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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 10/04/2026

It's time for my first #10Queries! Thanks for your patience, #RevPit writers. Ready to guess which one is yours!? 👀 @reviseresub.bsky.social

Closeup of LA ANUNCIACIÓN painting by Jan van Eyck (Johannes van Eyck). A woman in blue raises her hand above a book.

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 10/04/2026

My writers will receive an email soon confirming which anonymous feedback in this thread belongs to them. This feedback is meant to help all writers with their query materials, whether it belongs to you or not. Each submission below is labeled with Q (query letter) and P (opening pages).

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 10/04/2026

Q1: Great pitch. Bio is spot on. Why is MC’s biz suddenly failing? What about love interest does MC like? Would love line about MC’s arc, too. P1: Punchy writing is solid genre fit. Arc is hinted at nicely. Could use a little more present action to balance out inner monologue and backstory.

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