iiinova — where your digital self keeps evolving

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025

QL2: Adult Fantasy. Intriguing world and solid themes. Unclear though what the inciting incident is or what MC's specific story goal is. What is their plan and what is this story's primary conflict? Don't forget to add personalization, genre and audience, too.

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025

P2: Worldbuilding is interesting and not too heavy. Good character internality. Not sure first scene is the best story starter because though it hints at MC's guilt, it may not raise big enough questions. Could include more context or be weaved in as backstory later on.

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Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025

QL3: MG Horror. Really cool concept and execution. Good quick cast intros. Might be helpful to know MC's age. Wonder if stakes could be clearer: are these death stakes or not?

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