04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 14/09/2026Anyways, it's late in the night where I'm at, so I am stopping here for now. Tomorrow I could look into more cases. (In a sense, it's also an opportunity for me to learn a little bit about JP -> EN translations) 110
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 14/09/2026Obviously those two translations are not the only ones, but it's 2 examples (where one keeps your original sentence structure, and another which splits it into two sentences. Both mean the same thing, and are more natural than a direct/literal translation) 111
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 14/09/2026"things to wear" is a very literal/direct translation. It's technically not wrong, but it's unnatural. making 着るもの -> "clothing" would be more natural in this case. "It's a clothing shop where they sell clothes" or it can be 2 separate sentences "It's a clothing store. They sell clothes here" 110
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 14/09/2026How I would translate it, would be more like "The slide? It's for playing on" In the second image, the main thing "It's a clothing store where something to wear is sold" in English, this is unnatural (不自然な) 110
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 14/09/2026Next, "It's a slide right? **To play**", now in this bubble, the sentence "to play" is also not natural (It's not a complete sentence). Also "it's a slide right"? that part makes it sound like the person answering is not confident in what the object is. 110
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 14/09/2026So, starting with the first image "I have a lot of things... **to want** to ask you", "to want" is wrong here grammatically. A more correct translation would be: "I have a lot of things I want to ask you" ( 聞きたいこと -> things I want to ask ) 110
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 14/09/2026Hello, so I saw this post, and I can tell some of the translations which could be improved. (Small note before I start, so, English is my second language, so I might not be able to explain the rules in depth, and I don't know Japanese, I know some basics.) 110
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 11/08/2026It would be great if the series would be licensed again. Maybe by someone like Irodori Sakura. (I have bought about 80% of Sakura's yuri manga). And I don't mind having multiple copies of the series I like (Japanese and English). I guess I could also do more pixiv fanbox. 著者の幸運を祈ります。 000
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 11/08/2026But Burst Crisis de-listed them at the start of 2024... So I bought the Japanese versions on DLsite ( In my opinion DLsite is AWFUL. I hate it. Horrible UX ). However, DLsite has region blocking, so I could not buy all of them, only the ones which were available in my region. (Season 2, Ep: 1,,3,4) 100
04zfz.bsky.social @04zfz.bsky.social · 11/08/2026There are, from browsing reddit, I have seen people enjoying NSFW yuri works, including your Nadeshiko Hiyori. I too like it. I like your art, I also enjoy the H scenes. The thing I find sad/unfortunate is that I cannot buy the English releases anymore... :( (Burst crisis had licensed them before) 100
