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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor

@jesslawrence.bsky.social
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Fiction editor. Writer. Reader. Mildly interesting human. She/Her. jesslawrence.co.uk

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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 13/07/2026
WINGS OF BLOOD Captain Tess Night was raised to fear the Lord of Blood, and he made a sport of brutally killing soldiers like her, but when a cursed prince returns from the dead, the two are forced to ally. ⚔️ FMC with a sword 🩸 MMC with blood magic 🫶 Found family #A #F #📖 #Q #BluePit
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 30/04/2026
Adulthood sneaks up on you in such unexpected ways. One day you're young and carefree, and the next you're filling out a form on the Royal Horticultural Society website letting them know you found box tree caterpillars in your garden.
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 22/04/2026
The tricky thing about writing a fae character who can't lie, I have recently learned, is figuring out what to do with sarcasm and dry humour. Some of his dialogue, if delivered straight, would be considered a lie, but he's saying it as a joke. Does that count? 🤔
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 22/04/2026
Dusting off this account because I've heard it's the place to be for pitch events, and they were always fun. Threads doesn't have them and I'd rather eat gravel than go back to Twitter so... hello! Any kind souls want to let me know if there are any coming up? #WritingCommunity
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Keith W. Dickinson @keithwdickinson.bsky.social · 09/05/2025
And if you're interested in learning how and why I cut 10k words from an already published novel I wrote about that in a blog post of my own. 👇😁
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Revised, Renewed, And Rereleased – How And Why I Changed An Already Published Novel
It’s not normal to change an already published novel, not normal at all. Tolkien did it with The Hobbit. After he decided to make Bilbo’s ring the Ring Of Power he had to go back and ch…
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Keith W. Dickinson @keithwdickinson.bsky.social · 09/05/2025
A post from my editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social on how to know your book is done. My first book I cut 10,000 words out of it AFTER I had published the first version. That was crazy. The last book I wrote was done at 45k words. Then at 57k words. The finally at 62k words. Done is a relative concept
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How do I know when my book is ready?
How do you convince yourself your book is ready in a world where there's no such think as 'perfect'?
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 09/02/2025
I've hit the point with this WIP revision where I just want to read the story, but I don't want to have to write the story first. Like, can't I just have a completed draft already?
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 16/01/2025
The WIP I'm revising started as a chill project after querying another book. Well, it grew legs and now I want to share it with everyone, hence the revision. 3 chapters in, I love this story and these characters. I call it Chaos Child (v. apt) but this annoying gremlin of a WIP has my whole heart ❤️‍🔥
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 30/12/2024
I just got today's Wordle on my first guess. Nothing can stop me now. I am invincible 🙌
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 19/12/2024
2024 has been a good year for editing. I've laughed, I've cried, I've sat at my desk for far, far too long, but it was all in service of fantastic stories! Thank you so much to every author who has trusted me with their words this year - it's been a pleasure 🧡
2024 Wrapped: Jess' Editing Edition2,233,000 words editedBar chart showing total words by service. Copy-editing (821,000), Dev editing (697,000), Editorial reports (650,000) and Queries (65,000)35 projects
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 14/12/2024
I'm rereading an old WIP ahead of revising it and I just came across this note Past Jess left for me where a chapter ends abruptly 😭
Screenshot of a typed note in my Word doc that reads "Terrible cut in the plot – need to find a connector but also just need to move on right now. Sorry future me."
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Keith W. Dickinson @keithwdickinson.bsky.social · 13/12/2024
I have a #CosyFantasy that is currently a finalist for Book Blogger Novel Of The Year called Glunda The Veg Witch that people might like. 😊 mybook.to/glunda 🥕🧙‍♀️
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Glunda The Veg Witch
Read it now
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K.V. Johansen @kvjohansen.bsky.social · 07/12/2024
Never, ever put off buying book one of something because book two isn't out. That's a good way to ensure book two is dropped by the publisher. Sure, a couple of big noisy boys have let you down. Most of us can, do, and are burning to in fact finish what we started, given half a chance.
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K Lykkebo 🖤 Fantasy author @karenlykkebo.com · 07/12/2024
✨this december, love thyself✨ 7th I know meditation and mindfulness have many cringe and walk away. "what's the point of just sitting and breathing? I've never been enlightened." Nop, it's not the point either. Let's just take a quick look at the breathing aspect ⬇️🧵 1/6
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Keith W. Dickinson @keithwdickinson.bsky.social · 05/12/2024
Bless you for this. Short story collections are special. Often harder to write than novels too. If you want one for free check out my steampunk shorts collection, The Hammersmyth Tales. 😊 mybook.to/hammersmyth2
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 05/12/2024
To add to this, my services also make for great gifts for the writer in your life (including yourself 🧡) And I even have cute little gift cards mocked up, so... 👀
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 05/12/2024
I've got a few editing slots open for January and February – developmental editing, copy-editing, query packs, or my brand new Editorial Consultations! Anyone who reaches out before the end of the year can lock in my current rates before I give them a little bump. www.jesslawrence.co.uk/services
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Services | Book Editor | Jess Lawrence
Developmental editing, editorial reports, copy-editing and query editing for fiction writers.
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 02/12/2024
Happy to share the recent launch of a client novel - 'Huw is Missing' by Martin Whitbread. If you're looking for a gripping mystery with an older protagonist, this is a great read! www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0DNFZF6DG
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 12/11/2024
So is there a guidebook for new(ish) BlueSky users? I'd like to hang out here more often but I'm not sure of the ropes...
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 12/10/2023
I can't do polls on here (can I?), but I'm curious to know: Writers and readers, if a book is split into Parts, do you prefer the chapter numbers to keep counting up, or to restart at Chapter 1 for each Part?
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 11/10/2023
I've come to the library to write, for a change of scenery, and I'm already up 1300 words 🙌
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 23/09/2023
Finished! The chapter has been rehashed and it's now actually kind of good (for this draft at least). Plus I've set myself up nicely to pick the words back up tomorrow ☺️
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 23/09/2023
Okay, I have the whole day to write. I have a chapter that needs completely rehashing. If you catch me loitering around here before I've made progress, shame me! Don't let me procrastinate, please!
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 20/09/2023
Am I procrastinating from writing, or does my brain really and truly just need a rest?
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 12/09/2023
Escalator handrail at Waterloo station is feeling a little needy 🤭
Photograph of an escalator handrail with a sign printed on it that reads 'Hold me'.
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 10/09/2023
This WIP just hit 50k and is still going strong 🙌
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 31/08/2023
I've recently signed two new authors up to work with, and they share the same names as the two protagonists in my current WIP. And they're not terribly common names. If I get an enquiry from an Abernathy now... 👀
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 29/08/2023
When your smoke alarm decides to do its low-battery warning at 4:30am, leaving you wide awake, what else can you do but get up and write 3000 words of a new story idea that came to you? Sidenote, the story is not smoke alarm related 😆
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 27/08/2023
I've been itching to reach 40k on the WIP this weekend. I was tinkering away at a chapter and I happened to look down to see I'm on exactly 40,000 words. I love when that happens ☺️
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 16/08/2023
Frantically scribbling notes on my phone while on the bus so I can at least say I contributed to my WIP today!
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 12/08/2023
I hate first drafting. Hate it. Which isn't to say I don't love this WIP, because I do, but ohhhh I can't wait to be revising it instead of writing it 😣
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 11/08/2023
Must. Keep. Mind. Off. New. Story. Idea. 😬
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 05/08/2023
Okay, I'm sticking a pin in the writing for a bit – may come back to it later tonight. If not, I wrote 1400 words!
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 05/08/2023
You know that moment when you write a scene and your characters do something even you didn't expect, but when you look back it's like of course they did that, that's exactly right and could happen no other way? Just had that moment ☺️
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 05/08/2023
Alright, alright it's time to knuckle down. I will not be back here or any other social platform until I've added at least 500 words to this WIP!
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 03/08/2023
Any tips for a newbie here? I'm seeing different 'feeds' but not sure what they mean. Do we use hashtags? How does it all work?
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 02/08/2023
Right, that's 1200 new words banked for this WIP tonight! I love how this one just keeps tumbling out of me ☺️
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Jess Lawrence | copy-editor @jesslawrence.bsky.social · 02/08/2023
I need to send my first post so... Hello!
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