Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 01/05/2026Oh yes! Author-casting my characters is an early process in my book planning lol Nicholas Duvernay would also 100% work for Caius 130
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 01/05/2026Beyond definite agent + publishing deal I'd say it's that An Oath With the Stars is getting a TV show and the composer is Atli Örvarsson 110
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 01/05/2026I could be convinced to find alpha readers for my currently untitled #YA #CF #R Calliope is a demon hunter who wakes up one day to find her short term memories are broken. Orion is a reaper tasked with retriving the soul of an angel who escaped proper death and is now hiding in Calli's body. #ABCPit 2101
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 01/05/2026In search of beta readers/critique partners for AN OATH WITH THE STARS, an 89K word #YA #UF about a girl who chooses to become a monster hunter to exact revenge on the creature who killed a friend and later attacked her family. I'll also tag #R bc the love triangle is part of the plot #ABCPit 8191
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 01/05/2026CHOSEN: In which Lily and Zev have their first one-on-one conversation, Lily finds out exactly why he is cold toward her. #WIPSnips 1120
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 30/04/2026Foresaken Inferno/Foresaken Pumpkin (takes place from August to November)media.tenor.coma man with a pumpkin on his head is standing in a cemetery .ALT: a man with a pumpkin on his head is standing in a cemetery . 010
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 29/04/2026Yup! It was originally a stand alone but then I started writing it... lol 010
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 28/04/2026CHICKEN: In which Tad explains what attribute he's gotten from each monster injection, while leaving the one Lily wants to know about most out of the explanation. 040
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 28/04/20261. At one point, Tad (the OG LI) came very close to no longer being a LI 2. Coldplay is the reason for an impactful course change in a chapter toward the end of the ms 3. AOWTS was always meant to be a duology #CRPDryads #CampTrivia #CampRevPit 110
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 27/04/2026When you're a city girl and the clearest night sky you've seen is the moon and her brightest companions, then on your 18th birthday you're a thick glass wall away from the cosmos. 070
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 27/04/2026Lol yeah...I did search "Lily" and the amount I got did not justify how astronomical that "-ly" number was. But I think the numbers on the bingo sheet are a good goal to hit. Before, I was just dciding based on context and how close the most recent filler word was, but this gives me a target. 000
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 27/04/2026It's the oscillation of "Oh no...unless...no...well..." Some things survive, some are changed, some are lost to the void. #CampRevPit #CRPDryadsmedia.tenor.coma woman in a black shirt is making a funny face in a room .ALT: a woman in a black shirt is making a funny face in a room . 090
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 26/04/2026😨 Wait I can explain! The -ly thing is rough because words like "only" exist and my MC's name is Lily. And I didn't do the math to see what words are spoken in dialogue vs in the narration where they could be taken out. This is still pretty bad though lol #CRPDryads #CampRevPit 130
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/04/2026It's both a job title and a culture, essentially. Those born into the cutlture of Chimeras grow up as a Chimera. They're humans who know about monsters, hunt monsters, and can opt into injecting the blood of monsters to permanently gain an attribute. 110
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/04/2026#CRPCabinRaids #CRPDryads I'm so glad you asked! (For Caius, Nicholas Duvernay also works really well in my head) And if you ask my husband, Giancarlo Esposito is who he pictures for Gabriel. Clearly I need to be clearer in the text when it comes to Gabriel's age... 140
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/04/2026I'm so behind🫣 #CampRevPit #CRPDryads This exchange between Lily and Caius is a great showcase of growing up "human" and becoming a Chimera vs growing up a Chimera. This may be her first time dealing with this reality, but it certainly isn't her last. 140
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 21/04/20262. UNTITLED is a dual POV YA contemporary fantasy. Calliope is a demon hunter who wakes up one day to find her short term memories are broken. Orion is a reaper tasked with retriving the soul of an angel who escaped proper death...and is now hiding in Calliope's body. #CRPDryads 160
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 21/04/2026I have a couple: 1. AN OATH WITH THE STARS (my revpit sub) is in the editing stages. It follows Lily as she joins an organization of monster hunters to get revenge on a fire elemental for the killing her friend and trying to kill her family. #CRPDryads 360
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 20/04/20261. Panster but I'm trying to lean more into plotter 2. Depends. Really, I need both to feel earned. 3. Fantasy 4. Romance subplot 5. Horror elements 6. Black cat 7. Introvert #CRPDryads #CampRevPit 150
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 20/04/2026Hey #CampRevPit and #CRPDryads I'm currently editing my YA urban fantasy An Oath With the Stars and drafting a YA contemporary fantasy romance about demon hunters and reapers and possession. Outside of writing, I'm gearing up for a Curse of Strahd campaign (Tiefling Tempest Cleric) #CampKickOff 2100
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 13/04/2026Congratulations everyone! And congratulations to the runners-up too!media.tenor.coma man in a number 21 jersey is surrounded by other soccer playersALT: a man in a number 21 jersey is surrounded by other soccer players 010
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 10/04/2026🌌Edit AOWTS, esp. the beginning (bc two 10Qs posts have me thinking they're about my sub) 🌊Continue rewriting TToH 🪦Finish drafting an untitled YA urban fantasy/romance about a girl possessed by the soul of an angel and the reaper tasked with retriving said soul 🖋️Find some CPs maybe #RevPitWaiting 190
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 02/04/2026*Somemedia.tenor.coma cartoon character is sitting at a table with a bunch of food on it .ALT: a cartoon character is sitting at a table with a bunch of food on it . 010
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 02/04/2026Come name fun facts: Lily's parents own a flower shop. Their 3 daughters are named Lilyana, Chrysanthamum (Chrys), and Poppy. Caius, his siblings, and some cousins are named after Shakespeare characters (Helena, Puck, Lucius, Olivia, Oberon, Ariel, Juliet, and Hero) #RevPitWaiting 160
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 02/04/2026It differs between manuscripts. In one I've shelved, 'massive' was used a lot??? I don't know why. In my #RevPit submission, the amount of times 'maybe' was used... That was diabolical. POV character is kinda headstrong, and then she turns around and goes "Well, maybe..." She's now more definitive. 010
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 01/04/2026Incredibly out of context memes, but memes nonetheless🩷 #RevPitWaiting 080
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 31/03/2026"What can I say? Parents love me." -Tad Flynn And he's right. #RevPitWaiting 030
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 30/03/20263/30: CP Shout Out Shout out to my husband honestly. In the first draft, I had this idea for a couple chapters. He thankfully looked me in my two eyeballs after reading them and told me that one of my MCs was acting out of character. We refer to it as the "infamous birthday chapter" #RevPitWaiting 060
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 30/03/2026Why yes, Tad does have max Charisma stat. And yes, Lily did dress up as Jessica Rabbit for Halloween to tease him🫶 It's also wild that I don't have 'film' in any of my current works in progress #WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting 0120
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 28/03/2026From AN OATH WITH THE STARS, in which Tad uses Lily's parents' names and she hates that for herself🫰 #WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting 061
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 27/03/20262nd: A rewrite for THE TREASURES OF HADES. I'm changing some big things about it so it's a complete overhaul. 3rd: THIS BROKEN WORLD. YA zombie apocalypse novel that follows Nova and Malachi as they navigate the end of the world and the brginning of winter. (Collage below) #RevPitWaiting 070
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 27/03/2026I'm glad you asked! 1st: A currently untitled YA urban fantasy, dual POV. We follow Calliope Reid, a demon hunter who becomes possessed by the soul of an angel, and Orion, the reaper who's hellbent on saving her before the angel's soul consumes Calliope's. #RevPitWaiting 1140
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 26/03/2026You could have him start the scene as "furniture". Like maybe his chair is positioned perfectly in the sunlight, but bc of that Donovan can't see so he shifts or moves seats, thus an act of defiance in this thing he otherwise can't escape. This also depends on where in the story this takes place 100
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/03/2026...and his situation, given that this meeting is in a staged environment. I hope this was helpful! Also sorry for the ramble. I saw strengths in both and thought combining them at points could work well. 220
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/03/2026...but I like how the second paragraph is phrased in Option 1. "Gingerroot. Snowmelt. Three stirs clockwise." I like that a lot. And Option 1's third paragraph feels stronger with "Polished, posied, chosen for..." That tells me that's what Donovan believes with certainty. I'm intrigued by Donovan 100
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/03/2026Overall, I prefer Option 1. My in-depth opinion is that I like the top paragraph from option 1 better, though I would personally remove the 2nd sentence. That would give "It was all staged..." more weight. I like the action of Donovan tilting his head to look at the arch from option 2 (1/3) 100
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/03/2026Meet Olive (orange) and Zagreus (void), my Halloween themed cats. #RevPitWaiting 0170
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 25/03/2026From a wip that I've recently found inspiration for again while RevPit Waiting. #WIPSnips #WriteSky 0191
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 24/03/2026open.spotify.com/playlist/4T1... This is the longer version of the AOWTS playlist that is pinned to my profile fo anyone curiousopen.spotify.comAn Oath With the Stars 000
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 24/03/2026Really there are 3: 🩷Lily's progress/revenge plot: Still Here by 2WEI, Forts, and Tiffany Aris ❤️Lily and Caius: Ma Meilleure Ennemie by Stromae & Pomme 💙Lily and Tad: itfeelslikeimfallinginlove by Coldplay #RevPitWaiting 140
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 24/03/2026Lily opts for a non-violent approach for her first ghost exorcism. #WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting 0170
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 23/03/2026Can't not use AOWTS for this. And of course I have to use an excerpt that features one of Tad's many lily related nicknames for her, though this is one of the tamest ones. #WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting 180
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 23/03/2026It's taken over as my favorite manga/anime (previously JJK)media.tenor.coma black and white drawing of a man holding a piece of paper that says it 's peakALT: a black and white drawing of a man holding a piece of paper that says it 's peak 110
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 23/03/2026I deeply love that trilogy! CP is the best ending we probably could've gotten to that story. I had my husband watch season 1 of Shadowhunters and I kept telling him how Jace and Alec are nothing compared to Will and Jem. And Tessa!!! All my love to her. One of my fave female protagonists. 110
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 23/03/2026Clockwork Princess by Cassandra Clare, Inferno by Sherrilyn Kenyon, The 5th Wave by Rick Yancey, The Song of Achilles by Madeline Miller, Legendborn by Tracy Deon. Currently reading Gachiakuta by Kei Urana, Ariande by Jennifer Saint, and Wool by Hugh Howey and those are all 🔥🔥🔥 #RevPitWaiting 2100
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 22/03/2026Lily (my main character) is basically these two photos and the color pink🪷 120
Sara @fictionalrealms.bsky.social · 22/03/2026Note: Injecting the blood of a fire elemental /could/ have dangerous consequences #WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting 0130