faith, and alchemical warfare in the #fae forests of the Tamseszén Front. Chapter 3 begins 9/18! #novella #fantasy #indie #readers #readingcommunity #militaryfantasy www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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Moral Support (Chapter 1) — Jou Montfort
Motorbikes were the second-worst thing about the Tamseszén Front. These awful machines – or, at the very least, the carmot engines that propelled them – were supposedly the next great innovation in a...
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 04/09/2026
The #FourthWing #BookClub continues to explore Chapters 17 & 18! Let’s watch the character work from the previous 16 chapters shear apart. Plus, we begin our delve into Yarros’s idea of #representation (i.e. lazy tokenization). #bookreview #dragonriders joumontfort.substack.com/p/fourth-win...
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FOURTH WING BOOK CLUB: Chapter 17 & Chapter 18 (Part 2)
The following review was originally posted to my author website on November 10th, 2023.
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Jou Montfort @joumontfort.bsky.social · 04/09/2026
MORAL SUPPORT is here! #Licanius meets #FMA in a #gunpowderfantasy about brotherhood, faith, and steel. Chapters 1 & 2 are now available. Chapter 3 begins September 18th! #novella #fantasy #indie #readers #readersky #readingcommunity www.joumontfort.com/tales-of-the...
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Moral Support (Chapter 1) — Jou Montfort
Motorbikes were the second-worst thing about the Tamseszén Front. These awful machines – or, at the very least, the carmot engines that propelled them – were supposedly the next great innovation in a...
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