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Lauri Donahue @lauridonahue.bsky.social · 13h
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJs7... #screenwriting #scriptsky
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Screenwriting: It's Not Worth It.
YouTube video by Screenwriter NGD
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 25/09/2026
The correct reaction to the list of best TV shows is to scan emotionlessly past any ranking you agree with, then: - "X should be higher / lower" - "The presence / absence of X renders this entire list invalid" - "Only a monster would put X above / below Y" - "No Garth Marenghi's Darkplace!?!"
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 24/09/2026
Some years ago the Iconfactory created some nice downloadable icons based on these designs: blog.iconfactory.com/2013/10/ios-...
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iOS 7 and the Iconography of ‘Alien’ • The Breakroom
The visual iconography in 1979's 'Alien' proves that simply, elegant visual approaches are about as timeless as any designer can hope for. Rob Cobb's work in the film feels right at home in iOS 7.
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Adele @theartofcharts.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
Migrant rights - especially the rights of asylum seekers - matter to me, because as an economic migrant myself, I know how hard it is to migrate, even when everything goes right. No Ghosts Tonight is about how much worse it can get when things go wrong. #scriptsky #screenpit.
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Adele @theartofcharts.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
I've read VOICELESS - it's a really powerful, smart, story that stands up to rereading.
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John August @johnaugust.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
This week’s Scriptnotes with Aaron Sorkin is one of my favorites. In the bonus segment, we discuss his never-made Houdini musical.
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Adele @theartofcharts.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
DUST ON DIRT A burger-slinging astronomy student used as prey in a sadistic hunting game in the desert escapes, and finds help from a reclusive smuggler – but when she uncovers his deal with her kidnappers, she must confront her own capacity for violence. Nicholl QF #screenpit #scriptsky #Fe #Thr
A dry scrub-covered hillside under a brass-blue sky. A few scattered clouds, but no chance of rain.  Text: A Script by Adele Smaill / DUST ON DIRTEXT. DESTROYED WATER STATION IN THE WILDERNESS – NIGHT
Drops of water strike wet earth.

Slow...

...and stop.

A drained water barrel, peppered with bullet holes. Slashed
empty water containers litter the rocky clearing.

A flag, emblazoned with a rain drop, droops from a whip pole.

Facing away, an INFANT in a pink onesie crawls in the dirt.
She turns her head. She's long since dead. No eyes to her
sockets, skin withered to the bone.

INT. TROY'S TRAILER - BEDROOM ALCOVE – DAY

TROY (a gaunt 50s) gasps awake, heart POUNDING.
Flat on his back on a narrow pull-down bed, late afternoon sun
streaming through the window.

TROY
It's ok.

Bleak eyes give the lie, but the POUNDING quiets and slows.
He retrieves a pistol from the tatty console by the bed and
looks it over. His hand trembles. The gun shakes. It's
ridiculous. Pathetic, even.

INT. RAQUEL'S APARTMENT - BATHROOM – DAY
Steady hands put the finishing touches on a flat twist crown.

SHIELLE (O.S.)
(16 and hopeful)
Well? Can I go? Please?

Intent on her reflection, RAQUEL (21, Black, short, in a
uniform emblazoned 'Burgershed') ignores her. Inspects
herself with a critical eye. It'll do.

She heads for the...
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Adele @theartofcharts.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
FAR AS THE CROW FLIES A guilt-plagued school-shooting survivor and an emotionally-numb goth become unlikely 'fruit-pickers for a visa' on a remote orchard — but when their predatory boss kidnaps them, they must rekindle each other’s will to live. Big Break QF #screenpit #scriptsky #fe #thr #ho
A rusty-brown tattered feather against a light blue background.  Text: FAR AS THE CROW FLIES / Written by Adele SmaillEXT. HIGH ON A HILLY ROAD, SOUTH AUSTRALIA - DAWN
Perched on a pine bough, a raven eyes a wallaby, dead on the
verge. Guts spilled and stinking. A tempting feast.
Talons shift as the raven weighs it up. Listens... looks...
The distant THRUM of an ageing minivan intrudes on hot dry
silence. Rising dust traces its slaloming course along the
dirt track winding along the valley floor below.

Here comes trouble.
Shiny eyes focus on the roadkill. Trouble’s no stranger.

REFLECTION IN LARGE MIRROR SHADES - DAWN
Fence posts flick by like clockwork. Tick, tick, tick. The
mirror shades belong to...

...CROW (20, androgynous goth, all in black, chipped nails to
match), gazing idly out the middle-row window of the...

INT. MINIVAN - CONTINUOUS
.. as it hurtles into a tight corner.

TORI (O.S.)
(U.S. Midwest accent)
Slow up a bit?
Crow looks over at TORI (19, short, awkward, her T-shirt
reads ‘SHIT HAPPENED’), her eyes fixed on the twisting road.

At least she’ll see it coming.

Behind the wheel, KYLE (22, impulsive, macho good looks, just
a hint of a U.S. accent under an Ozzie drawl) plants his
foot. The minivan accelerates. Petty vengeance.

Beside him, EMMA (19, stylish, American) plays peacemaker.

EMMA
Tori? You carsick?

The prospect of vomit gets Kyle’s attention. He eases back.

TORI
No. I - I just don’t like...

The engine revs as Kyle speeds up. Emma settles back, hiding
an eye roll.
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Adele @theartofcharts.bsky.social · 24/09/2026
NO GHOSTS TONIGHT by Adele Smaill In a bid to get home, a young exile forces her way aboard an inflatable dinghy full of asylum seekers, who must band together to evade capture and survive a deadly Channel crossing. I wish this one wasn't topical, but it is. #Screenpit #Scriptsky #Fe #Dr #Thr
White waves breaking against a rocky shoreline at dusk. Overcast and grey.  Text: No Ghosts Tonight / How far will you go to get back home? / Written By / Adele SmaillAgainst a black and gold background  
Text: Finalist / Adele Smaill / No Ghosts Tonight / Nicholl Fellowships  / in Screenwriting.  
Underneath a small version of the Academy status against a gold triangle.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 23/09/2026
✨ PAGE Gold Winner ✨ – VOICELESS In 1890s Montana, a mute girl with an unsettling power escapes an abusive marriage and flees across the plains, joining a disillusioned preacher on a journey towards freedom or damnation. #ScreenPit #scriptsky #Fea #CWin #Dr #Wes #Su #Ad
Poster art for the screenplay Voiceless by David Dean. A woman with her hands over her mouth, against a background of trees. Photo by Leyla Həsənli.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 23/09/2026
Hammering the Like button on all the Screenpit posters that weren’t generated by AI. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 23/09/2026
✨ PAGE Gold Winner ✨ – VOICELESS In 1890s Montana, a mute girl with an unsettling power escapes an abusive marriage and flees across the plains, joining a disillusioned preacher on a journey towards freedom or damnation. #ScreenPit #scriptsky #Fea #CWin #Dr #Wes #Su #Ad
Poster art for the screenplay Voiceless by David Dean. A woman with her hands over her mouth, against a background of trees. Photo by Leyla Hesenli.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 19/09/2026
A little harsh, but probably fair. #scriptsky
An obviously fake film festival email notification: "Dear David,

Now that we've announced all placements for the 2026 script competition, I wanted to send you a quick note to tell you how much our team hated your script.

Your script almost didn't make the second round at all, and on reflection, probably shouldn't have. We hope this is demoralizing, as our team truly feels your writing lacks any value.

Please know that we printed out ten copies purely to burn them.

Sincerely,"
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 14/09/2026
My feature script VOICELESS... - Didn't place in AFF 2025 - Won Gold in PAGE that same year - Didn't place in Script Pipeline - Got a 5 on the Black List - Got a 7 on the Black List - Didn't advance in Sundance - Just made the 2nd round in AFF 2026 #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 11/09/2026
When you receive feedback on a script, do you want to know about typos? I seem to be a human typo detector, but I feel guilty mentioning them, like, "Thanks for sharing your deeply emotional narrative. Here's thirteen typos." Useful or insultingly nitpicky? #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 11/09/2026
One of my memories about the weeks following 9/11 was the collective belief among cultural commentators that movies had been forever changed, and that no longer would anyone in the West want to see large-scale violence on screen.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 07/09/2026
I have ethical concerns about plagiarism as much as anyone, but it's clearly not going away so we have a responsibility to get a seat at the table and help guarantee clean, conscientious plagiarism that *democratizes* theft.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 06/09/2026
Aside from the practical purpose, I also like CONTINUOUS for the reading experience. Scene headings imply a little mental reset. CONTINUOUS says, “Nope, stay in the moment.” #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 01/09/2026
It's AFF results time again... #scriptsky bsky.app/profile/cyno...
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 31/08/2026
Logline for "3.1415926535": "Brock 'Math' Matheson needs to beat the record for reciting Pi at the International Mathematical Symposium or his career's over. But there's a bomb in his brain that will explode if he takes too long between digits, and terrorists have taken his family." #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 31/08/2026
"44. Title consists entirely of a string of digits." This is why my action spec about reciting Pi to 1000 decimal places didn't sell. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 24/08/2026
Another bot engaging with writers as an inroad to promoting their paid service to create / read AI-generated screenplays. #scriptsky bsky.app/profile/scri...
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 20/08/2026
Maybe I'm weird in that I don't share early ideas for new projects. I like to get a solid version of what I'm aiming for (second draft at least) before bringing anyone else in and getting feedback. Could be I just don't have enough ideas I like to need help choosing between them... #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 15/08/2026
People who generate fiction with AI will never know the exhilaration of hating everything you write and then finally scraping out a half-sentence that isn't completely terrible and taking the rest of the day off. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 14/08/2026
This is making me realize that meeting people at festivals like AFF will become important just to confirm they're human. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 14/08/2026
Use your own discernment, but this "person" responded a lot in the intro thread yesterday, with all their contributions being AI-flavored replies of the form "Positive Feedback + Optional Emoji + Advice Pablum + Follow-up Question". #scriptsky bsky.app/profile/huto...
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 14/08/2026
Software engineers employ "rubberducking" (describing bugs to a rubber duck) as a way to prompt new insights and solve problems. For writing I do something similar by explaining my plot holes to a Lego Shakespeare. Hasn't helped a bit, but at least he's non-judgmental. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 13/08/2026
Now this is how you end a script... #scriptsky
Extract from David Lynch's unproduced Ronnie Rocket script:

We move with one little golden egg across the room to a blue lady with four arms who is doing a strange dance on a lilly pad. One arm stops dancing and reaches out.  A finger touches the one little golden egg.  The woman smiles and laughs.

BLUE WOMAN
Ronnie Rocket!

THE END
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 13/08/2026
David Lynch cares not for your scene headings. #scriptsky
Extract from David Lynch's unproduced Ronnie Rocket script:

MAIN CITY - NIGHT

Meanwhile, at the hospital, two men, DR. DAN PINK, and DR. BOB PLATINUM, sneak down to the hospital basement and look into each room, searching. When they find Ronald's room they enter. They move toward Ronald and he starts a high scream. They muffle him with their gloved hands, unhook his electrical apparatus, scoop him up and steal him away from the hospital.

They carry Ronald in an old sedan through dark streets to an old building. They go to a service elevator and travel to one of the top floors to a laboratory which the two of them maintain. It is equipped with black massive electrical appliances and gadgets. The walls are a yellow-green and all is lit by blue glowing fluorescent lights giving the place a scientific eeriness.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 12/08/2026
Me and my taste in fictional characters.
Frederica Greenhill Yang from Legend Of The Galactic Heroes saying, "You might have killed millions of people, but at the very least, you made me happy."
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 09/08/2026
Index cards on a corkboard. Colored sharpies on a whiteboard. These are my favorite ways to feel like a professional writer while completely failing to solve these goddamn fucking plot holes. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 07/08/2026
Just checked my manly bookshelf and sure enough my copy of Crime And Punishment has up and vanished.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 06/08/2026
PAGE Awards now promoting $250 AI-generated slop-boards. #scriptsky
Screenshot of example $250 "Pitch Board" using an "advanced suite of AI tools" to generated shitty imagery of your likely AI-generated script.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 06/08/2026
Instead of Liked By, they should let you choose, from a dropdown, the users you would have liked to have Liked your post. Then it could list their names under "Not Liked By", and perhaps they'd feel some shame.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 03/08/2026
Needed to do a bunch of rewriting this weekend, so naturally I ignored that and read six drafts of Moneyball instead. #scriptsky
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Tess is Surviving the Horrors @mothmother.com · 01/08/2026
I started getting followed by some "film festivals" and "writing festivals" and thought "oh, these are cool!" Then I looked a little closer. They're all part of a network that preys on writers, charging us for reviews, and feeding our stuff into slop generators. So I made a list.👋🏻🖕🏻😠
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 02/08/2026
Apparently at the highest Scientology levels you develop the ability to tell when a film shifts from production logos to the actual movie.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 29/07/2026
Every morning, the first order of business on social media is to find out what topic is fueling The Discourse and the Hot Takes that day, and then vow to avoid it for a couple of weeks.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 29/07/2026
"The Chamber of Guf is opening" from End of Evangelion.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 25/07/2026
Thrift stores are about 80% Gaiman at this point.
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 23/07/2026
About to see a performance of Twelfth Night. I hear this guy’s good so I’m hoping I can sneakily crib some dialogue for my action spec. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 21/07/2026
I’d have this draft finished but I suddenly needed to rethink and standardize the file and directory structure for all my projects. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 21/07/2026
Jimothy’s about a week from being Milkshake Ducked and no-one is ready.
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Ian McQue @ianmcque.bsky.social · 18/07/2026
A new example of Meta shithousery. This is a post of mine on Instagram (left). Click the dots top right and this advisory note appears (right). I never use ai, never will. Why would they do this? Who benefits? Are they just trying to make viewers think everything is genAI so they just accept it?
A digital painting I posted on instagram. I didn’t use ai to create it. An Instagram advisory saying the artwork in the post is ‘likely made with AI’
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 16/07/2026
I wasn’t convinced by your political point, but then you expressed it through a character in an AI-generated Peanuts comic, and…
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 15/07/2026
Seeing a few familiar names on this year's list. Congrats to all. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 14/07/2026
Best of luck to those waiting for the PAGE QFs tomorrow. Having not entered, I exist in a state of serene detachment. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 05/07/2026
Couldn't figure out this plot problem, so I simply went for a walk, and... ...still couldn't figure out. So then I just took a shower, and wouldn't you know it...? Still couldn't figure it out. Now sulking and watching "Saw". #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 25/06/2026
Mike Makowsky mentioned this on Scriptnotes a little while back, but I just happened on his "Death By Lightning" script, and if you're a screenplay formatting nerd it's fascinating to see such unusually precise line lengths. An absolutely ruthless orphan massacre on every page. #scriptsky
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David Dean @cynohead.com · 23/06/2026
To hell with your rules. #scriptsky
We see the movie CUT TO:
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