Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025It's time for my first round of #RevPit #10Queries, writers. Do you spot your story? 👀 QL= Query Letter P= Pages @reviseresub.bsky.social 1417
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025QL1: Adult Historical. Interesting speculative premise. Good comps. P2 of the summary may not be necessary. The QL could use work to make the MC's core want and flaw clearer. And how does time traveling affect their new life in this world rather than just being born into this life? 130
Hannah Kate Kelley @kelleyeditorial.bsky.social · 11/04/2025P1: Exciting stuff. More set-up could help the pacing feel less sudden and give more insight into MC's flaw, past, and personality. What is their scene goal in first scene? What is the reason for their quick demise? 140
