supposing... I were to seek attention in exchange for talking about myself. :3
cattytail
@cattytail.bsky.social
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my identity is whatever you'd find in a woodland meadow. just an impartial lil witness, dwai. no minors! 18+ only! gonna be very horny over here! DMs open but you know! don't be a loser. she/her, 30! bi ace, big switch, huge brat.
![Discord screenshot of my livereactions interspersed with quotes.
> crying during "sex"
👀 in part for the crying but inescapably for the quotations around "sex"
> "but when we're together, it's like... it's all about me. I never really hear about what you want."
gosh the dynamic of "people-pleaser who's shy and insecure (and thus extremely vulnerable)" is a classic but I love it when it's really explored to a realistic depth. it makes it all the more devastating
> Not yet. She had to at least retain a *little* dignity.
i for one am pleased to anticipate this as a story that will be supportive of these goals.
this breakup is awful. it's so painful, and raw, and pathetic, and I only want good things for delisa. it would be very upsetting for bad things to happen to this character, which is why it's going to be horrible and hot when they do.
> Ten short of the cost of Vilma's coffee.
GDJKHGJKFGH THIS IS SO MEAN
> "Why?" Jocelyn's grin widened. "Because that's the fifth time this year I've stood behind that counter and watched as you've brought a girl here, and she's dumped you. And the fifth time you've chosen to be totally magnanimous and forgiving and whatever the fuck, and let her walk away feeling good about herself while you...
LMAO i actually whispered NOOO out loud
FIVE TIMES
extremely normal about jocelyn's unbelievable rudeness, and her taking delisa's drink, and the unbuttoning of the shirt.
[a lengthy silence as i read with composure and dignity]](https://cdn.bsky.app/img/feed_thumbnail/plain/did:plc:qyjecwlag3t7g34ykfu4puqz/bafkreicazxa5kdwvl5tx3pnrv56pug76i67n443r4wtz6hdyfalrsur2fa)
![another screenshot!
<s>it occurs to me that when delisa gets this horny she can't actually risk standing up and letting this get noticed so she really is just stuck here</s>
[the scene is eliciting the desired emotional response in the reader]
the dialogue is so cutting and mean and I love the choice of dialogue tags and tone indicators. like, "a husky giggle" is simultaneously playful and kind of threatening. same with the emotional indicators to the actions, like "artlessly humping against such-and-such", "grunting pathetically"
I love how nonstandard the domme dynamics in your stories are. the sub here is literally getting seduced into being meaner and yet she couldn't seem more pathetic.
and YEAH THE SHIT-TALK YOUR EX PART IS DEVASTATING
> "You’re sweet, Delisa, but it’s not because you’re a good person. You’re as petty and resentful and hateful as anyone else, you just hide it because you’re scared."
GOSH.
(quoting my previous statement about powerful tone)
like this
this is what i mean
oh my goodness!!](https://cdn.bsky.app/img/feed_thumbnail/plain/did:plc:qyjecwlag3t7g34ykfu4puqz/bafkreibctnev77lp3ftxqjqfopcy5klirz3tdjtlozwftmawg2vuozvhea)
