I'd suggest the following edit:
"The defendants failed to disclose the cumulative effect of their standard billing practices on the number of talk-time minutes granted in each rate plan they offered."
Can you spot the flaws in this sentence from a brief?
“In the case at bar, the defendants failed to disclose the cumulative effect of its standard billing practices on the number of actual airtime/talk time minutes contained in each and every rate plan.”
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Can you spot the style flaws in this sentence from a legal brief?
“In the case at bar, the defendants failed to disclose the cumulative effect of its standard billing practices on the number of actua...